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Jagmandar Dass Jain

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Appears to be a promotional (auto)biography, and fails to establish notability as per WP:BIO. This is related to AfD Harsh Vardhan Jain. -Addionne (talk) 18:48, 19 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

KINDLY SEE THE TALK PAGE OF ARTICLE AND THEN YOU WILL FIND THE CORRECTIONS ALREAY DONE LONG BACK.

Talk:Jagmandar Dass Jain From Wikipedia, the free encyclopediaJump to: navigation, search Please improve the English in this article. Deb (talk) 19:41, 5 October 2010 (UTC)

Contents [hide] 1 Article 1.1 Article Improvement 1.2 Thanks 1.3 Review 2 Jagmandar Dass Jain

[edit] Article Kindly guide regarding the clean up, Please. Regards HARRYMAGIC (talk) 22:27, 5 October 2010 (UTC)

[edit] Article Improvement Kindly see that Ground Zero, has done the corrections for improvement of the Article, RegardsHARRYMAGIC (talk) 09:12, 6 October 2010 (UTC)

Examples of errors: Jagmandar Dass Jain is founder of Jain Rolling Mills & Jain Group of Companies in the year 1965 with his elder brother Danveer Seth Om Prakash Jain.

He is a businessman, political figure, religious person and a devotee for helping the needy & poor people of the society.

Born in Village Rabra (Sonipat), Haryana (India) in 1940 in a very simple and quite - Jain Family having limited resources. He did his primary education from the village School and Secondary High School from Jain Higher Secondary School, Daryaganj, Delhi.

As he was a very bright student, so in 1962 he completed his Civil Engineering in First Division from Hewett Polytechnic in early 1960s, situated in city Lucknow, Uttar Pradesh, India.

His first wife, Smt Indira Devi Jain (daughter of Shri Kashmiri Lal Jain, Secretary - Rajya Sabha, Parliament of India early 1960s), died in 1986 due to cancer. It was a saying that no one can go empty hand who knocked her door for help or donations. Yash Dev Jain & Harsh Vardhan Jain are children of Late Smt Indira Devi Jain. After her death Mr Jain married again with Dr Vidyut Jain belonging to a reputed Jain family in 1986 as his younger son was vey young so a mother was needed for the well bringing-up of the boy and she proved to be the best mother for the boy.

His younger son Harsh Vardhan Jain is known as Mr FIXIT. He is mostly in news regarding the East India Company] & Takeover man of Blackburn Rovers FC in England. He is considered amongst one of the youngest entrepreneurs throughout the globe. He is Fellow of Royal Society for the encouragement of Arts, Manufactures & Commerce (FRSA) England.

In early 1960s he worked for Indian Military Engineering Services for two years but an urge to do something on his own prodded him to find newer avenues for his progress, In the year 1965 with his elder brother Late Seth Om Prakash Jain, he took up Iron & Steel business.

If you can correct all the above errors, we may start to make progress. Deb (talk) 11:56, 6 October 2010 (UTC)

[edit] Thanks Really it is very kind enough to get help from your side, now the article will be improved accordinging to the guidelines provided by you. Looking forward to correct the errors. RegardsHARRYMAGIC (talk) 12:33, 6 October 2010 (UTC)

[edit] Review It will be highly appreciated if you review the article please.HARRYMAGIC (talk) 19:37, 6 October 2010 (UTC)

I see a great improvement. However, there are some Wikipedia:Neutral point of view issues which need to be addressed. Do I need to highlight these? Deb (talk) 11:45, 7 October 2010 (UTC)

Thanking you it will be again a great help if you point out some more mistakes so that the article can reach the standards of others. RegardsHARRYMAGIC (talk) 11:55, 7 October 2010 (UTC)

You are a great source and think tank, and can help new articles to get improved.HARRYMAGIC (talk) 11:56, 7 October 2010 (UTC)

[edit] Jagmandar Dass Jain Finally all mistakes are been removed as per your guidance and as per your instructions the TAG is removed as English language is been corrected in the article and also done accordingly. Thanks for your continuous help and support. RegardsHARRYMAGIC (talk) 12:34, 7 October 2010 (UTC)

Article - Jagmandar Dass Jain & Harsh Vardhan Jain others.

Kindly see the Articles in Category:Indian businesspeople may be more than 80% will be deleted due to one or other reasons.

Kindly see the corrections been done in the Articles contributed Harsh Vardhan Jain, Jagmandar Dass Jain etc.

(Removed personal attack -Addionne (talk) 19:29, 19 October 2010 (UTC))[reply]

ThanksHARRYMAGIC (talk) 19:20, 19 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

HARRYMAGIC (talk) 19:42, 19 October 2010 (UTC)Article Harsh Vardhan Jain, Jagmandar Dass Jain Kindly see the Articles in Category:Indian businesspeople may be more than 80% will be deleted due to one or other reasons.[reply]

Kindly see the corrections been done in the Articles contributed Harsh Vardhan Jain, Jagmandar Dass Jain etc.

The reason is not known but after 2 mths of Article been posted in Wikipedia, May be due to Contribution by Indians in Wikipedia is not been liked by you, so best of luck.

ThanksHARRYMAGIC (talk) 19:13, 19 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

No I dont want to report or dispute with anyone. I have not done any Personal Attacks. Only request I made was that there was a confusion today morning by User:NawlinWiki and then others followed it too. I want to express is that approx 4500 view for the Articles and if there was any incorrect information then it would have been come in notice long back.

Explaination of Confusion where User:Nawlinwiki expressed that Article was Deleted earlier :

17:42, October 19, 2010 NawlinWiki (talk | contribs) deleted "Harsh Vardhan Jain" ‎ (A7: No explanation of the subject's significance (real person, animal, organization, or web content))

01:12, October 4, 2010 Deb (talk | contribs) deleted "Harsh Vardhan Jain" ‎ (G6: Deleted to make way for move)

But, as on 4 Oct 2010 it was a redirect done by User:Deb, No deletion was done. For further confirmation kindly contact User:Deb.

ThanksHARRYMAGIC (talk) 19:42, 19 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]