User contributions for 69.17.65.107

8 August 2013

• 23:3123:31, 8 August 2013 diff hist +3‎ World history (field) ‎ →‎Establishment of the field: link was to the wrong Toynbee. Updated it to the one who died in 1975, not his uncle who died in 1883.

30 July 2013

• 02:4202:42, 30 July 2013 diff hist −3‎ Scopes trial ‎ Scopes' demeanor may or may not have been "purposeful" when he violated the law, but it is certain that he did it "purposely". "Purposefully" describes a person's appearance and manner. "Purposely" means doing a thing on purpose, as Scopes did. Tag: Visual edit

14 July 2013

• 19:3419:34, 14 July 2013 diff hist +85‎ Talk:New Brighton Tower ‎ →‎What about the Beatles in Hamburg? Their Hamburg dates must be more than the 27 dates at the New Brighton Tower(?)
• 19:2819:28, 14 July 2013 diff hist +1,396‎ Talk:New Brighton Tower ‎ →‎What about the Beatles in Hamburg? Their Hamburg dates must be more than the 27 dates at the New Brighton Tower(?): new section

29 June 2013

• 12:1212:12, 29 June 2013 diff hist +156‎ Caesar III ‎ →‎Description

28 June 2013

• 20:3420:34, 28 June 2013 diff hist +38‎ Caesar III ‎ →‎Editor: editor was released weeks after game, not years PLUS added heavengames.com as having editor for download

27 June 2013

• 14:5914:59, 27 June 2013 diff hist +527‎ Talk:National Council on Teacher Quality ‎ →‎I do not know how to tag things and am too sick and tired (literally) to find out: new section

25 June 2013

• 08:5008:50, 25 June 2013 diff hist −2‎ Silvio Berlusconi prostitution trial ‎ →‎Arrest of El Mahroug: copy edit: "jewelry" was misspelled

2 April 2013

• 08:2508:25, 2 April 2013 diff hist +1‎ Staunton and Parkersburg Turnpike ‎ →‎Trans-Allegheny region of Virginia: Copy Edit: changed "...passengers as freight." to "...passengers and freight."

1 April 2013

• 23:0723:07, 1 April 2013 diff hist −1‎ Federation ‎ →‎Federations: Copy Edit: changed "...through its history" to "...during its history"

31 March 2013

• 21:2421:24, 31 March 2013 diff hist +2‎ Silver Lake, Los Angeles ‎ →‎Geography: Copy edit of photo caption so it won't be as cryptic to non-Californians.

30 March 2013

• 22:0422:04, 30 March 2013 diff hist +1‎ The Trap (British TV series) ‎ →‎1. "F**k You Buddy" (11 March 2007): Corrected typo in section title: changed "You Buddy" to "Your Buddy"
• 16:0616:06, 30 March 2013 diff hist +7‎ List of recurring The Simpsons characters ‎ →‎Dewey Largo: Changed the 'foil' link to point to much more appropriate Foil_(literature) article, instead of Double_act article

20 February 2013

• 20:0920:09, 20 February 2013 diff hist +61‎ N File talk:Ridge Shushi battle.JPG ‎ No road apparent in the picture current

16 December 2012

• 06:2606:26, 16 December 2012 diff hist −1‎ Harry Pierpont ‎ copy edit. changed to "list composed by" instead of "list comprised by"

30 August 2012

• 09:4509:45, 30 August 2012 diff hist +13‎ Memory hole ‎ →‎See also

1 March 2012

• 00:3200:32, 1 March 2012 diff hist +4,454‎ Talk:2004 Haitian coup d'état ‎ →‎Motives: I strongly disagree. I refute with facts, plus a little bit of logic. I point out NPOV and ad hominem attack.

11 February 2012

• 10:0410:04, 11 February 2012 diff hist +3‎ James Jesus Angleton ‎ →‎Golitsyn and Nosenko: Pash was a U.S. Army officer, not Marine, according to wikipedia's biographical article on him

16 November 2011

• 05:5905:59, 16 November 2011 diff hist +2‎ Operation Queen ‎ →‎Aftermath: minor copy edit - corrected two instances of the word "planners" being misspelled

30 October 2011

• 10:2410:24, 30 October 2011 diff hist +86‎ ARPANET ‎ →‎History: minor style edits of 2nd & 3rd graphs in the History section, for clarity (no changes to meaning or substance)
• 00:3300:33, 30 October 2011 diff hist −1‎ Dynamic Analysis and Replanning Tool ‎ →‎Development and introduction: very small copy edit - moved a comma and deleted another
• 00:2500:25, 30 October 2011 diff hist −5‎ Robert Kahn (computer scientist) ‎ →‎The Internet: very small copy edits - changed "referred together as" to "referred to as" and added a missing comma in the section's last sentence

29 July 2011

• 00:1000:10, 29 July 2011 diff hist +2‎ Sport bike ‎ minor copy edit - replaced the word 'consummate' with the word 'commensurate'

31 May 2011

• 22:2122:21, 31 May 2011 diff hist +1,687‎ Talk:MV Mavi Marmara ‎ →‎It was a clash: As featured on the Main Page, there is a strong bias in favor of the right-wing government in Israel

24 May 2011

• 18:5818:58, 24 May 2011 diff hist +2,311‎ Talk:James Armistead Lafayette ‎ →‎Middle and Surname

11 May 2011

• 23:4023:40, 11 May 2011 diff hist +453‎ Talk:Mussel Slough Tragedy ‎ →‎poor wording/POV in lead

5 April 2011

• 22:1522:15, 5 April 2011 diff hist 0‎ Cathy Hughes ‎ spelling correction: should be "Quiet" Storm, not "Quite" Storm

23 March 2011

• 07:4607:46, 23 March 2011 diff hist +27‎ Winchester Cathedral (song) ‎ slight factual correction. according to all music guide, john carter sang through his hands to imitate the megaphone sound. he did not use a megaphone.

22 March 2011

• 19:5219:52, 22 March 2011 diff hist +759‎ Talk:Lychgate ‎ →‎St. George's Church in Beckenham, England (now a part of london): new section

7 March 2011

• 11:5211:52, 7 March 2011 diff hist −1‎ Operation Torch ‎ →‎Political results: corrected misspelling of "exile"

25 February 2011

• 07:2307:23, 25 February 2011 diff hist +525‎ Bamboozled ‎ added mention of The Producers, which uses a somewhat similar plot. it hardly seems fair that Bamboozled made so much less money.

26 December 2010

• 08:3608:36, 26 December 2010 diff hist +4‎ Laura Keene ‎ copy edit: should be "aid" instead of "aide"

20 December 2010

• 22:2222:22, 20 December 2010 diff hist +3‎ President's Intelligence Advisory Board ‎ →‎PFIAB Membership under president George W. Bush: fixed hyperlink to point to David E. Jeremiah
• 21:4921:49, 20 December 2010 diff hist +976‎ Talk:Intrado ‎ →‎Removed NPOV: - Unintentional humor? As part of cleaning up entire article, there should probably be a section for the criticism that was deleted
• 21:3121:31, 20 December 2010 diff hist +897‎ Talk:Intrado ‎ →‎Wiki Article or Ad?

14 December 2010

• 11:2711:27, 14 December 2010 diff hist +863‎ Talk:Johnny Holliday ‎ →‎Plane crash?: new section
• 10:5710:57, 14 December 2010 diff hist 0‎ Root Boy Slim ‎ →‎The Sex Change Band: copy edit - should be "adopted" not "adapted"

13 December 2010

• 21:1021:10, 13 December 2010 diff hist +1,315‎ Talk:Islam ‎ →‎Very first sentence is very not NPOV.: new section

2 December 2010

• 23:5223:52, 2 December 2010 diff hist +425‎ Talk:Investment banking ‎ →‎History???: new section
• 23:4923:49, 2 December 2010 diff hist +4‎ Wikipedia:Sandbox ‎No edit summary
• 23:4923:49, 2 December 2010 diff hist −71‎ Wikipedia:Sandbox ‎No edit summary
• 20:0620:06, 2 December 2010 diff hist +336‎ False flag ‎ →‎See also

19 March 2010

• 22:0622:06, 19 March 2010 diff hist 0‎ Hope (Watts) ‎ →‎Path to Obama fame: copy edit - adopted not adapted, as used in this sentence

20 February 2010

• 23:0723:07, 20 February 2010 diff hist −1‎ My Way killings ‎ →‎Measures to prevent violence: copy edit - "defuse" not "diffuse" is the correct usage. a pretty common error, with a near-homonym. by the way, to an American this whole article is surprising

1 February 2010

• 10:4710:47, 1 February 2010 diff hist +4‎ Củ Chi tunnels ‎ →‎U.S. campaigns against the tunnels: copy edit - MACV sands for "Military Assistance Command, Vietnam" not Military Assistance Group (Vietnam), created link, units not unit(s)

9 January 2010

• 23:1823:18, 9 January 2010 diff hist −9‎ Special Warfare Diving and Salvage ‎ very minor copy edits in list of various missions

21 November 2009

• 13:1813:18, 21 November 2009 diff hist +23‎ Silver City (2004 film) ‎ →‎Plot: clarified that Pilager was fishing when he hooked a corpse
• 13:1413:14, 21 November 2009 diff hist +56‎ Silver City (2004 film) ‎ →‎Characters: minor copy edits