User contributions for TypoBoy

14 July 2024

• 19:2619:26, 14 July 2024 diff hist +3‎ George Sylvester Viereck ‎ →‎Early life: rephrase to make it clear that the phrases "in 1870" and "eight years later" do not refer to the same events. wikilink The Importance of Being Earnest current

6 July 2024

• 03:4603:46, 6 July 2024 diff hist +10‎ Diamond Jim Brady ‎ →‎Personal life: fix dangling modifier (it is the hospital, not the department of urology, that is now known as NewYork–Presbyterian Hospital) current

4 July 2024

• 14:4114:41, 4 July 2024 diff hist −2‎ Elio Chacón ‎ →‎'¡La tengo!': remove unwanted commas. We aren't trying to say that Yo La Tengo are the ONLY band. So we need "Yo La Tengo" to modify "band", rather than being in apposition. Also, edited graf 2 of the section to use Chacón's name rather than a pronoun for the first mention of the paragraph current

1 July 2024

• 00:5800:58, 1 July 2024 diff hist +11‎ Watershed (broadcasting) ‎ →‎Chile: consistent usage: "watershed" means the beginning (not the whole) of the adult-programming period

29 June 2024

• 16:3716:37, 29 June 2024 diff hist −13‎ Atlantic (yacht) ‎ It seems clear that the text "(yacht designer)" was not meant to be displayed, in this sentence that already says that Hoyt designed the yacht, but rather as disambiguation in the title of a future article about Hoyt. But how many Frederick Maxfield Hoyts are there? [None, so far, on Wikipedia.] I made the undisambiguated name a link, which a future editor may wish to undo. But, either way, we don't need to explain that the yacht was designed by a yacht designer. current

28 June 2024

• 19:2219:22, 28 June 2024 diff hist −10‎ Addison Hutton ‎ →‎Architectural Works (partial listing): It is not necessary to explain that Addison Hutton was an architect in the context of this article about Hutton current

26 June 2024

• 18:4518:45, 26 June 2024 diff hist −5‎ Pamela Smart ‎ →‎Early life: Use simple past to describe events of the subject's college years in the section about her college years. Past perfect is for events that took place before the time being discussed.
• 18:3318:33, 26 June 2024 diff hist −1‎ m Oaks Cloister ‎ →‎Restoration (2002–2012): remove unwanted comma current
• 18:3318:33, 26 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ m Oaks Cloister ‎ →‎Restoration (2002–2012): remove unwanted comma; add missing comma
• 18:3118:31, 26 June 2024 diff hist −134‎ Oaks Cloister ‎ copy-edit lede; correct spelling of "capitol"; correct comma usage; correct coordinates (we were off by more than a mile!)
• 18:1918:19, 26 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Oaks Cloister ‎ →‎State Historical marker (2005): Spell "capitol" correctly, and abbreviate Pennsylvania "Pa.", both as on the marker. (https://www.google.com/maps/@40.0289004,-75.1854371,3a,15y,346.12h,83.43t/data=!3m7!1e1!3m5!1s7Q2iyZXVGKQnlau-H4xXmA!2e0!6shttps:%2F%2Fstreetviewpixels-pa.googleapis.com%2Fv1%2Fthumbnail%3Fpanoid%3D7Q2iyZXVGKQnlau-H4xXmA%26cb_client%3Dmaps_sv.tactile.gps%26w%3D203%26h%3D100%26yaw%3D342.9089%26pitch%3D0%26thumbfov%3D100!7i16384!8i8192?hl=en&coh=205409&entry=ttu).

25 June 2024

• 03:1103:11, 25 June 2024 diff hist +1‎ m Gödel's Loophole ‎ →‎Background: add missing comma

20 June 2024

• 22:2122:21, 20 June 2024 diff hist +4‎ Battle of Stalingrad ‎ →‎Background: It's either "Case Blue" or "Fall Blau". We were stuck halfway saying "Case Blau", which sounds like a kind of blue cheese

19 June 2024

• 20:4320:43, 19 June 2024 diff hist −35‎ Quintipartite Deed ‎ →‎Keith Line: Removing the clause "which created the two territories". It is not necessary to include this aside explaining what the Quintipartite Deed was, in the context of this article about the Quintipartite Deed. current

15 June 2024

• 00:5600:56, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Yokohama City University ‎ →‎Alumni: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:5500:55, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Shinoda ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:5400:54, 15 June 2024 diff hist −1‎ Genju no Seiza ‎ →‎Humans: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:5300:53, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ List of My Bride is a Mermaid episodes ‎ →‎Episode list: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:5200:52, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Tom Clancy's Rainbow Six: Take-Down – Missions in Korea ‎ →‎Plot: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 00:5100:51, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Hiroyuki Jo ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 00:5100:51, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Me & My Brothers ‎ →‎Other characters: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:5000:50, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ HoneyComing ‎ →‎Supporting characters: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:5000:50, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Masaya Nakamura (businessman) ‎ →‎Acquisition of Atari Japan: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:4900:49, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Auto Race (Japanese sport) ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:4700:47, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ List of One Piece characters ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 00:4500:45, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ List of Alex Rider characters ‎ →‎Nikolei Drevin: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 00:4400:44, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Shoichi Arai ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:4300:43, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ GoGo Tomago ‎ →‎Fictional character biography: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:4100:41, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Chocolate (2008 film) ‎ →‎Plot: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:4000:40, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ List of Hayate the Combat Butler episodes ‎ →‎Hayate the Combat Butler (2007–2008): "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:3900:39, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ List of Bokurano characters ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:3800:38, 15 June 2024 diff hist −11‎ Tekkonkinkreet ‎ →‎Plot: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 00:3600:36, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Jirō Asada ‎ →‎Career: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 00:3500:35, 15 June 2024 diff hist +10‎ Sex & Fury ‎ →‎Plot: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 00:3300:33, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ A Stranger of Mine ‎ →‎Plot: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 00:3300:33, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ List of Predator (franchise) characters ‎ →‎Hanzo: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:3300:33, 15 June 2024 diff hist −14‎ My-HiME Destiny ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:3200:32, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ X-Men (film series) ‎ →‎The Wolverine (2013): "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 00:3100:31, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Timeline of Japanese history ‎ →‎Reiwa period (Since 2019): "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 00:3100:31, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Happy! (sports manga) ‎ →‎Characters: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:3000:30, 15 June 2024 diff hist +6‎ List of Zombie-Loan characters ‎ →‎Otsu Sawatari: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:3000:30, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Shinjuku Incident ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:2800:28, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Gangs in the United States ‎ →‎Organized crime gangs: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 00:2600:26, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Black Tiger (professional wrestling) ‎ →‎Origins: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:2500:25, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Return of the Street Fighter ‎ →‎Premise: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.

13 June 2024

• 03:4003:40, 13 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ m Michael Swango ‎ copy edit current
• 03:3203:32, 13 June 2024 diff hist −1‎ m 2018 Berlin antisemitic attack ‎ →‎Incident: no comma between, a preposition and its object

12 June 2024

• 17:3817:38, 12 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Rosal, Sutherland ‎ →‎Town: change "ring dyke" to "ring dike". The former sounds like somebody you would buy jewelry from. Tag: Reverted
• 17:0717:07, 12 June 2024 diff hist −20‎ m Garrett Stubbs ‎ →‎Early and personal life: Change "his younger brother C.J." to "C.J." because we called C.J. "his younger brother" in the last graf, and because there's no occurrence of "Garrett" in this graf for "his" to refer to, and the subject of the preceeding sentence is "both Stubbs brothers".

8 June 2024

• 00:3900:39, 8 June 2024 diff hist −4‎ Aviation call signs ‎ →‎Military: A tactical call aign can indicate the mission of the flight, or an aircraft's position in a formation, or both. The conjunction we want is "or".