User contributions for TypoBoy

16 August 2024

• 20:3920:39, 16 August 2024 diff hist −3‎ Jack Ruby ‎ →‎Early life and career: There's no point calling it "Dallas, Texas" after we've called it "Dallas" several times. Linking to the Dallas article (which, of course, names the state) just in case anybody is confuised current

13 August 2024

• 21:0521:05, 13 August 2024 diff hist −8‎ m Schwalbe Tires ‎ fix run-on sentence current

9 August 2024

• 18:0218:02, 9 August 2024 diff hist +2‎ Javelin throw ‎ →‎Rules and competitions: copy edit -- we were saying "the tip first strikes the ground with its tip"

31 July 2024

• 19:5419:54, 31 July 2024 diff hist +3‎ Operation Sea Orbit ‎ edit photo caption: fix misspelling of "Bainbridge"; change "Task Force ONE" to "Task Force One", to be consistent with other occurrences in the page; rephrase for flow current
• 02:4502:45, 31 July 2024 diff hist +3‎ m Fantome (schooner) ‎ →‎Loss current
• 02:4202:42, 31 July 2024 diff hist −84‎ Fantome (schooner) ‎ copy edit lede to put the 1927 part before the 1969 part

23 July 2024

• 23:1923:19, 23 July 2024 diff hist +4‎ Andrew Jackson ‎ →‎Early life and education: add missing conjunction (to join the three verbs Jackson "learned to" do, namely "read",
• 00:2000:20, 23 July 2024 diff hist −13‎ m Pennsbury Manor ‎No edit summary current
• 00:1800:18, 23 July 2024 diff hist +4‎ m Lillehammer affair ‎ change "a Moroccan waiter and brother of the French musician Chico Bouchikhi" to "a Moroccan waiter and the brother of the French musician Chico Bouchikhi". "Brother" needs its own article; otherwise we're calling him "a Moroccan brother of the French musician Chico Bouchikhi", which is ridiculous. current

19 July 2024

• 00:2400:24, 19 July 2024 diff hist −1‎ Paul Philippe Cret ‎ Cret was not a Philadelphian. He was Lyonnais. But he lived and worked in Philadelphia, so he was a Philadelphia architect.

15 July 2024

• 03:1703:17, 15 July 2024 diff hist +3‎ m Gangnam Style ‎ →‎Background and release: add missing conjunction to join the two things that "people are", namely "trendy" and "hip"

14 July 2024

• 19:2619:26, 14 July 2024 diff hist +3‎ George Sylvester Viereck ‎ →‎Early life: rephrase to make it clear that the phrases "in 1870" and "eight years later" do not refer to the same events. wikilink The Importance of Being Earnest current

6 July 2024

• 03:4603:46, 6 July 2024 diff hist +10‎ Diamond Jim Brady ‎ →‎Personal life: fix dangling modifier (it is the hospital, not the department of urology, that is now known as NewYork–Presbyterian Hospital) current

4 July 2024

• 14:4114:41, 4 July 2024 diff hist −2‎ Elio Chacón ‎ →‎'¡La tengo!': remove unwanted commas. We aren't trying to say that Yo La Tengo are the ONLY band. So we need "Yo La Tengo" to modify "band", rather than being in apposition. Also, edited graf 2 of the section to use Chacón's name rather than a pronoun for the first mention of the paragraph current

1 July 2024

• 00:5800:58, 1 July 2024 diff hist +11‎ Watershed (broadcasting) ‎ →‎Chile: consistent usage: "watershed" means the beginning (not the whole) of the adult-programming period

29 June 2024

• 16:3716:37, 29 June 2024 diff hist −13‎ Atlantic (yacht) ‎ It seems clear that the text "(yacht designer)" was not meant to be displayed, in this sentence that already says that Hoyt designed the yacht, but rather as disambiguation in the title of a future article about Hoyt. But how many Frederick Maxfield Hoyts are there? [None, so far, on Wikipedia.] I made the undisambiguated name a link, which a future editor may wish to undo. But, either way, we don't need to explain that the yacht was designed by a yacht designer. current

28 June 2024

• 19:2219:22, 28 June 2024 diff hist −10‎ Addison Hutton ‎ →‎Architectural Works (partial listing): It is not necessary to explain that Addison Hutton was an architect in the context of this article about Hutton current

26 June 2024

• 18:4518:45, 26 June 2024 diff hist −5‎ Pamela Smart ‎ →‎Early life: Use simple past to describe events of the subject's college years in the section about her college years. Past perfect is for events that took place before the time being discussed.
• 18:3318:33, 26 June 2024 diff hist −1‎ m Oaks Cloister ‎ →‎Restoration (2002–2012): remove unwanted comma current
• 18:3318:33, 26 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ m Oaks Cloister ‎ →‎Restoration (2002–2012): remove unwanted comma; add missing comma
• 18:3118:31, 26 June 2024 diff hist −134‎ Oaks Cloister ‎ copy-edit lede; correct spelling of "capitol"; correct comma usage; correct coordinates (we were off by more than a mile!)
• 18:1918:19, 26 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Oaks Cloister ‎ →‎State Historical marker (2005): Spell "capitol" correctly, and abbreviate Pennsylvania "Pa.", both as on the marker. (https://www.google.com/maps/@40.0289004,-75.1854371,3a,15y,346.12h,83.43t/data=!3m7!1e1!3m5!1s7Q2iyZXVGKQnlau-H4xXmA!2e0!6shttps:%2F%2Fstreetviewpixels-pa.googleapis.com%2Fv1%2Fthumbnail%3Fpanoid%3D7Q2iyZXVGKQnlau-H4xXmA%26cb_client%3Dmaps_sv.tactile.gps%26w%3D203%26h%3D100%26yaw%3D342.9089%26pitch%3D0%26thumbfov%3D100!7i16384!8i8192?hl=en&coh=205409&entry=ttu).

25 June 2024

• 03:1103:11, 25 June 2024 diff hist +1‎ m Gödel's Loophole ‎ →‎Background: add missing comma

20 June 2024

• 22:2122:21, 20 June 2024 diff hist +4‎ Battle of Stalingrad ‎ →‎Background: It's either "Case Blue" or "Fall Blau". We were stuck halfway saying "Case Blau", which sounds like a kind of blue cheese

19 June 2024

• 20:4320:43, 19 June 2024 diff hist −35‎ Quintipartite Deed ‎ →‎Keith Line: Removing the clause "which created the two territories". It is not necessary to include this aside explaining what the Quintipartite Deed was, in the context of this article about the Quintipartite Deed. current

15 June 2024

• 00:5600:56, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Yokohama City University ‎ →‎Alumni: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:5500:55, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Shinoda ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:5400:54, 15 June 2024 diff hist −1‎ Genju no Seiza ‎ →‎Humans: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 00:5300:53, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ List of My Bride is a Mermaid episodes ‎ →‎Episode list: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:5200:52, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Tom Clancy's Rainbow Six: Take-Down – Missions in Korea ‎ →‎Plot: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 00:5100:51, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Hiroyuki Jo ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 00:5100:51, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Me & My Brothers ‎ →‎Other characters: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:5000:50, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ HoneyComing ‎ →‎Supporting characters: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:5000:50, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Masaya Nakamura (businessman) ‎ →‎Acquisition of Atari Japan: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 00:4900:49, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Auto Race (Japanese sport) ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:4700:47, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ List of One Piece characters ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 00:4500:45, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ List of Alex Rider characters ‎ →‎Nikolei Drevin: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 00:4400:44, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Shoichi Arai ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:4300:43, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ GoGo Tomago ‎ →‎Fictional character biography: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 00:4100:41, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Chocolate (2008 film) ‎ →‎Plot: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 00:4000:40, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ List of Hayate the Combat Butler episodes ‎ →‎Hayate the Combat Butler (2007–2008): "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:3900:39, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ List of Bokurano characters ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:3800:38, 15 June 2024 diff hist −11‎ Tekkonkinkreet ‎ →‎Plot: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 00:3600:36, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Jirō Asada ‎ →‎Career: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 00:3500:35, 15 June 2024 diff hist +10‎ Sex & Fury ‎ →‎Plot: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 00:3300:33, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ A Stranger of Mine ‎ →‎Plot: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 00:3300:33, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ List of Predator (franchise) characters ‎ →‎Hanzo: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 00:3300:33, 15 June 2024 diff hist −14‎ My-HiME Destiny ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:3200:32, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ X-Men (film series) ‎ →‎The Wolverine (2013): "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 00:3100:31, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Timeline of Japanese history ‎ →‎Reiwa period (Since 2019): "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 00:3100:31, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Happy! (sports manga) ‎ →‎Characters: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:3000:30, 15 June 2024 diff hist +6‎ List of Zombie-Loan characters ‎ →‎Otsu Sawatari: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:3000:30, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Shinjuku Incident ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 00:2800:28, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Gangs in the United States ‎ →‎Organized crime gangs: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 00:2600:26, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Black Tiger (professional wrestling) ‎ →‎Origins: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 00:2500:25, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Return of the Street Fighter ‎ →‎Premise: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.

13 June 2024

• 03:4003:40, 13 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ m Michael Swango ‎ copy edit
• 03:3203:32, 13 June 2024 diff hist −1‎ m 2018 Berlin antisemitic attack ‎ →‎Incident: no comma between, a preposition and its object

12 June 2024

• 17:3817:38, 12 June 2024 diff hist 0‎ Rosal, Sutherland ‎ →‎Town: change "ring dyke" to "ring dike". The former sounds like somebody you would buy jewelry from. Tag: Reverted
• 17:0717:07, 12 June 2024 diff hist −20‎ m Garrett Stubbs ‎ →‎Early and personal life: Change "his younger brother C.J." to "C.J." because we called C.J. "his younger brother" in the last graf, and because there's no occurrence of "Garrett" in this graf for "his" to refer to, and the subject of the preceeding sentence is "both Stubbs brothers".

8 June 2024

• 00:3900:39, 8 June 2024 diff hist −4‎ Aviation call signs ‎ →‎Military: A tactical call aign can indicate the mission of the flight, or an aircraft's position in a formation, or both. The conjunction we want is "or".
• 00:3600:36, 8 June 2024 diff hist +405‎ Nicole Aunapu Mann ‎ →‎Military career: Explain provenance of nickname / call sign Duke, with citation

2 June 2024

• 16:5916:59, 2 June 2024 diff hist −2‎ Attack on Pearl Harbor ‎ →‎Military planning: Remove scare quotes around "Hull note", to be consistent with the rest of the article

1 June 2024

• 15:2415:24, 1 June 2024 diff hist −27‎ Displacement ‎ →‎Engineering: Mariners measure displacement under various standard conditions, but it's always simply the ship's weight, the number you would see if you could put the ship on an enormous scale current

27 May 2024

• 17:2417:24, 27 May 2024 diff hist −40‎ Clearview, Philadelphia ‎ When we say "east of Cobbs Creek", we're talking about the creek, not the neighborhood of Cobbs Creek, Philadelphia current

23 May 2024

• 22:4522:45, 23 May 2024 diff hist +4‎ David Raymond ‎ →‎Early life: add missing conjunction (to join the two objects of "making")

22 May 2024

• 00:2800:28, 22 May 2024 diff hist −20‎ Philadelphia Pennsylvania Temple ‎ Undid revision 1224875891 by 141.155.7.246 (talk) reverting good-faith edit. The temple is in the downtown area, vaguely defined, but not in Center City, whose northern boundary is Vine Street. See the Center City, Philadelphia article. current Tag: Undo

20 May 2024

• 02:4202:42, 20 May 2024 diff hist −62‎ Cathedral Basilica of Saints Peter and Paul (Philadelphia) ‎ →‎History: copy edit

17 May 2024

• 03:2003:20, 17 May 2024 diff hist −2‎ Drainage system (geomorphology) ‎ Undid revision 1223447005 by 119.252.195.0 (talk) Undo change to section header, which made it inconsistent with all other uses of the term current Tag: Undo
• 03:1803:18, 17 May 2024 diff hist +10‎ Battle of Big Black River Bridge ‎ break up run-on sentence; remove redundant naming of the state in which Vicksburg is located

16 May 2024

• 03:2803:28, 16 May 2024 diff hist 0‎ m Tinian Naval Base ‎ →‎Early works: changing "leads from the scoop shovel" to "loads from the scoop shovel"
• 03:1903:19, 16 May 2024 diff hist 0‎ m Frederick Kimble ‎ →‎Between the wars: typo fix. For I am. . . TYPO BOY!!!

15 May 2024

• 17:4617:46, 15 May 2024 diff hist −26‎ Displacement (ship) ‎ Undid revision 1223931505 by 2A02:587:9847:E800:D86F:7497:EC25:ADB1 (talk) Undoing good-faith edit to keep the lede sentence straightforward. See talk page discussion Tag: Undo
• 00:4500:45, 15 May 2024 diff hist −113‎ UPS Airlines Flight 1354 ‎ →‎Accident: We've already named the airport, runway, and approach type.
• 00:4300:43, 15 May 2024 diff hist −3‎ Instrument approach ‎ →‎Non-precision approaches and systems: Non-precision systems provide neither altitude nor glide path information. There is no call here for "and/or". current
• 00:0600:06, 15 May 2024 diff hist −111‎ Casio SK-1 ‎ →‎External links: dropping casiosk1.com, which is (now) a spam site

12 May 2024

• 16:2516:25, 12 May 2024 diff hist +145‎ Comcast Technology Center ‎ wording of height superlatives; see talk page discussion

10 May 2024

• 15:3015:30, 10 May 2024 diff hist +1‎ m Jake Virtue ‎ →‎Biography: add missing comma

7 May 2024

• 00:4900:49, 7 May 2024 diff hist −10‎ Rōnin ‎ copy edit
• 00:4900:49, 7 May 2024 diff hist +1‎ Rōnin ‎No edit summary
• 00:4800:48, 7 May 2024 diff hist +1‎ Rōnin ‎No edit summary

1 May 2024

• 18:4018:40, 1 May 2024 diff hist −19‎ La Salute è in voi ‎ Fix dangling modifier (it is the book's title, not the "anonymous authors", that translates to "Health Is in You!" or "Salvation Is within You!")
• 02:1902:19, 1 May 2024 diff hist −1‎ m Press Your Luck scandal ‎ →‎Fallout: typo fix. For I am. . . TYPO BOY!!!

24 April 2024

• 18:1918:19, 24 April 2024 diff hist −9‎ Underscores (musician) ‎ →‎Early life: Change "San Francisco, California" to "San Francisco" for better readability. People mostly know what state San Francisco is in. Those who don't (if such there be) can check the info box or the (now) linked San Francisco article. It doesn't have a lot to do with Underscores. Tag: Reverted

12 April 2024

• 18:5318:53, 12 April 2024 diff hist +579‎ Talk:Depleted uranium ‎ →‎Density of depleted uranium: new section Tag: New topic
• 18:4018:40, 12 April 2024 diff hist +12‎ USS Oklahoma (BB-37) ‎ →‎Final voyage: fix dangling modifier -- it was USS Oklahoma, not "a delegation of nearly 500 Oklahomans led by Governor Roy J. Turner", that was "due to arrive on Memorial day"
• 16:1216:12, 12 April 2024 diff hist +18‎ List of Philadelphia placename etymologies ‎ →‎Streets: wikilink Mulberry
• 01:3401:34, 12 April 2024 diff hist −19‎ Mount Trashmore Park ‎ add missing commma; copy-edit photo caption current

10 April 2024

• 16:0216:02, 10 April 2024 diff hist +1‎ m Logan's Run ‎ →‎Plot: add missing article (Francis is "another Sandman" but is not "another friend of Logan" [because by "another" we mean "other than Logan"])

5 April 2024

• 17:1917:19, 5 April 2024 diff hist +1‎ Fairchild Republic A-10 Thunderbolt II ‎ →‎A-X program: add missing comma
• 16:4916:49, 5 April 2024 diff hist −28‎ List of tallest buildings ‎ →‎Tallest buildings in the world
• 13:5013:50, 5 April 2024 diff hist −23‎ Breaking wheel ‎ →‎Punishment: We already gave the German term in a previous picture caption.

4 April 2024

• 02:5902:59, 4 April 2024 diff hist +398‎ List of tallest buildings ‎ →‎Tallest buildings in the world: Comcast Technology Center, at 1,121 feet, is taller than One Shenzhen Bay Tower 7, which we're listing

3 April 2024

• 15:3015:30, 3 April 2024 diff hist −2‎ Nautical mile ‎ "Such" has no antecedent here. (It's positioned as though it refers to "equator', but it's meaningless to speak of "such an equator"; there's only one equator.) We just mean "so that".

30 March 2024

• 02:0502:05, 30 March 2024 diff hist +856‎ Talk:Piano tuning ‎ →‎"Trichord"?: Reply current Tag: Reply

27 March 2024

• 21:2921:29, 27 March 2024 diff hist +175‎ Talk:Blue force tracking ‎ →‎Capitalization: new section current Tag: New topic
• 21:2421:24, 27 March 2024 diff hist +3‎ Jack Black ‎ →‎Early life and education: add missing conjunction (to join the objects of "worked on")
• 16:4516:45, 27 March 2024 diff hist −2‎ m Women Airforce Service Pilots ‎ →‎Legacy: remove unwanted comma. We want a comma between two nouns in apposition (e.g. "Another WASP, Florence Shutsy-Reynolds, began a social media campaign"), but not here between a noun used as a modifier and the noun it modifies.
• 16:4016:40, 27 March 2024 diff hist −1‎ m Women Airforce Service Pilots ‎ →‎Legacy: drop unwanted comma

23 March 2024

• 02:3902:39, 23 March 2024 diff hist +1‎ m Overbrook School for the Blind ‎ add missing comma (second of the pair setting off "Pennsylvania")

22 March 2024

• 16:0416:04, 22 March 2024 diff hist −2‎ Mario Lanza ‎ →‎Early years: Link reference to Abruzzi e Molise to the historical region rather than its two modern-day successors

21 March 2024

• 19:3419:34, 21 March 2024 diff hist +2‎ m Talk:Michael Foot ‎ →‎Should the "Foot Heads Arms Body" section be deleted?: ).
• 19:3219:32, 21 March 2024 diff hist +603‎ Talk:Michael Foot ‎ →‎Should the "Foot Heads Arms Body" section be deleted?: new section

19 March 2024

• 14:3914:39, 19 March 2024 diff hist +420‎ Talk:Michael Foot ‎ →‎Foot Heads Arms Body
• 02:3202:32, 19 March 2024 diff hist +2,535‎ Michael Foot ‎ restoring "In popular culture" section pending talk-page discussion
• 02:2802:28, 19 March 2024 diff hist +587‎ Talk:Michael Foot ‎ →‎Foot Heads Arms Body: hed cut off

16 March 2024

• 00:4500:45, 16 March 2024 diff hist +3‎ m Lottie Williams (actress, born 1866) ‎ The plural of "Williams" is "Williamses". Apostrophes are just for possessive forms.

14 March 2024

• 03:3603:36, 14 March 2024 diff hist +455‎ Talk:Piano tuning ‎ →‎"Trichord"?: Reply Tag: Reply

13 March 2024

• 20:3420:34, 13 March 2024 diff hist +383‎ Talk:Piano tuning ‎ →‎"Trichord"?: new section Tag: New topic

9 March 2024

• 03:1303:13, 9 March 2024 diff hist −9‎ Lurleen Wallace ‎ →‎Governorship, illness, and death: copy edit
• 03:1203:12, 9 March 2024 diff hist −4‎ Lurleen Wallace ‎ →‎Governorship, illness, and death: copy edit

8 March 2024

• 18:5418:54, 8 March 2024 diff hist −2‎ Grant's Canal ‎ →‎Background: copy edit: we have already established, in the lede, which civil war we're talking about, so we can use its customary name. Also, the city is most commonly called "New Orleans", which is why "New Orleans, Louisiana" is a redirect.

7 March 2024

• 20:4320:43, 7 March 2024 diff hist +390‎ Talk:Broad Street Station (Philadelphia) ‎ →‎This article's title should be "Broad Street Station": new section current Tag: New topic

6 March 2024

• 20:0020:00, 6 March 2024 diff hist +1‎ 2001 Avjet Gulfstream III crash ‎ →‎Flight history: add missing comma (second of the pair setting off "California")

5 March 2024

• 16:5716:57, 5 March 2024 diff hist +2‎ Bazooka (instrument) ‎ →‎Name: title case for book title

3 March 2024

• 03:4403:44, 3 March 2024 diff hist +5‎ Flak-Bait ‎ add missing comma (second of the pair setting off "Maryland"); add missing conjunction (to join the three verbs of which "Flak-Bait" is the subject, namely "lived", "returned", and "lost")

29 February 2024

• 02:3802:38, 29 February 2024 diff hist −43‎ Linda Fiorentino ‎ →‎Early life and education: copy edit

24 February 2024

• 19:2619:26, 24 February 2024 diff hist +1‎ United Airlines Flight 811 ‎ →‎Aircraft: add missing conjunction (to join the two objects of "accumulated", namely "hours" and "cycles"); drop scare quotes around "pressurization", which is being used in its customary sense

23 February 2024

• 22:2122:21, 23 February 2024 diff hist +8‎ Airbus A300 ‎ →‎Origins: "such" has no antecedent; we just mean "therefore"

22 February 2024

• 03:0303:03, 22 February 2024 diff hist −2‎ Mount Erebus disaster ‎ →‎Circumstances surrounding the accident: copy edit

21 February 2024

• 13:0213:02, 21 February 2024 diff hist 0‎ Murray's law ‎ →‎Assumptions: copy edit
• 12:5712:57, 21 February 2024 diff hist 0‎ Murray's law ‎ change "all three radii should obey the equation" to "the three radii should obey the equation", because the equation describes all three radii collectively; it isn't possible for one to conform to the equation if the other two don't.

18 February 2024

• 18:4118:41, 18 February 2024 diff hist +28‎ Edwin Henry Fitler ‎ →‎Business career: Correct misspelling of "Bridesburg" and link to the neighborhood's article.
• 18:4018:40, 18 February 2024 diff hist −18‎ Edwin Henry Fitler ‎ "Mayor" is not capitalized when we're naming the office, as opposed to using it as a title. (e.g. "We know that Mayor Fitler was the mayor.") Also, it's pointless to be explaining what state Philadelphia is in graf 3 of an article about a mayor of Philadelphia. Any reader who doesn't know (if such there be) can check the linked Philadelphia article. But there likely are no such readers.

17 February 2024

• 01:0701:07, 17 February 2024 diff hist +6‎ Hazmat Modine ‎ correct instrument name Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

4 February 2024

• 01:2001:20, 4 February 2024 diff hist +2‎ Thomas H. Ince ‎ Ince's untimely death deserves its own paragraph. It has, after all, caused much speculation.

1 February 2024

• 23:4423:44, 1 February 2024 diff hist −1‎ Pitcairn Aircraft Company ‎ →‎History: remove unwanted comma -- we want "founder" to modify "John Pitcairn, Jr.", and have the latter be the object of "son of"
• 21:5621:56, 1 February 2024 diff hist −2‎ Severyn ‎ change from definite to indefinite article; it isn't the _only_ Ukrainian masculine given name current

29 January 2024

• 04:5204:52, 29 January 2024 diff hist +2‎ Space Shuttle Challenger ‎ add paragraph break to lede section

26 January 2024

• 22:4722:47, 26 January 2024 diff hist +1‎ James J. Van Alen ‎ →‎Residences: add missing comma (second of the pair setting off "Rhode Island"

24 January 2024

• 19:0019:00, 24 January 2024 diff hist +187‎ Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Jilly Juice ‎ →‎Jilly Juice
• 12:5612:56, 24 January 2024 diff hist +8‎ m Airbus A300 ‎ →‎Origins: "such" has no antecedent; we just mean "therefore" Tag: Reverted

21 January 2024

• 17:2717:27, 21 January 2024 diff hist +3‎ Culture of Philadelphia ‎ →‎History: change "initially inhabited by Lenape" to "formerly inhabited by Lenape". We know the Lenape preceded the current occupants, but not that nobody preceded them. Also, Independence Hall is on Chestnut Street -- see the linked article
• 17:2117:21, 21 January 2024 diff hist +1‎ m Ed Rendell ‎ →‎Sports fan: The sign referred to "wussies", not "wusses", as the title, and the photo in the linked article, both show
• 17:1717:17, 21 January 2024 diff hist 0‎ Ed Rendell ‎ →‎Sports fan: "National anthem" is not capitalized -- see the Star Spangled Banner article

19 January 2024

• 16:0416:04, 19 January 2024 diff hist +7‎ Gal Young Un ‎ →‎Plot: fix dangling modifiers -- Mattie is neither "set in the Prohibition era" nor "young and giggly" current

14 January 2024

• 15:1615:16, 14 January 2024 diff hist +26‎ Kombucha ‎ →‎Biological: Change "presumably symbiotic" to "presumably mutualistic". They're unquestionably symbiotic, since that just means they live together.

13 January 2024

• 18:1818:18, 13 January 2024 diff hist +158‎ Maggie May ‎ new section for Blur cover (and others???)
• 18:1218:12, 13 January 2024 diff hist +346‎ Maggie May (folk song) ‎ →‎Other uses: add quote from WSJ article and correct its date; change "number one in United Kingdom" to "number one in THE United Kingdom"; note that Stewart said there that the folk song inspired his song (not just that he reused the title). The Rutles were bigger than Rod.

12 January 2024

• 18:1618:16, 12 January 2024 diff hist −2‎ m Franz Beckenbauer ‎ →‎Club career: fix run-on sentence

10 January 2024

• 03:4403:44, 10 January 2024 diff hist 0‎ Nap-of-the-earth ‎ →‎Helicopter NOE flying: remove unwanted hyphen current
• 03:1003:10, 10 January 2024 diff hist −1‎ Rock Me Tonite ‎ →‎History: change "whomst misled hom" to "who misled him" because grammar

8 January 2024

• 19:2719:27, 8 January 2024 diff hist −8‎ Great Train Wreck of 1856 ‎ Changed "formally know as" to "known as". We meant "formerly" rather than "formally", but we're listing the full history of names, so we don't want even that.
• 19:1219:12, 8 January 2024 diff hist −21‎ m Cherry Street Tavern ‎ No need for a piped link when the only difference is the capitalization of the first letter. Many Wikipedia articles have titles that are common nouns, so the first character is case-independent. Otherwise we'd need piped links all over the place.
• 16:4616:46, 8 January 2024 diff hist −4‎ Tektronix ‎ →‎1970–1985: Use full term "initial public offering" rather than the abbreviation IPO in our only reference to it current
• 16:4316:43, 8 January 2024 diff hist +2‎ Tektronix ‎ →‎1955–1969: use sentence case, rather than title case, for picture captions
• 16:3816:38, 8 January 2024 diff hist −8‎ D. B. Cooper copycat hijackings ‎ →‎Richard McCoy Jr.: The shootout happened immediately after McCoy was tracked down. We've already said that the latter happened "three months later", so let's not say that the former happened "in 1974", as though that's a different time.
• 16:2216:22, 8 January 2024 diff hist −3‎ D. B. Cooper ‎ copy edit

5 January 2024

• 19:3419:34, 5 January 2024 diff hist +4‎ United Airlines Flight 232 ‎ →‎Crew: We don't want a hyphen in "training check airman", and if we did, we would want "training check-airman".
• 19:2119:21, 5 January 2024 diff hist +5‎ Help:Pipe trick ‎ changed "The pipe trick doesn't work links to sections" to "The pipe trick doesn't work WITH links to sections"

4 January 2024

• 16:1516:15, 4 January 2024 diff hist +51‎ Propaganda Movement ‎ link to Congregation for the Evangelization of Peoples article when we refer to the organization
• 15:4515:45, 4 January 2024 diff hist −2‎ Philippines ‎ Copy edit: it was the Philippine Revolution (not 1896) which "became entwined with the 1898 Spanish–American War"

3 January 2024

• 20:2020:20, 3 January 2024 diff hist +4‎ Maggie May (folk song) ‎ →‎Lyrics: The "Port of Liverpool" is where Maggie Mae's victim, who was a sailor, returned. We had "part", from some editor who had trouble with the vowels of John's Scouse accent
• 19:4319:43, 3 January 2024 diff hist +728‎ Athenaeum of Philadelphia ‎ new section for 2019 integration with Penn Libraries
• 16:5016:50, 3 January 2024 diff hist 0‎ De Havilland Canada Dash 8 ‎ →‎Accidents with fatalities: Copy edit of capsule description of 2018 Horizon Air Q400 incident to make "ground employee" the subject so that "himself" makes better sense. There are only nine items in this "Accidents with fatalities" list, but several of them are notorious. Or maybe two are notorious and one is of great current interest.
• 04:0004:00, 3 January 2024 diff hist 0‎ Jōhatsu ‎ →‎Industry: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 03:5803:58, 3 January 2024 diff hist −4‎ Jōhatsu ‎ →‎History: they lost their jobs or they accumulated debt or they did both. The conjunction we want is "or".

28 December 2023

• 04:0904:09, 28 December 2023 diff hist +1‎ Tributary ‎ →‎Terminology: add missing comma (second of the pair setting off "West Virginia"
• 04:0604:06, 28 December 2023 diff hist +296‎ Talk:Sean Desai ‎ →‎Not the first Asian coordinator?: new section Tag: New topic

27 December 2023

• 03:0003:00, 27 December 2023 diff hist −1‎ m Kamala (wrestler) ‎ →‎Continental Wrestling Association (1982): remove unwanted comma

22 December 2023

• 02:1602:16, 22 December 2023 diff hist −2‎ List of The Office (American TV series) characters ‎ →‎Hidetoshi Hasagawa: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:1502:15, 22 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Black Rain (1989 American film) ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:1302:13, 22 December 2023 diff hist −8‎ Yakuza (video game) ‎ copy edit
• 02:1202:12, 22 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Youth of the Beast ‎ →‎Remake: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 02:1102:11, 22 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Tokyo (novel) ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 02:1002:10, 22 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Nobuyuki Fukumoto ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:0902:09, 22 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Russian (comics) ‎ →‎Fictional character biography: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:0902:09, 22 December 2023 diff hist +10‎ Sanctuary (manga) ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 02:0802:08, 22 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Nambul: War Stories ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 02:0702:07, 22 December 2023 diff hist −9‎ List of Walker, Texas Ranger episodes ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:0602:06, 22 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Shado (comics) ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:0402:04, 22 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Crying Freeman ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:0202:02, 22 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Number9dream ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:0102:01, 22 December 2023 diff hist −1‎ Fureai ‎ →‎Linguistic definition: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. Likewise "politician" and "nature". The plural of "yakuza" is "yakuza". current
• 01:5901:59, 22 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ List of Ghost in the Shell: Stand Alone Complex episodes ‎ →‎Season 1: Stand Alone Complex: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 01:5801:58, 22 December 2023 diff hist −7‎ Roswell Conspiracies: Aliens, Myths and Legends ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 01:5801:58, 22 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Black Tarantula ‎ →‎Fictional character biography: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 01:5701:57, 22 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ John Bester ‎ →‎Translations: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 01:5601:56, 22 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Get Up! (film) ‎ →‎Cast: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 01:5601:56, 22 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Love Mode ‎ →‎Characters: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 01:5301:53, 22 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Baroness (G.I. Joe) ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 01:5201:52, 22 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Kodo-kai ‎ →‎Activities: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 01:5101:51, 22 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Kwon Sang-woo ‎ →‎Controversy: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 01:5101:51, 22 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Kitty Pryde and Wolverine ‎ →‎Plot summary: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 01:5001:50, 22 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Cary-Hiroyuki Tagawa ‎ →‎Career: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 01:4801:48, 22 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Shi (character) ‎ →‎Fictional character biography: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.

19 December 2023

• 19:2319:23, 19 December 2023 diff hist −17‎ Harald Damsleth ‎ →‎World War II: Change "the German invasion of Norway" to "the invasion", since we specified who invaded what in the preceding sentence.

17 December 2023

• 04:0004:00, 17 December 2023 diff hist +5‎ m Flydubai Flight 981 ‎ →‎Final report: copy edit

16 December 2023

• 03:2403:24, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Gotō (surname) ‎ →‎In fiction: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 03:2303:23, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ The Raid 2 ‎ →‎Cast: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 03:2303:23, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ The Drug King ‎ →‎Supporting: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 03:2203:22, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Enter the Fat Dragon (2020 film) ‎ →‎Cast: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 03:2103:21, 16 December 2023 diff hist −1‎ Darc (film) ‎ →‎Cast: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 03:2003:20, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Yakuza Princess ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 03:1903:19, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Glico Morinaga case ‎ →‎Prime suspects: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 03:1803:18, 16 December 2023 diff hist −7‎ Kenichi Shinoda ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 03:1403:14, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ The Punisher (1989 film) ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 03:1303:13, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Destro ‎ →‎Devil's Due (2001-2008): "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 03:1203:12, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Kōji Tsuruta ‎ →‎Career: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 03:1003:10, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ The Fast and the Furious: Tokyo Drift ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 03:0903:09, 16 December 2023 diff hist −5‎ List of Japanese government and military commanders of World War II ‎ →‎Home Affairs Minister: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 03:0803:08, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Enson Inoue ‎ →‎Personal life: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 03:0603:06, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Gold Coast, Queensland ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 03:0603:06, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Hideo Murai ‎ →‎Death: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 03:0503:05, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ True Crime: New York City ‎ →‎Plot: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 03:0403:04, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Gordon Liu ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 03:0203:02, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Tokyo Drifter ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 03:0003:00, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Storm Shadow (G.I. Joe) ‎ →‎Live action film: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:5902:59, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Masako Natsume ‎ →‎Biography: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:5902:59, 16 December 2023 diff hist −14‎ Into the Sun (2005 film) ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:5702:57, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ God of Gamblers ‎ →‎Cast: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:5602:56, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Pink Lady (duo) ‎ →‎Peak of popularity: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:5502:55, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ List of Japanese spies, 1930–1945 ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:5502:55, 16 December 2023 diff hist −14‎ Mind Game (film) ‎ →‎Cast: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:5302:53, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Blade for Barter ‎ →‎Plot summary: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:5302:53, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Kayōkyoku ‎ →‎1950s–1960s: Mood kayō era: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:5202:52, 16 December 2023 diff hist −8‎ Shinzo Abe ‎ →‎Member of the House of Representatives: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:5102:51, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Los Zetas ‎ →‎Law enforcement raids: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:5102:51, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Japanese honorifics ‎ →‎Other martial arts titles: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:4802:48, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Mungiki ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. Tag: Reverted
• 02:4602:46, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Kokura ‎ →‎Notable figures born in Kokura: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:4502:45, 16 December 2023 diff hist +2‎ Katana (DC Comics) ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:4402:44, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Red Steel ‎ →‎Plot: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:4402:44, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ War (2007 film) ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:4302:43, 16 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Ōita (city) ‎ →‎Notable people from Ōita: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.

15 December 2023

• 04:0204:02, 15 December 2023 diff hist −6‎ Michael Myers (Pennsylvania politician) ‎ The bribery that led to his expulsion from the house wasn't later than Abscam; it WAS Abscam. Dropping the word "later".

14 December 2023

• 16:2316:23, 14 December 2023 diff hist +5‎ Air Algérie Flight 6289 ‎ →‎Failure to fly: If the climb angle could have been maintained, they wouldn't have crashed. But the aircraft was pointing up and moving down; it's the angle of attack that was too high.

10 December 2023

• 21:1621:16, 10 December 2023 diff hist −1‎ Doom modding ‎ →‎Utilities and WADs: fix misspelling of "led"
• 21:0821:08, 10 December 2023 diff hist −1‎ Doom (1993 video game) ‎ →‎Ports: fix misspelling of "led"
• 00:2300:23, 10 December 2023 diff hist −13‎ Amy Carlson (religious leader) ‎ copy edit

8 December 2023

• 21:2121:21, 8 December 2023 diff hist −26‎ Ahegao ‎ →‎History: This article is about the term "ahegao", and this section describes the history of that specific term. "O face" means something related to "ahegao", but it does not refer to THE TERM "ahegao", which we are discussing here.
• 19:0319:03, 8 December 2023 diff hist +10‎ MI5 ‎ →‎Past names of the Security Service: copy edit
• 18:5618:56, 8 December 2023 diff hist +3‎ Slow Horses ‎ →‎Main: copy edit
• 17:1417:14, 8 December 2023 diff hist +4‎ m Taylor Swift masters dispute ‎ change "owner Scooter Braun" to "its owner Scooter Braun", because the point is that what he owns is the label. [There's an "its" on a previous list item, but it can't apply to everything in the list, because "former record label" is itself an item in the same list (of objects of the preposition "with")]
• 02:4402:44, 8 December 2023 diff hist +4‎ Attack on Pearl Harbor ‎ →‎Japanese declaration of war: no antecedent for "such"
• 02:4202:42, 8 December 2023 diff hist +13‎ Attack on Pearl Harbor ‎ →‎Objectives: copy edit
• 02:0902:09, 8 December 2023 diff hist +4‎ Slow Horses ‎ →‎Series 3: Real Tigers (2023): copy edit

7 December 2023

• 17:4817:48, 7 December 2023 diff hist +3‎ Robert Nimmo ‎ changed "officer who served World War II" to "officer who served IN World War II" (There's an "in" before "World War I", but we don't want it to apply to the entire list, e.g. "served in with the British Commonwealth Occupation Force")
• 02:3702:37, 7 December 2023 diff hist +413‎ List of tallest buildings ‎ →‎Tallest buildings in the world: Added Comcast Technology Center -- see talk-page discussion Tag: Reverted

6 December 2023

• 02:3102:31, 6 December 2023 diff hist +5‎ Sandra Morgan ‎ →‎National selection: Fix dangling modifier -- it was Morgan, not her times, that trained in the Tobruk Memorial Baths.

5 December 2023

• 21:2921:29, 5 December 2023 diff hist +472‎ Talk:List of tallest buildings ‎ →‎Comcast Technology Center: Yeahhhh...
• 20:1420:14, 5 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ m Hyperbolic navigation ‎ make "either. . . or" items parallel
• 20:1220:12, 5 December 2023 diff hist −1‎ m Double-Cross System ‎ →‎Methods of operation: drop unwanted comma

4 December 2023

• 00:4500:45, 4 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Lambeau Field ‎ It's redunant to say he's the "namesake of the trophy of the same name", because that's what "namesake" means

3 December 2023

• 03:1503:15, 3 December 2023 diff hist −25‎ Rikidōzan ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 03:1303:13, 3 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ The Street Fighter ‎ →‎Plot: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 03:1203:12, 3 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Masahiro Chono ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 03:1203:12, 3 December 2023 diff hist −14‎ Gokusen ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 03:0903:09, 3 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Syphon Filter: The Omega Strain ‎ →‎Plot: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 03:0803:08, 3 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Gonin ‎ →‎Summary: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 03:0803:08, 3 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Mariko Yashida ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 03:0703:07, 3 December 2023 diff hist −1‎ Frontier Martial-Arts Wrestling ‎ →‎FMW under Shoichi Arai and Hiromichi Fuyuki (1995–2002): "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 03:0603:06, 3 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Nikolai Dante ‎ →‎Other recurring characters: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 03:0503:05, 3 December 2023 diff hist −7‎ List of Paranoia Agent characters ‎ →‎Other characters: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 03:0503:05, 3 December 2023 diff hist −27‎ Yaksa ‎ →‎See also: Correct spelling of "yakuza" current
• 03:0403:04, 3 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Tambovskaya Bratva ‎ →‎Saint Petersburg: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 03:0303:03, 3 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Tambovskaya Bratva ‎ →‎Saint Petersburg: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 03:0103:01, 3 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ The Hand (comics) ‎ →‎Modern times: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:5902:59, 3 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Kenji (given name) ‎ →‎Fictional characters: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:5902:59, 3 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Prostitution in Thailand ‎ →‎Sex trafficking: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:5802:58, 3 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Suki: A Like Story ‎ →‎Characters: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:5802:58, 3 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Minbo ‎ →‎Attack against Juzo Itami: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:5702:57, 3 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Big Hero 6 (comics) ‎ →‎Silver Samurai: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:5602:56, 3 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Phoenix Force (novel) ‎ →‎Members: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:5602:56, 3 December 2023 diff hist +7‎ Yubitsume ‎ →‎Origin: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. Also, changed "little finger-amputee" to "little-finger amputee", because we mean a person whose little finger was amputated, rather than a little person whose finger was amputated. Also, use the word "yubitsume" rather than the pronoun "it" in the first reference in a paragraph.
• 02:5202:52, 3 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Eden: It's an Endless World! ‎ →‎Characters: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:5202:52, 3 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Pro Wrestling Noah ‎ →‎Noah after Misawa (2009–2021): "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:5102:51, 3 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ The Little Match Girl ‎ →‎Anime and manga: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:5102:51, 3 December 2023 diff hist −1‎ List of Marvel Comics teams and organizations ‎ →‎Shogun Reapers: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:5002:50, 3 December 2023 diff hist −15‎ 1881 in organized crime ‎ →‎Events: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:5002:50, 3 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Hideshi Hino ‎ →‎Biography: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. current
• 02:5002:50, 3 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Chubu Centrair International Airport ‎ →‎History: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:4902:49, 3 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Port of Nagoya ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:4802:48, 3 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ List of teams and organizations in DC Comics ‎ →‎Y: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:4802:48, 3 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Judomaster ‎ →‎Sonia Sato: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:4802:48, 3 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Snake Eyes (G.I. Joe) ‎ →‎Snake Eyes (2021): "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:4702:47, 3 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Kobato ‎ →‎Characters: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 02:4702:47, 3 December 2023 diff hist −4‎ M.A.N.T.I.S. ‎ →‎Episodes: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 00:3500:35, 3 December 2023 diff hist −3‎ George Anson's voyage around the world ‎ →‎Voyage: Fix dangling modifier -- it was the crew, not scurvy, that fought the stormy winds and seas.
• 00:3200:32, 3 December 2023 diff hist −1‎ m George Anson's voyage around the world ‎ →‎Background: fix misspelling of "led"

2 December 2023

• 20:1720:17, 2 December 2023 diff hist +17‎ Shank's mare ‎ add "unreferenced" tag

30 November 2023

• 12:4812:48, 30 November 2023 diff hist +1‎ Jack Easterby ‎ →‎Education and early career: add missing comma (of the pair setting off "South Carolina")
• 03:2703:27, 30 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Ryan Sakoda ‎ →‎World Wrestling Entertainment (2003–2004): "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:2703:27, 30 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Grand Theft Auto Advance ‎ "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:2603:26, 30 November 2023 diff hist +13‎ Wreckless: The Yakuza Missions ‎ →‎Plot: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized. Also, it is the game, not the player, that is "set in Hong Kong".
• 03:2403:24, 30 November 2023 diff hist −7‎ Time Trax ‎ →‎Season 2: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:2303:23, 30 November 2023 diff hist −10‎ Criminal tattoo ‎ →‎Japan: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:2303:23, 30 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Godzilla vs. SpaceGodzilla ‎ →‎Plot: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:2203:22, 30 November 2023 diff hist −1‎ Taxi 2 ‎ →‎Plot: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized. Also, the plural of "yakuza" is "yakuza".
• 03:2203:22, 30 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Murder of Junko Furuta ‎ →‎Kidnapping and abuses: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:2103:21, 30 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Okinawa Rendez-vous ‎ →‎Plot: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:2003:20, 30 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Yinling ‎ →‎Personal life: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:1903:19, 30 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ World League for Freedom and Democracy ‎ →‎Controversial participants of WACL conferences: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:1903:19, 30 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Mitsuharu Misawa ‎ →‎Aftermath: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:1603:16, 30 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Sumitomo Mitsui Banking Corporation ‎ →‎Yakuza exclusion ordinances: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:1403:14, 30 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Johnny Mnemonic ‎ "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:1103:11, 30 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Barefoot Gen ‎ →‎Volume 10: Never Give Up: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:1003:10, 30 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Yoshio Kodama ‎ →‎Post-War detention in Sugamo Prison: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:0903:09, 30 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Kenshi (Mortal Kombat) ‎ →‎Mortal Kombat games: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:0803:08, 30 November 2023 diff hist −4‎ Renegade (video game) ‎ →‎Localization and ports: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:0703:07, 30 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Inagawa-kai ‎ →‎In popular culture: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 02:5002:50, 30 November 2023 diff hist +1,042‎ Talk:Comcast Technology Center ‎ →‎Outside Manhattan and Chicago, it's the tallest building for quite a ways: new section Tag: New topic
• 02:1302:13, 30 November 2023 diff hist −38‎ Comcast Technology Center ‎ tallest building in North America outside Manhattan and Chicago

28 November 2023

• 02:2502:25, 28 November 2023 diff hist +3‎ Lepa Radić ‎ →‎Early life: add missing conjunction to join the two objects of the verb "emphasized", namely "hard work" and "seriousness"

27 November 2023

• 22:1122:11, 27 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Ulf Merbold ‎ →‎Personal life: Dropping the hyphen in "East-German", to be consistent with the other occurrence and because it is not needed.
• 22:0022:00, 27 November 2023 diff hist −29‎ Brandon Cruz ‎ →‎Music: "Hardcore" is not capitalized. Also, the hardcore punk article describes punk rock and links to the punk rock article, so let's keep it simple here.

25 November 2023

• 01:5401:54, 25 November 2023 diff hist +16‎ Babybjörn ‎ fix quirky capitalization

21 November 2023

• 04:0804:08, 21 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ A Scene at the Sea ‎ →‎Production: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 04:0804:08, 21 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Sonatine (1993 film) ‎ →‎Production: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 04:0704:07, 21 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Brother (2000 film) ‎ →‎Plot: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:3003:30, 21 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Cobra (G.I. Joe) ‎ →‎Snake Eyes: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:3003:30, 21 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Sonic Underground ‎ →‎Development: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:2903:29, 21 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Bullseye (character) ‎ →‎Early life and backstory: "Yakuza" and "mafia" are common nouns, and therefore are not capitalized.
• 03:2803:28, 21 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ List of Batman supporting characters ‎ →‎Trainers of Bruce Wayne: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:2703:27, 21 November 2023 diff hist −7‎ Johnny Cage ‎ →‎Mortal Kombat games: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:2603:26, 21 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ m Enforced disappearance ‎ →‎South Korea: fix misspelling
• 03:2603:26, 21 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Kabukichō ‎ →‎Gallery: capitalization
• 03:2503:25, 21 November 2023 diff hist −8‎ Kabukichō ‎ →‎Crime: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:2403:24, 21 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ My Lucky Stars ‎ →‎Plot summary: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:2403:24, 21 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Howard Marks ‎ →‎Drug empire: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:2303:23, 21 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Zatoichi ‎ →‎Character: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:2303:23, 21 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Yamaguchi-gumi ‎ →‎In popular culture: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:2003:20, 21 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Yamaguchi-gumi ‎ →‎Assassination of Iccho Itoh: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:1903:19, 21 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Showdown in Little Tokyo ‎ →‎Plot: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:1803:18, 21 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Pearling (body modification) ‎ →‎History and culture: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized. current
• 03:1803:18, 21 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Magic (cryptography) ‎ →‎Access by Roosevelt's cabinet: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:1403:14, 21 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Wasabi (film) ‎ →‎Plot: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:1303:13, 21 November 2023 diff hist −1‎ Irezumi ‎ →‎External links: remove unwanted apostrophe
• 03:1203:12, 21 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ J-pop ‎ →‎Rokabirī Boom and Wasei pops: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:1103:11, 21 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Russian mafia ‎ →‎Notable individual groups: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:1103:11, 21 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Shingen Yashida ‎ →‎In other media: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:1003:10, 21 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Dai-Ichi Kangyo Bank ‎ →‎Scandal: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:0903:09, 21 November 2023 diff hist +2‎ Mizuho Financial Group ‎ →‎Controversies: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.
• 03:0903:09, 21 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Enryaku-ji ‎ →‎Collusion with organized crime: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore is not capitalized.

20 November 2023

• 21:4321:43, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Michelle Reis ‎ →‎Actress breakthrough (1993–1995): "Yakuza" is not capitalized
• 21:4321:43, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Grand Theft Auto III ‎ →‎Plot: "Yakuza" is a common noun and is not capitalized
• 21:4321:43, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Bob the Builder ‎ →‎International broadcasts: Bob cut off his own pinkie as atonement for bringing shame on his yakuza syndicate. Or he would have if he was a yakuza. He could do it with a band saw instead of the traditional samurai weapon. In any case, "yakuza" is a common noun and is not capitalized.
• 21:4021:40, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Yoshirō Mori ‎ →‎Gaffes: "Yakuza" is a common noun and is not capitalized
• 21:3921:39, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Mona Lisa Overdrive ‎ →‎Plot: "Yakuza" is a common noun and is not capitalized
• 21:3921:39, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Ghost in the Shell 2: Innocence ‎ →‎Plot: "Yakuza" is a common noun and is not capitalized
• 21:3721:37, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Racism in Japan ‎ →‎Non-Japanese citizens and crimes: "Yakuza" is not capitalized
• 21:3621:36, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Himeji ‎ →‎Notable people from Himeji: "Yakuza" is not capitalized
• 21:3521:35, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ 1923 Great Kantō earthquake ‎ →‎In written or graphic novels: "Yakuza" is not capitalized
• 21:3521:35, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Punisher ‎ →‎Initial series: "Yakuza" is a common noun
• 21:3421:34, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Ichi the Killer (film) ‎No edit summary
• 21:3321:33, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Yoshihiro Tajiri ‎ →‎Championship reigns (2001–2004): "Yakuza" is a common noun
• 21:3221:32, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Wolverine (character) ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 21:3121:31, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Kill Bill: Volume 1 ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 21:3021:30, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Miami Vice ‎ →‎Overview: "Yakuza" is a common noun
• 21:2921:29, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Onsen ‎ →‎Tattoos: "Yakuza" is a common noun
• 19:1819:18, 20 November 2023 diff hist −1‎ Brandon Lee ‎ →‎1991 to 1993: Hollywood breakthrough: The plural of "yakuza" is "yakuza"
• 19:1719:17, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Bangai-O ‎ →‎Development
• 19:1719:17, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Ultimate Fighting Championship ‎ →‎Pride acquisition and integration
• 19:1619:16, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Nobusuke Kishi ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 19:1519:15, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Adornment ‎ →‎Cultures, subcultures, and institutions
• 19:1519:15, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Yomiuri Giants ‎ →‎2012 Hara controversy
• 19:1519:15, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Toshiro Mifune ‎ →‎1950s–1990s: "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun
• 19:1419:14, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ SPECTRE ‎ →‎Philosophy and goals: corrected capitalization; fixed broken links
• 19:0919:09, 20 November 2023 diff hist −5‎ Burakumin ‎ →‎Hashimoto incident: copy edit
• 19:0819:08, 20 November 2023 diff hist −26‎ Burakumin ‎ →‎Yakuza membership: A yakuza is a gangster
• 19:0619:06, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Gang ‎ capitalization
• 19:0519:05, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Johnny Mnemonic (film) ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 19:0219:02, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Japanese wordplay ‎ →‎General examples: "Yakuza" is not capitalized
• 19:0119:01, 20 November 2023 diff hist −8‎ Steven Seagal ‎ →‎Martial arts and Japan: a yakuza is a gangster
• 19:0019:00, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Pachinko ‎ capitalization
• 18:5618:56, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Olympus Corporation ‎ →‎Developments: "Yakuza" is not capitalized
• 18:5618:56, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ 893 ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun. Tag: Reverted
• 18:5518:55, 20 November 2023 diff hist +18‎ Camorra ‎ →‎United States: copy edit
• 18:5318:53, 20 November 2023 diff hist +1‎ Super Nintendo Entertainment System ‎ →‎Launch: "Yakuza" is a common noun, and therefore not organized. The yakuza comprise multiple, rival criminal organization
• 18:5218:52, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Roppongi ‎ "Yakuza" is not capitalized, because it is a common noun.
• 18:5118:51, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Organized crime ‎ "Yakuza" and "triad" are common nouns and are not capitalized.
• 18:4518:45, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Keanu Reeves ‎ →‎1995–1998: Continued acting efforts: "Yakuza" is a common noun and, as a common noun, is not capitalized.
• 18:4318:43, 20 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Love and Theft (Bob Dylan album) ‎ →‎Allegations of plagiarism: "Yakuza" is a common noun and as such is not capitalized.
• 16:4316:43, 20 November 2023 diff hist +3‎ Sarcophagus of Eshmunazar II ‎ add missing conjunction to join the two predicate nominatives -- the things that the lid inscription "was" -- namely "first inscription" and "most detailed text"
• 15:1915:19, 20 November 2023 diff hist −10‎ Irezumi ‎ →‎Tattoos in modern Japan: "Yakuza" is a common noun and is therefore not capitalized. Also, "yakuza gangster" is redundant; a yakuza is a gangster.
• 15:1615:16, 20 November 2023 diff hist −127‎ Yakuza ‎ consistent capitalization: we were deeply unsure whether "yakuza" is a proper noun or a common noun. Merriam-Webster says the latter. Also, consistent usage: we weren't sure whether "yakuza" meant an individual or a syndicate. Also, consistent itaicization: it looked like the article originally italicized every occurrence of the word "yakuza", as though it were not an English word. That isn't true, and anyway it proved exhausting; restricting to when we mean the word "yakuza", not a person

17 November 2023

• 20:4520:45, 17 November 2023 diff hist −2‎ The Caine Mutiny Court-Martial (play) ‎ copy edit

14 November 2023

• 19:2719:27, 14 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ USS John F. Kennedy (CV-67) ‎ noun form of "Kitty Hawk class" because we are not using the phrase as a modifier

13 November 2023

• 17:5217:52, 13 November 2023 diff hist +3‎ Eliza Griswold ‎ add missing conjunction, to join the two predicate nominatives (the things "she is", namely
• 01:3701:37, 13 November 2023 diff hist −1‎ Natixis ‎ Remove comma that we don't want, because we aren't trying to say that Euronews is the ONLY news channel.

9 November 2023

• 02:4802:48, 9 November 2023 diff hist +1‎ Atlas Air Flight 3591 ‎ →‎Conclusions: copy edit
• 02:4002:40, 9 November 2023 diff hist +1‎ m Atlas Air Flight 3591 ‎ →‎Accident: fix typo: "baseleg" -> "base leg"

3 November 2023

• 19:2219:22, 3 November 2023 diff hist −17‎ USS John F. Kennedy (CV-67) ‎ →‎1990s: We have already covered the fact that John F. Kennedy is an aircraft carrier.
• 19:2019:20, 3 November 2023 diff hist −8‎ USS John F. Kennedy (CV-67) ‎ →‎1970s: It is not necessary for the photo caption to explain that John F. Kennedy is an aircraft carrier, in the context of this article about John F. Kennedy, which features this information prominently. That info is in the caption for when the photo is used in other contexts

31 October 2023

• 18:5418:54, 31 October 2023 diff hist +104‎ Wikipedia:Help desk ‎ →‎A talk page with no corresponding article -- how to delete
• 13:1913:19, 31 October 2023 diff hist 0‎ Wikipedia:Help desk ‎ →‎A talk page with no corresponding article -- how to delete
• 13:1813:18, 31 October 2023 diff hist +679‎ Wikipedia:Help desk ‎ →‎A talk page with no corresponding article -- how to delete: new section Tag: New topic
• 03:0803:08, 31 October 2023 diff hist +492‎ Talk:Center City West, Philadelphia ‎ →‎This orphaned talk page should be deleted: new section Tag: New topic
• 02:5902:59, 31 October 2023 diff hist +3‎ Trea Turner ‎ →‎Amateur career: add missing conjunction (to join the two objects of the verb "had", namely "batting average" and "on-base percentage")

25 October 2023

• 18:0118:01, 25 October 2023 diff hist −6‎ m San Carlos Airport (California) ‎ →‎Experimental Aircraft Association: changing "local chapter" to "chapter", since every chapter is local to some place

24 October 2023

• 19:1219:12, 24 October 2023 diff hist 0‎ m Surf Air ‎ "Scheduled" is not capitalized.
• 19:0619:06, 24 October 2023 diff hist +447‎ San Carlos Airport (California) ‎ →‎Origin of SQL airport code: add citation

21 October 2023

• 17:2817:28, 21 October 2023 diff hist +5‎ Mode C veil ‎ link to mentioned crash

18 October 2023

• 17:1917:19, 18 October 2023 diff hist −15‎ Bryson Stott ‎ →‎Professional career: copy edit

16 October 2023

• 13:3813:38, 16 October 2023 diff hist −1‎ Caroline LeCount ‎ →‎Activism: Change "her would ride" and "her would board" to "she would ride" and "she would board"

3 October 2023

• 18:4718:47, 3 October 2023 diff hist −21‎ Philadelphia Naval Shipyard ‎ No need to qualify "first U.S. Navy shipyard" with "in the United States", because it was the first U.S. Navy shipyard anywhere.

2 October 2023

• 16:5916:59, 2 October 2023 diff hist 0‎ Port of entry ‎ →‎Terminology: brought home a hyphen that had gone astray

30 September 2023

• 20:1520:15, 30 September 2023 diff hist −17‎ Coconut cream ‎ Undid revision 1025706862 by Turaids (talk) The coconut milk article says (and already did in May 2021, when this redirect was changed) that cream of coconut "should not be confused with coconut cream". current Tags: Redirect target changed Undo

27 September 2023

• 02:1002:10, 27 September 2023 diff hist −57‎ Jason Kelce ‎ →‎Philadelphia Eagles: copy edit: the photo caption does not need to explain that Kelce is the Eagles' center in the context of this article about Kelce. It's there for when it's used in other places, like the Mummers Parade article.

20 September 2023

• 18:4818:48, 20 September 2023 diff hist −9‎ MV Höegh Osaka ‎ →‎January 2015 grounding: Move the phrase "in the Solent" from the sentence about the grounding being intentional to the sentence about where the Bramble Bank is, because that's where the phrase belongs.

19 September 2023

• 02:2802:28, 19 September 2023 diff hist −17‎ Columbia Park ‎ →‎Home of the Philadelphia Athletics: Removing the "North" and "West" designations, because they aren't required, since the streets can be named without them, and they contribute no information (the part of 29th Street that meets Oxford must necessarily be North 29th Street). Odd, by the way, that we weren't stipulating "West Columbia Avenue", since there's also an East Columbia Avenue.

18 September 2023

• 20:4520:45, 18 September 2023 diff hist +10‎ Watershed (broadcasting) ‎ →‎India: usage: "watershed" means the beginning of the adult-content period, not the entire period
• 17:0317:03, 18 September 2023 diff hist 0‎ Paternoster lift ‎ copy-edit a sentence in the lede

1 September 2023

• 16:0416:04, 1 September 2023 diff hist +46‎ Squib ‎ →‎People: expand short description of E. R. Squibb
• 15:4815:48, 1 September 2023 diff hist +5‎ Vintage spirits ‎ →‎History: copy edit: add conjunction to join the two things that bottles could be (namely "tampered with" or "counterfeit"). Also, rewrite one sentence for flow

31 August 2023

• 03:3303:33, 31 August 2023 diff hist +3‎ Klaatu (The Day the Earth Stood Still) ‎ →‎Keanu Reeves as Klaatu: add missing conjunction (to join the two objects of the preposition “with”) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 03:2703:27, 31 August 2023 diff hist 0‎ Bombardier Recreational Products ‎ no hyphen in “spun off” because we mean the (past tense of the) action of separating the new company, rather than the noun describing the new company (the “spin-off”) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

30 August 2023

• 15:2215:22, 30 August 2023 diff hist +1‎ Pure Shores ‎ →‎Critical reception: correct spelling of "piña colada"
• 15:2115:21, 30 August 2023 diff hist +1‎ Iggy's ‎ →‎Reception: correct spelling of "piña colada"
• 15:2015:20, 30 August 2023 diff hist +1‎ List of national drinks ‎ →‎Central and South: correct spelling of "piña colada"
• 15:2015:20, 30 August 2023 diff hist +1‎ Amy Schumer Learns to Cook ‎ →‎Season 2 (2020): Correct spelling of "piña colada"
• 15:1915:19, 30 August 2023 diff hist +1‎ Mammoth (TV series) ‎ →‎Plot: Correct spelling of "piña colada"

27 August 2023

• 02:2902:29, 27 August 2023 diff hist −6‎ Martha Holliday ‎ As the linked ballet dancer article shows, it's either the Italian "prima ballerina" or the French "première danseuse". "Primiere ballerina" is a chimera.

25 August 2023

• 19:0019:00, 25 August 2023 diff hist +4‎ Wright Model A ‎ →‎Survivors: link "Deutsches Museum"
• 16:5416:54, 25 August 2023 diff hist +8‎ m 2001 Marsh Harbour Cessna 402 crash ‎ →‎Accident: don't overstate the precision when converting the distance described as "about half a mile"

24 August 2023

• 17:1417:14, 24 August 2023 diff hist +1‎ Embraer Legacy 600 ‎ →‎Accident and incidents: Embraer's pronoun is "they" (or "it"), not "she".

21 August 2023

• 13:3813:38, 21 August 2023 diff hist +4‎ Deborah Hersman ‎ →‎Career: Use subject's name, rather than a pronoun, for the first reference in the section.
• 13:3713:37, 21 August 2023 diff hist −7‎ Deborah Hersman ‎ →‎Career: It's wrong to say that Hersman was appointed by the "former Secretary of Transportation", because Mr. Foxx was then the serving Secretary. Former officials have no power to make appointments. Are we informing readers that the person who held the office in 2017 doesn't still hold it today? Isn't that what readers would expect? If we head down this road, we'll wind up explaining that former General George Washington defeated former Lord Cornwallis at the erstwhile Battle of Yorktown.

15 August 2023

• 19:3419:34, 15 August 2023 diff hist +20‎ Jimmy James (musician) ‎ →‎Career: fix Brian Howe link. I bet he's actually good company.

12 August 2023

• 14:2914:29, 12 August 2023 diff hist +4‎ Japan Air Lines Flight 123 ‎ →‎6:56{{nbs}}p.m.: Impact: copy edit
• 14:1514:15, 12 August 2023 diff hist −10‎ Japan Air Lines Flight 123 ‎ →‎6:27–6:34{{nbs}}p.m.: changed "the controller requested as to the nature of the emergency" to "the controller asked the nature of the emergency"

11 August 2023

• 19:3919:39, 11 August 2023 diff hist 0‎ Baker Street robbery ‎ →‎Prelude: We don't need a second hyphen in the term "second-hand car salesman" because the reader will understand, even without it, that we are talking about second-hand cars rather than second-hand salesmen. Also, we want to be consistent, and we already have an a occurrence of the term "second-hand car salesman", referring to Thomas Stephens.

10 August 2023

• 21:1421:14, 10 August 2023 diff hist −2‎ m To Die For ‎ →‎Plot: change singular possessive to plural possessive (it was the condo of the Marettos, not the condo of the Maretto0
• 01:3801:38, 10 August 2023 diff hist +2‎ File talk:K129 HGE recoverysite.png ‎ →‎What do the circles mean? current
• 01:3701:37, 10 August 2023 diff hist +2‎ m File talk:K129 HGE recoverysite.png ‎ →‎What do the circles mean?

9 August 2023

• 19:1719:17, 9 August 2023 diff hist +486‎ Talk:Soviet submarine K-129 (1960) ‎ →‎Circles on the map: new section Tag: New topic
• 19:1319:13, 9 August 2023 diff hist +425‎ Talk:Project Azorian ‎ →‎Circles on the map: new section Tag: New topic
• 19:0719:07, 9 August 2023 diff hist +55‎ m File talk:K129 HGE recoverysite.png ‎ →‎What do the circles mean?
• 18:1818:18, 9 August 2023 diff hist +4‎ m File talk:K129 HGE recoverysite.png ‎ →‎What do the circles mean?
• 18:1718:17, 9 August 2023 diff hist +1,951‎ File talk:K129 HGE recoverysite.png ‎ →‎What do the circles mean?: new section Tag: New topic

2 August 2023

• 13:3213:32, 2 August 2023 diff hist +230‎ Ethel D. Allen ‎ →‎Later life: more specific info about the Dr. Ethel D. Allen School, and a citation. also, add paragraph break and rename section
• 03:1603:16, 2 August 2023 diff hist −3‎ m Airbus A320 family ‎ Make list items parallel (they're all place names that are objects of the preposition "in"; we aren't trying to say "assembly takes place in in Mobile")

30 July 2023

• 04:0304:03, 30 July 2023 diff hist +3‎ m Brother Jonathan (steamer) ‎ →‎Initial construction: Added pronoun "it", meaning the ship, as a subject for the phrase "set a record". We were formerly re-using the subject of the sentence, but that is "its route"; it is the ship, not its route, that set the record.
• 03:5003:50, 30 July 2023 diff hist +9‎ Pfeiffer Big Sur State Park ‎ →‎Pfeiffer Ranch Resort: add conjunction to join the two objects of "gave" (namely, "beds" and "meals")

29 July 2023

• 14:5614:56, 29 July 2023 diff hist +277‎ Draft talk:Cleveland G. Allen ‎ →‎The Birth of a Nation: new section current Tag: New topic

28 July 2023

• 20:1720:17, 28 July 2023 diff hist −14‎ Ethel D. Allen ‎ →‎Early life: We already said what state Philadelphia is, in the infobox. Twice.

27 July 2023

• 14:5614:56, 27 July 2023 diff hist +8‎ Atlantic City–Brigantine Connector ‎ →‎Planning: We don't know what would have happened had the connector not been built; we only know what Mr. Wynn said would happen. Not to cast doubt on Mr Wynn's veracity, but statements made during negotiation that further one side's position should be taken with a grain of salt.

26 July 2023

• 02:4702:47, 26 July 2023 diff hist −7‎ Willow Island disaster ‎ →‎Collapse: copy edit one sentence
• 02:4302:43, 26 July 2023 diff hist −1‎ m Ohio River ‎ →‎{{anchor|Gaspard-Joseph Chaussegros de Léry, 1729}}Gaspard-Joseph Chaussegros de Léry (1729): remove stray double-quote

21 July 2023

• 13:1713:17, 21 July 2023 diff hist +151‎ User talk:TypoBoy ‎ →‎Typo: Reply Tag: Reply

17 July 2023

• 17:3917:39, 17 July 2023 diff hist +56‎ Antoine Walker ‎ →‎Personal life: Wikilink South Side and Mount Carmel High School. Put "born", "raised", and "engaged" in chronological order. Remove the adverb "previously", because it's redundant when we're giving dates. Employee number eight made baskets!

16 July 2023

• 20:0720:07, 16 July 2023 diff hist +2‎ Materia medica ‎ We mean "medications" -- substances used for healing -- rather than "medicine" -- the science and practice of healing.

14 July 2023

• 14:4914:49, 14 July 2023 diff hist +22‎ 44th and Parkside Ballpark ‎ fix coordinates -- the map erroneously put the ballpark on the east side of 44th Street

11 July 2023

• 19:3519:35, 11 July 2023 diff hist +10‎ USS Marmora (1862) ‎ →‎Construction and characteristics: We've already said which civil war we're talking about, so we can use the customary name.

10 July 2023

• 20:5720:57, 10 July 2023 diff hist +6‎ List of Gunsmoke (TV series) episodes ‎ →‎Season 2 (1956–57): correct film title; remove unwanted comma, fix misspelling, et c.
• 20:5420:54, 10 July 2023 diff hist +4‎ Blue Washington ‎ →‎Acting career: film title correction
• 20:5420:54, 10 July 2023 diff hist +4‎ List of people from the Halifax Regional Municipality ‎ →‎Actors: film title correction

9 July 2023

• 05:1105:11, 9 July 2023 diff hist +15‎ SW1C ‎ →‎Early developments: Use piped link, as above, to put the disambiguating " (radar)" in the link but not the text.
• 05:0605:06, 9 July 2023 diff hist 0‎ USS Nevada (BB-36) ‎ →‎Design: No hyphen in "Nevada class" when the phrase is not used as a modifier (e.g. "The Nevada class comprised two Nevada-class battleships")
• 05:0305:03, 9 July 2023 diff hist 0‎ USS Nevada (BB-36) ‎ →‎Design: I personally prefer the pronoun "it" to "she/her" for a ship, but the main thing is to be consistent. So I'm changing this "its" to "her", to match the whole rest of the article. Also, to finish my truncated previous edit summary, "tonnage" is a measure of the cargo volume of a ship, so if we're talking about its weight in tons, we want to say (as we now do) "displacement".
• 04:5404:54, 9 July 2023 diff hist +29‎ USS Nevada (BB-36) ‎ →‎Design: If we're measuring it in long tons, then we're talking about displacement, meaning the actual weight of the ship if you could put it on a giant scale. "Tonnage

7 July 2023

• 19:2019:20, 7 July 2023 diff hist −2‎ Inertia coupling ‎ Typo fix. For I am. . . TYPO BOY!! Tag: Manual revert

6 July 2023

• 15:2115:21, 6 July 2023 diff hist 0‎ Mandarin (bureaucrat) ‎ "Mandarin square" is not capitalized; see the mandarin square article

4 July 2023

• 01:4401:44, 4 July 2023 diff hist −23‎ Chiddy Bang ‎ Clean up reference to city and state. We say what state Philadelphia is in in the Infobox; that should cover it.

30 June 2023

• 15:2815:28, 30 June 2023 diff hist +26‎ Erie Insurance Group ‎ add advertisement tag

27 June 2023

• 18:0718:07, 27 June 2023 diff hist −2‎ m The Narrows ‎ →‎Post-European contact

22 June 2023

• 15:3615:36, 22 June 2023 diff hist −11‎ Simplified Chinese characters ‎ The country is most commonly known as Taiwan, which is why the linked article is named "Taiwan". The first thing its lede sentence says is that it's "officially the Republic of China (ROC)". Let's use the common name here, for readability, and let hypertext do its job.
• 15:0715:07, 22 June 2023 diff hist +1‎ Diamonds Are Forever (film) ‎ →‎Plot: Though SS Canberra was a cruise ship later in its career (when air travel crushed the ocean-liner business), it was primarily an ocean liner before its 1972 refitting, and was certainly acting as one here, given that Bond uses it to get somewhere.