Talk:2016 Monaco Grand Prix

Latest comment: 8 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 11:47, 4 August 2016 (UTC)Reply

Reviewing this one as part of backlog drive. MWright96 (talk) 11:47, 4 August 2016 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Lead

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  • Remove the second link to Formula One
  Done

Background

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All   Done

Free practice

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  • "two ninety-minute practice and one sixty-minute session were held before qualifying on Saturday." - change to 90-minute and 60-minute
The way it is now is well within the regulations of WP:NUMNOTES.
  • "in order to minimize road-closure disruptions to local residents." - change to Minimise
  Done
  • Remove the Sebastian Vettel and Lewis Hamilton wikilinks
  Done Removed all duplinks in the article

Qualifying

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  • "all drivers except for the Force Indias went out on the ultrasoft tyres to set their first lap times." - can be either Force India cars or drivers
  Done
  • " it were the two Manors of Rio Haryanto and Pascal Wehrlein," - ditto
  Done
  • Delink Max Verstappen, Joylon Palmer, Jenson Button and Rio Haryanto as all four men are linked in the earlier Free Practice sub-section
  • Same for Felipe Massa, Valtteri Bottas, Kimi Räikkönen, Fernando Alonso, Romain Grosjean, and Williams

Race

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  • All mentions of the word "pitted" should be "made a pit stop" to reduce motorsport slang
  Done
  • "for intermediates over the following laps." - intermediate tyres
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  • "Another VSC period was called while both Saubers pitted to repair damages," - change to either Sauber cars or drivers
  Done
  • Remove the link to the 2008 race since its linked in the background sub-section

Post-race

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  • Delink Toto Wolff as he is linked in the background sub-section
  • "since his slower pace was due to low temperatures in his tyres." - I believe rewording it low tyre temperatures would be better
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That's what I found. On hold MWright96 (talk) 14:38, 4 August 2016 (UTC)Reply

@MWright96: Thank you for your review! I believe it is all taken care of. Zwerg Nase (talk) 13:24, 5 August 2016 (UTC)Reply
@Zwerg Nase: Yes it has. Promoted to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 13:45, 5 August 2016 (UTC)Reply