Talk:Hands on Me (Jason Derulo song)

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Hands on Me (Jason Derulo song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: MaranoFan (talk · contribs) 14:45, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 18:35, 30 July 2024 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

   b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a. (reference section):

   b. (citations to reliable sources):

   c. (OR):

   d. (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a. (major aspects):

   b. (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

   b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

I will review your article now, as you are due this one! --K. Peake 18:35, 30 July 2024 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Shouldn't the infobox list the song as being from Nu King?

• An experienced editor placed this note regarding this. I am not completely sure if I agree with their reasoning but figured it wasn't worth the conflict.--NØ 16:13, 31 July 2024 (UTC)

• "They wrote it with" → "They wrote the song with"
• "and its producers," → "and the producers,"
• ""Hands on Me" describes a romance" → "it describes a romance"
• Pipe Music critics to Music journalism
• "about the interpolation as well as" → "about the interpolation, as well as"
• Wikilink New Zealand Hot Singles per MOS:LINK2SECT
• Pipe BGM to Circle Digital Chart
• "The music video for it features an appearance by Paris Hilton and depicts" → "The accompanying music video features an appearance by Paris Hilton, and depicts"
• "a medley of "Hands on Me" with" → "a medley of the song with"

Background and release

• Add a comma after "Savage Love (Laxed – Siren Beat)"
• "in a new one" shouldn't this be something like "on a new song"? Also, please invoke the ref at the end of this sentence per this usage of direct quoting.

Composition

• Retitle to Composition and lyrics
• Wikilink doo-wop on the audio sample text
• "Sonically, "Hands on Me" has" → "Musically, "Hands on Me" has" and merge with the above para
• Change neighbour to neighbor per American English

Critical reception

• Merge with the below section and retitle to Reception and promotion
• Wikilink Rolling Stone India to itself per MOS:LINK2SECT
• "believed the song "butchered"" → "believed the song "butcher[ed]""
• "the age of 9 and" → "the age of nine and" per MOS:NUM

Music video

• Make this the second para of the above section
• Wikilink music video on the img text
• "let's see it"." → "let's see it."" per MOS:QUOTE on full sentences
• Change neighbour to neigbor
• "it. That's hot"." → "it. That's hot.""

Credits and personnel

• Good

Charts

• Pipe HRT to Croatian Radiotelevision

Release history

• You need to add multiple citations to the reference to back up a various release

References

• Fix the date formatting for ref 4
• Add different countries citations to ref 9 for the various release
• Pipe HRT to Croatian Radiotelevision on ref 11
• Cite Circle Chart as publisher instead on ref 13
• Wikilink Rolling Stone India on ref 18 per MOS:LINK2SECT

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed; this was finished today even though I wasn't too sure if I'd make that! --K. Peake 20:12, 30 July 2024 (UTC)

Oh wow, the speed. I'll have these addressed within 48 hours. I'm trying to complete this one other article and I will keep getting hella OCD if I do not finish that first, lol.--NØ 20:52, 30 July 2024 (UTC)

• This should be good to go, I think, Kyle Peake. Thank you for the review and for the impeccable speed as always.--NØ 16:13, 31 July 2024 (UTC)

• ✓ Pass now, thanks right back at you for the tip-top response! --K. Peake 19:23, 31 July 2024 (UTC)

Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 01:23, 13 August 2024 (UTC)

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• Comment or view
• Article history

)

• ... that a lyric in the song "Hands on Me" is about Meghan Trainor being unable to have sex due to pelvic floor damage?

• Source: Workin' on It Pod

• ALT1: ... that a Jason Derulo and Meghan Trainor song was characterized as "horny housewife music" by a critic? Source: Exclaim!
• Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Ōshima-tsumugi

Improved to Good Article status by MaranoFan (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 68 past nominations.

NØ 20:06, 31 July 2024 (UTC).

• Recently promoted to GA, sources and prose look good, no concerns of copyright violation, QPQ completed. Source is interesting and the source checks out; I personally prefer hook one. This is my first DYK review so please yell at me if I did anything weird. IanTEB (talk) 21:19, 5 August 2024 (UTC)
  • IanTEB can you clarify whether "hook one" means ALT0 (the first hook) or ALT1 (the second), and expand on why you prefer it? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 11:51, 12 August 2024 (UTC)
    • @AirshipJungleman29: My apologies. I was referring to ALT0; I personally think a fact about the song itself is more interesting than the thoughts of a critic, but it's not a particular strong preference. I believe either could definitely work. IanTEB (talk) 11:54, 12 August 2024 (UTC)