Talk:My Back Was a Bridge for You to Cross

Latest comment: 1 month ago by Sammi Brie in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Nominator: QuietHere (talk · contribs) 17:29, 11 April 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 03:41, 16 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

This is a quickfail. At this time, I think the organization of background information is not where it should be for this type of article. The reception section also requires significant work to bring it to standard; it is overly quote-based.

Suggestions for the nominator:

  • Increase the detail on the background and development of the album. Add some context about past releases. Look at other album GAs to see how this is done.
  • A Reception section should not be a string light of quotes. Right now, there is a quote in every sentence beyond the summary of this section! Keep a handful of quotes whose wording is particularly useful or noteworthy and paraphrase the rest.
  • Review best practices for albums at MOS:ALBUM.
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