Talk:So It Goes.../GA1
Latest comment: 1 month ago by Brachy0008 in topic GA Review
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Nominator: Brachy0008 (talk · contribs) 04:20, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Heartfox (talk · contribs) 17:23, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
- "An incorporation of → a combination of
- "The BBC asserted that" → It would be helpful to say who wrote the article as this implies that the company as a whole is asserting this
- "a dispute with" redundant
- "; "So It Goes..." being one of them" → ",including "So It Goes"
- "Görres recalled that it was a "strange" session for him because he had just gotten out of the shower wrapped in a towel, but he was "very thankful for that"" → I don't know about this sentence
- "might help her out of her fixations" → specify who "her" is. what fixations?
- "commended" → commented?
- "deemed the song insignificant, but cringe-worthy" → why the use of "but"?
- "also calling it" → also called it
- studios and track length are given in infobox but not body
Heartfox (talk) 17:23, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
- for point 5, it is taken from the source itself. brachy08 (chat here lol) 00:09, 11 July 2024 (UTC)
- also, the source did not specify what fixations. brachy08 (chat here lol) 00:10, 11 July 2024 (UTC)
- commended is another word for praise. brachy08 (chat here lol) 00:11, 11 July 2024 (UTC)
- As a follow-up, I noticed that Time, Associated Press, NZ Herald, Elite Daily, Bustle refs lack authors. There is also an issue with the Consequence ref formatting. Heartfox (talk) 05:24, 11 July 2024 (UTC)
- i should have addressed all ir points now brachy08 (chat here lol) 23:58, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Heartfox? brachy08 (chat here lol) 00:32, 15 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Brachy0008: I passed the article. If you are able, please consider reviewing my current GAN for Your Girl or leaving comments a my current FAC. Thanks, Heartfox (talk) 02:09, 15 July 2024 (UTC)
- thanks! i’ll be sure to pop by your articles that you nominated brachy08 (chat here lol) 03:25, 15 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Brachy0008: I passed the article. If you are able, please consider reviewing my current GAN for Your Girl or leaving comments a my current FAC. Thanks, Heartfox (talk) 02:09, 15 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Heartfox? brachy08 (chat here lol) 00:32, 15 July 2024 (UTC)
- i should have addressed all ir points now brachy08 (chat here lol) 23:58, 13 July 2024 (UTC)