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York City F.C. seasons

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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page. No further edits should be made to this page. The closing editor's comments were: 10 days, 5 support, 0 oppose. Promote. Scorpion0422 16:05, 4 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I have been doing some more work on this list over the last few days, and has had a peer review which has brough up some useful comments. I believe it meets the FL criteria and is made to match other football seasons Featured Lists. Thanks, Mattythewhite 11:28, 25 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Comment - the first thing that pops out at me is that on the first line it says "York City City Football Club". - PeeJay 11:36, 25 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

  Done Fixed. Feel like a right idiot. Thanks for telling me.. Mattythewhite 11:38, 25 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]
No problem. Got some more comments though:
  • Myself, I would suggest removing the links from the divisions column of the table, as the divisions are already linked to in the Key section.
  • According to the Football League Trophy page, the competition's official name was the Associate Members Cup only until 1992, but you have it by that name up until 2000.
  • If the FCHD is correct, though, as it usually is, then the Wikipedia article must be wrong. Before changing the York City seasons article, we should probably see which source is correct. - PeeJay 12:01, 25 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Other than that, I would be happy to support this FLC. - PeeJay 11:43, 25 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support as long as the following minor changes are made to the lead:
  1. "They were elected to play in the The Football League...." - double "the"
  Done Removed "the". Mattythewhite 12:20, 25 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  1. "the highest the club has ever reached in this competition" - should be "furthest", not "highest", given that the cup does not work on a table basis
  Done Reworded to "furthest". Mattythewhite 12:20, 25 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Other than that it looks excellent - nice one! ChrisTheDude 12:11, 25 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Comments I participated at peer review where concerns/suggestions raised were dealt with satisfactorily. One or two more things...

  • you might want to highlight seasons when the club's goalscoring record was broken (Gillingham F.C. seasons does it by bolding the relevant scorer's name and total).
  • you also might want to highlight when the division changes, either by promotion, relegation or league reorganisation, done on Gillingham F.C. seasons and on featured list Birmingham City F.C. seasons by bolding the division column entry. (This was done on BCFC seasons for two reasons. In general, breaking up the long list of division abbreviations makes it easier to read if you're just glancing down that area of the list. And in particular, for accessibility - bolding provides an extra visual cue that something's changed, to help those of us whose defective colour vision stops us making full use of the colour-coding in the league position column.)
  • the FA Cup resumed in 1945-46.

Struway2 14:22, 29 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Support all issues dealt with satisfactorily. Well done. Struway2 11:20, 30 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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