Wikipedia:Peer review/PFA Players' Player of the Year/archive1

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Another potential FL nomination, please let me know if there's anything I still need to work on. One major question - do you think the article needs to be re-named to "List of PFA Players' Player of the Year winners" or some such? For info, there's pretty much no details available in reliable sources on other aspects of the subject such as how it came to be instigated, the trophy itself, the voting procedure, or anything like that. Anyway, I eagerly await your comments...... ChrisTheDude (talk) 12:05, 14 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

  • Consider linking union?
  • Why are clubs centrally aligned in the table?
  • "place each spring" is it me or does that sound a little American? I'd say takes place every spring... personal opinion though..
  • "and the winner of the award, along with the winners of the PFA's other awards, announced at " is announced?
  • What does FWA stand for? Expand it on its first use.
  • Oh, and while you're there, put (PFA) after your first mention of the expanded version.
  • Flags don't appear to sort properly for me. I've fixed the problem...
  • Presumably the award was a First Division award before the Premier League existed? Could you clarify that?
  • Force column widths in the breakdowns to be the same for all tables.
  • The non-cite web references need full stops.

But otherwise it's FL quality. The Rambling Man (talk) 12:53, 14 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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