Talk:February Shadows

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Nice job. You'll need to proof read it again, and check how to properly list your sources, especially with an internet link. Either check your class notes (I showed how to do it in class several times), or look on the WP:Cite instructions. I've asked for an expert opinion on this, and I'm hoping she'll do that. I've done some minor tweaking, de-orphaned, and a few other things. Good job so far! Auntieruth55 (talk) 22:03, 19 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! this is Kellie from class. I just read your article and I think it's great! You've included a lot of detailed information, and really explained not only your topic, but also relevant background information which is important to the text. The only suggestion I would make would to be to maybe discuss the liberation of the female voice as a theme. You mention it in the reception section, but do not directly address it as a theme. You could probably add a sentence or two about this in the mother/daughter relationship section, though. Overall, I think you have done a wonderful job! :) Santolinek (talk) 01:45, 21 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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Hi Para, this is a really good article—I hope that you are quite proud of it and continue to edit after your class ends. :-) A few comments:

In the first sentence's translations, you have English (German) [...] German (English). Try to keep it consistent.
"Unpolitical"? Why not "apolitical"?
Citations can be formatted Wikipedia-style by using templates like {{cite book}} / {{cite web}}, etc. —Ed (talk • majestic titan) 02:09, 22 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]