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This page is to nominate fresh articles to appear in the "Did you know" section on the Main Page with a "hook" (an interesting note). Nominations that have been approved are moved to a staging area and then promoted into the Queue. To update this page, it.
Count of DYK Hooks | ||
Section | # of Hooks | # Verified |
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June 26 | ||
June 28 | 1 | 1 |
July 1 | 1 | 1 |
July 5 | 1 | |
July 7 | 2 | |
July 8 | 1 | 1 |
July 10 | 1 | |
July 13 | 3 | 2 |
July 15 | 1 | |
July 16 | 1 | |
July 17 | 3 | 3 |
July 18 | 3 | |
July 19 | 4 | 2 |
July 21 | 3 | 3 |
July 22 | 2 | 1 |
July 23 | 3 | 1 |
July 24 | 7 | 4 |
July 25 | 9 | 5 |
July 26 | 6 | 3 |
July 27 | 6 | 4 |
July 28 | 16 | 9 |
July 29 | 9 | 6 |
July 30 | 5 | 1 |
July 31 | 3 | 1 |
August 1 | 7 | 3 |
August 2 | 4 | 3 |
August 3 | 6 | 2 |
August 4 | 4 | 3 |
August 5 | 12 | 2 |
August 6 | 8 | 3 |
August 7 | 5 | 2 |
August 8 | 8 | 5 |
August 9 | 5 | 4 |
August 10 | 12 | 5 |
August 11 | 6 | 2 |
August 12 | 5 | 3 |
August 13 | 4 | 3 |
August 14 | 10 | 6 |
August 15 | 7 | 3 |
August 16 | 9 | 3 |
August 17 | 9 | 3 |
August 18 | 11 | 8 |
August 19 | 10 | 5 |
August 20 | 7 | 4 |
August 21 | 5 | 3 |
August 22 | 4 | |
August 23 | 5 | |
August 24 | 7 | |
August 25 | 9 | |
August 26 | 3 | |
Total | 273 | 123 |
Last updated 15:50, 26 August 2024 UTC Current time is 15:54, 26 August 2024 UTC [refresh] |
Instructions for nominators
If this is your first nomination, please read the DYK rules before continuing. Further information can be found at the DYK guidelines.
Frequently asked questions
How do I write an interesting hook?
Successful hooks tend to have several traits. Most importantly, they share a surprising or intriguing fact. They give readers enough context to understand the hook, but leave enough out to make them want to learn more. They are written for a general audience who has no prior knowledge of or interest in the topic area. Lastly, they are concise, and do not attempt to cover multiple facts or present information about the subject beyond what's needed to understand the hook.
When will my nomination be reviewed?
This page is often backlogged. As long as your submission is still on the page, it will stay there until an editor reviews it. Since editors are encouraged to review the oldest submissions first, it may take several weeks until your submission is reviewed. In the meantime, please consider reviewing another submission (not your own) to help reduce the backlog (see instructions below).
Where is my hook?
If you can't find the nomination you submitted to this nominations page, it may have been approved and is on the approved nominations page waiting to be promoted. It could also have been added to one of the prep areas, promoted from prep to a queue, or is on the main page.
If the nominated hook is in none of those places, then the nomination has probably been rejected. Such a rejection usually only occurs if it was at least a couple of weeks old and had unresolved issues for which any discussion had gone stale. If you think your nomination was unfairly rejected, you can query this on the DYK discussion page, but as a general rule such nominations will only be restored in exceptional circumstances.
Instructions for reviewers
Any editor who was not involved in writing/expanding or nominating an article may review it by checking to see that the article meets all the DYK criteria (long enough, new enough, no serious editorial or content issues) and the hook is cited. Editors may also alter the suggested hook to improve it, suggest new hooks, or even lend a hand and make edits to the article to which the hook applies so that the hook is supported and accurate. For a more detailed discussion of the DYK rules and review process see the supplementary guidelines and the WP:Did you know/Reviewing guide.
To post a comment or review on a DYK nomination, follow the steps outlined below:
- Look through this page, Template talk:Did you know, to find a nomination you would like to comment on.
- Click the "Review or comment" link at the top of the nomination. You will be taken to the nomination subpage.
- The top of the page includes a list of the DYK criteria. Check the article to ensure it meets all the relevant criteria.
- To indicate the result of the review (i.e., whether the nomination passes, fails, or needs some minor changes), leave a signed comment on the page. Please begin with one of the 5 review symbols that appear at the top of the edit screen, and then indicate all aspects of the article that you have reviewed; your comment should look something like the following:
If you are the first person to comment on the nomination, there will be a lineArticle length and age are fine, no copyvio or plagiarism concerns, reliable sources are used. But the hook needs to be shortened.
:* <!-- REPLACE THIS LINE TO WRITE FIRST COMMENT, KEEPING :* -->
showing you where you should put the comment. - Save the page.
- After the nomination is approved, a bot will automatically list the nomination page on Template talk:Did you know/Approved.
If there is any problem or concern about a nomination, please consider notifying the nominator by placing {{subst:DYKproblem|Article|header=yes|sig=yes}} on the nominator's talk page.
Advanced procedures
How to promote an accepted hook
At-a-glance instructions on how to promote an approved hook to a prep area
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Handy copy sources:
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How to remove a rejected hook
- Open the DYK nomination subpage of the hook you would like to remove. (It's best to wait several days after a reviewer has rejected the hook, just in case someone contests or the article undergoes a large change.)
- In the window where the DYK nomination subpage is open, replace the line
{{DYKsubpage
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with|passed=no
. Then save the page. This has the effect of wrapping up the discussion on the DYK nomination subpage in a blue archive box and stating that the nomination was unsuccessful, as well as adding the nomination to a category for archival purposes.
How to remove a hook from the prep areas or queue
- Edit the prep area or queue where the hook is and remove the hook and the credits associated with it.
- Go to the hook's nomination subpage (there should have been a link to it in the credits section).
- View the edit history for that page
- Go back to the last version before the edit where the hook was promoted, and revert to that version to make the nomination active again.
- Add a new icon on the nomination subpage to cancel the previous tick and leave a comment after it explaining that the hook was removed from the prep area or queue, and why, so that later reviewers are aware of this issue.
- Add a transclusion of the template back to this page so that reviewers can see it. It goes under the date that it was first created/expanded/listed as a GA. You may need to add back the day header for that date if it had been removed from this page.
- If you removed the hook from a queue, it is best to either replace it with another hook from one of the prep areas, or to leave a message at WT:DYK asking someone else to do so.
How to move a nomination subpage to a new name
- Don't; it should not ever be necessary, and will break some links which will later need to be repaired. Even if you change the title of the article, you don't need to move the nomination page.
Nominations
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Jab Se Tere Naina
- ... that Ranbir Kapoor gave close to 100 takes for the 2007 Hindi-language song "Jab Se Tere Naina"?
- Reviewed:
KunalAggarwal95 (talk) 16:50, 6 July 2024 (UTC).
- As this is currently the oldest nomination that is completely unreviewed, @Launchballer: if you have time, could you please take a look at this? Thanks. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 00:21, 15 August 2024 (UTC)
Sure, I was planning on reviewing this anyway. (I keep finding more and more stuff to say about Eliza Legzdina.) This is long enough and new enough. I don't see why you'd say 'close to 100 takes' when the quote in the source says "I did 45 or 50 takes one day and [then t]he next morning [...] I had to do another 70 takes"; come again with "more than 100". I would have raised my hackles at Missmalini.com, but it's been discussed at RSN and found to be fine so I'll take it. QPQ unnecessary. There's a fair amount of close paraphrasing throughout the article and this should be remedied before this can be ticked off.--Launchballer 07:22, 15 August 2024 (UTC)
- My English is bad. If an editor could correct the problem of close paraphrasing, it would be great. KunalAggarwal95 (talk) 16:06, 15 August 2024 (UTC)
- @KunalAggarwal95: It is your responsibility to ensure that the text you add to Wikipedia does not have close paraphrasing. If your English is not strong enough to prevent this, you might need to reconsider how you can contribute to English Wikipedia, or consider contributing in another language's Wikipedia instead. Are you able to remove the close paraphrasing, or should this nomination be closed as unsuccessful? Z1720 (talk) 15:43, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
- Do you mean 'my English is bad and I don't know what close paraphrasing is'? If so, read that link. It's quite serious. Otherwise, what Z1720 said.--Launchballer 15:51, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
- Check article. KunalAggarwal95 (talk) 17:20, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
- @KunalAggarwal95: Better. I still think you should update the hook and article as I've suggested above.--Launchballer 08:37, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that Ranbir Kapoor gave more than 100 takes for the 2007 Hindi-language song "Jab Se Tere Naina"? KunalAggarwal95 (talk) 12:02, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
Fine by me. I recommend WP:DYKTRIMming "the 2007 Hindi-language song", but this should be good to go.--Launchballer 13:02, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
- Noting that JioSaavn is not a RS, and the last line is pure WP:FANCRUFT. Sohom (talk) 21:05, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
- Check the article. KunalAggarwal95 (talk) 06:45, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
- I just did. It's now below 1500 characters and a stub.--Launchballer 12:57, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
- Check the article. KunalAggarwal95 (talk) 06:45, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
- Noting that JioSaavn is not a RS, and the last line is pure WP:FANCRUFT. Sohom (talk) 21:05, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that Ranbir Kapoor gave more than 100 takes for the 2007 Hindi-language song "Jab Se Tere Naina"? KunalAggarwal95 (talk) 12:02, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
- @KunalAggarwal95: Better. I still think you should update the hook and article as I've suggested above.--Launchballer 08:37, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
- Check article. KunalAggarwal95 (talk) 17:20, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
- Do you mean 'my English is bad and I don't know what close paraphrasing is'? If so, read that link. It's quite serious. Otherwise, what Z1720 said.--Launchballer 15:51, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
- @KunalAggarwal95: It is your responsibility to ensure that the text you add to Wikipedia does not have close paraphrasing. If your English is not strong enough to prevent this, you might need to reconsider how you can contribute to English Wikipedia, or consider contributing in another language's Wikipedia instead. Are you able to remove the close paraphrasing, or should this nomination be closed as unsuccessful? Z1720 (talk) 15:43, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
- My English is bad. If an editor could correct the problem of close paraphrasing, it would be great. KunalAggarwal95 (talk) 16:06, 15 August 2024 (UTC)
Brought it to over 1500 characters. KunalAggarwal95 (talk) 15:05, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
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Alex Chilowicz
- ... that in December 2023, former Major League Soccer referee Alex Chilowicz began officiating in the English Football League after relocating to England?
- Reviewed:
US Referee (talk) 01:05, 1 July 2024 (UTC).
The third paragraph under Career needs a citation at the end. The LinkedIn source can only be used if it specifically references who referred to him as playing the saxophone within the article. However, that is clunky, and I recommend removing the source entirely. Why do you need four references for that one fact? It can be knocked down to one source. Otherwise, the article is long enough, new enough, and neutral with no copyright violations. SL93 (talk) 22:10, 25 July 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the feedback. I agree with your criticism and I'll make those changes accordingly. US Referee (talk) 19:54, 26 July 2024 (UTC)
- In the third paragraph under Career, I relied on sources within the linked articles, i.e. match reports for the matches Chilowicz refereed. His name appears in the linked articles next to a "Report" link that I figure to be the sources for these statements. I suppose I can just use those same sources in this article, but I thought that would likely be superfluous. US Referee (talk) 20:36, 26 July 2024 (UTC)
- US Referee It looks good except for one issue. The source does not say that he "refereed his first competitive match between senior national teams". If that cannot be sourced, it can also be removed from the article and then I can approve it. SL93 (talk) 21:01, 26 July 2024 (UTC)
- SL93 I thought this could be inferred by the fact that Chilowicz's international experience was strictly with CONCACAF and there is no counter-example, but I understand your point. Chilowicz's page at Soccerway (heretofore linked in External links) does indicate that this was his first and only such match. I've added it as a reference after that sentence. US Referee (talk) 21:16, 26 July 2024 (UTC)
Thank you. SL93 (talk) 21:21, 26 July 2024 (UTC)
- AirshipJungleman29 This is one of the oldest approved nominations. Is there something that you think is wrong or needs fixing? I'm pinging you because you're one of the main promoters, as we don't have many. SL93 (talk) 19:53, 19 August 2024 (UTC)
- I don't know if anything needs fixing, but we had the Olympics for much of the past month which greatly reduced the opportunities for sports hooks, and I've been less active after it finished. The hook itself is mildly interesting to me, if that's the concern. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 19:59, 19 August 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for your input. SL93 (talk) 20:00, 19 August 2024 (UTC)
- I don't know if anything needs fixing, but we had the Olympics for much of the past month which greatly reduced the opportunities for sports hooks, and I've been less active after it finished. The hook itself is mildly interesting to me, if that's the concern. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 19:59, 19 August 2024 (UTC)
- AirshipJungleman29 This is one of the oldest approved nominations. Is there something that you think is wrong or needs fixing? I'm pinging you because you're one of the main promoters, as we don't have many. SL93 (talk) 19:53, 19 August 2024 (UTC)
- SL93 I thought this could be inferred by the fact that Chilowicz's international experience was strictly with CONCACAF and there is no counter-example, but I understand your point. Chilowicz's page at Soccerway (heretofore linked in External links) does indicate that this was his first and only such match. I've added it as a reference after that sentence. US Referee (talk) 21:16, 26 July 2024 (UTC)
- US Referee It looks good except for one issue. The source does not say that he "refereed his first competitive match between senior national teams". If that cannot be sourced, it can also be removed from the article and then I can approve it. SL93 (talk) 21:01, 26 July 2024 (UTC)
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- I've removed the points I'd consider to be minor nitpicks and left a couple I do think should be addressed as they concern the factuality of the article. Apologies for going overboard. LittleLazyLass (Talk | Contributions) 00:01, 1 August 2024 (UTC)
I still don't love the party fingers usage, but it'd be silly to hold back the DYK over it in isolation. Hook looks good now, so I'd give this a stamp of approval. LittleLazyLass (Talk | Contributions) 03:16, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
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David B. Gillespie
- ... that David Gillespie was the first person granted a document in the nature of a diploma from the University of North Carolina?
- Source: Battle, Kemp Plummer (1907). History of the University of North Carolina: from its Beginning to the Death of President Swain, 1789–1868 (PDF). Vol. I. Raleigh, North Carolina: Edwards & Broughton Printing Company. p. 77 – via the Wikimedia Foundation.
- ALT1: ... that the first person granted a document in the nature of a diploma from the University of North Carolina was David Gillespie? Source: Battle, Kemp Plummer (1907). History of the University of North Carolina: from its Beginning to the Death of President Swain, 1789–1868 (PDF). Vol. I. Raleigh, North Carolina: Edwards & Broughton Printing Company. p. 77 – via the Wikimedia Foundation.
- ALT2: ... that David Gillespie was the chief surveyor under Andrew Ellicott on the commission to determine the thirty-first parallel? Source: Holmes, Jack D. L. (April 1966). "The Southern Boundary Commission, the Chattahoochee River, and the Florida Seminoles, 1799". The Florida Historical Quarterly. 44 (4): 312–337. JSTOR 30147229.
- Reviewed:
Aneirinn (talk) 08:43, 5 July 2024 (UTC).
: Article is new enough, and long enough, and predominantly soured with public domain content so no apparent copyright issues. However, I find none of the hooks interesting to a wide audience (an increasingly common issue with DYK). And despite the article title, no reliable sources seem to use the middle initial "B.": where does this come from? And spot checking sources, Battle 1890 does not seem to have a page 170, nor mention David Gillespie anywhere. --Animalparty! (talk) 16:32, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
- I originally used the wrong book as the source. The source I was using had combined the two books in one pdf and I had missed that. Also, concerning his middle name, I suppose you are saying that "Death at Red Springs". The Weekly Star. Vol. XXIX. Wilmington, North Carolina: North Carolina Newspapers, Digital North Carolina. June 10, 1898. p. 1. is not a reliable source for this? If so, could you please clarify if that is correct? Aneirinn (talk) 18:55, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
- If that newspaper obit (including its earlier printing on June 5, 1898) is the only source using "B", and no scholar has used it since, then it's most likely a one-off error (typos, misspellings, and incorrect info is common in short obits from the time): note there was a Dr. David B(ryson) Gillespie of Bladen County who died in 1905 mentioned in NC newspapers, and may have caused conflation. Find a Grave uses the middle B, but it's an unreliable user-generated source and the tombstone image does not corroborate it. Since David Gillespie (politician) already exists, David Gillespie (surveyor) or David Gillespie (American politician) may be more appropriate titles in line with predominant form of name. --Animalparty! (talk) 19:40, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
- Dr. David B. Gillespie (February 24, 1815–January 2, 1905), who attended the Medical College of South Carolina, [Source:Catalogue of the Students Attending Lectures in the Medical College of the State of South Carolina, Session 1837–'38. Charleston: James S. Burges, 85 East-Bay. 1838. p. 6 – via Medical University of South Carolina, Waring Historical Library.] was a son of Major David B. Gillespie. [Source:"Descendants of David Gillespie" (PDF). NCGenWeb.] I think it is likely that the writer of the twice-published obituary wrote 'Major' David B. Gillespie for a reason, and that Dr. David B Gillespie is named after his father, which would have them both with middle names that start with the letter 'B'. This point of contention is not really an issue; however, I find it hard to believe that people would find the initial proposal or ALT1 dull or uninteresting. It is significant and interesting that, according to Kemp P. Battle, David B. Gillespie was the first person granted a document in the form of a diploma from the University of North Carolina, the oldest public university to confer degrees in the United States. This would also make David B. Gillespie the first person in the United States to receive a document in the form of a diploma from a public university. If more alternative hooks are necessary, I'm willing to provide additional options. Aneirinn (talk) 02:05, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
- If that newspaper obit (including its earlier printing on June 5, 1898) is the only source using "B", and no scholar has used it since, then it's most likely a one-off error (typos, misspellings, and incorrect info is common in short obits from the time): note there was a Dr. David B(ryson) Gillespie of Bladen County who died in 1905 mentioned in NC newspapers, and may have caused conflation. Find a Grave uses the middle B, but it's an unreliable user-generated source and the tombstone image does not corroborate it. Since David Gillespie (politician) already exists, David Gillespie (surveyor) or David Gillespie (American politician) may be more appropriate titles in line with predominant form of name. --Animalparty! (talk) 19:40, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
ALT3: ... that the first person granted a document in the form of a diploma from the University of North Carolina, the oldest public university to confer degrees in the United States, was David Gillespie?
Sources: Battle, Kemp Plummer (1907). History of the University of North Carolina: from its Beginning to the Death of President Swain, 1789–1868 (PDF). Vol. I. Raleigh, North Carolina: Edwards & Broughton Printing Company. p. 77 – via the Wikimedia Foundation.
Kapur, Geeta N. (2021). To Drink from the Well: The Struggle for Racial Equality at the Nation's Oldest Public University. Durham, North Carolina: Blair/Carolina Wren Press. ISBN 9781949467529 – via Stanford University Libraries.
ALT4: ... that David Gillespie was the first person granted a document in the form of a diploma from the University of North Carolina, the oldest public university to confer degrees in the United States?
Sources: Battle, Kemp Plummer (1907). History of the University of North Carolina: from its Beginning to the Death of President Swain, 1789–1868 (PDF). Vol. I. Raleigh, North Carolina: Edwards & Broughton Printing Company. p. 77 – via the Wikimedia Foundation.
Kapur, Geeta N. (2021). To Drink from the Well: The Struggle for Racial Equality at the Nation's Oldest Public University. Durham, North Carolina: Blair/Carolina Wren Press. ISBN 9781949467529 – via Stanford University Libraries.
- @Aneirinn: What does this need an additional reviewer for that @Animalparty: can't do themself?--Launchballer 18:08, 2 August 2024 (UTC)
- Greetings Launchballer, thank you for your response to this and my apologies for abandoning my nomination for Red Brown (politician). I had not realized that only prose characters are counted for the 5x expansion requirement. To answer your question, it seems as if the primordial reviewer has abandoned this nomination. I should also note that an additional source for the initial of the subject's middle name has been added to the article. Aneirinn (talk) 23:39, 5 August 2024 (UTC)
- Whatever source you were using for his middle name, you weren't citing it, so I've taken it out. I am happy to take over this review, except I don't find any of the hooks interesting either (ALTs 3 and 4 are bloated versions of ALTs 0 and 1 and ALT2 is just confusing).--Launchballer 06:00, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
- You are currently citing his middle name to Weeks (1887). I don't see where his initial appears in that source.--Launchballer 06:54, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
- Citations for this in the lead are unnecessary per MOS:LEAD. Two sources cited in the body of the article mention the initial of his middle name. One even has it written in its title. Saying it "fails verification" is a bit outside of the box here, so I have returned it. I changed one word on ALT2, hopefully it is an improvement at the very least. Aneirinn (talk) 07:10, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
- His initial isn't in the body anywhere.--Launchballer 07:15, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
- Citations for this in the lead are unnecessary per MOS:LEAD. Two sources cited in the body of the article mention the initial of his middle name. One even has it written in its title. Saying it "fails verification" is a bit outside of the box here, so I have returned it. I changed one word on ALT2, hopefully it is an improvement at the very least. Aneirinn (talk) 07:10, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
- You are currently citing his middle name to Weeks (1887). I don't see where his initial appears in that source.--Launchballer 06:54, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
- Whatever source you were using for his middle name, you weren't citing it, so I've taken it out. I am happy to take over this review, except I don't find any of the hooks interesting either (ALTs 3 and 4 are bloated versions of ALTs 0 and 1 and ALT2 is just confusing).--Launchballer 06:00, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
- Greetings Launchballer, thank you for your response to this and my apologies for abandoning my nomination for Red Brown (politician). I had not realized that only prose characters are counted for the 5x expansion requirement. To answer your question, it seems as if the primordial reviewer has abandoned this nomination. I should also note that an additional source for the initial of the subject's middle name has been added to the article. Aneirinn (talk) 23:39, 5 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Aneirinn: What does this need an additional reviewer for that @Animalparty: can't do themself?--Launchballer 18:08, 2 August 2024 (UTC)
Why must it be? Aneirinn (talk) 07:39, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
- WP:V. The lead is only allowed to be unreferenced if all its content is backed up in the body. As written, it would deserve {{not verified in body}}, which would disqualify it here.--Launchballer 07:50, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
- I am entirely at odds with the previous sentence. MOS:NAME says "The most complete name should appear at the beginning of the article to provide maximum information. Inclusion of middle names or initials... can be a useful form of disambiguation if there is more than one person known by that name." Which is the case here. MOS:LEAD supports the status quo. Would you please quote how WP:V supports that? It also mentions, "A source 'directly supports' a given piece of material if the information is present explicitly in the source, so that using this source to support the material is not a violation of WP:NOR. The location of any citation—including whether one is present in the article at all—is unrelated to whether a source directly supports the material." Aneirinn (talk) 23:45, 7 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Aneirinn: Launchballer is correct that the material needs to be either cited in the lead or mentioned and cited in the body. The paragraph of WP:V says only that there might exist a source that directly supports the material, which isn't relevant here. For DYK purpose, the material does need to be verifiable to its source in the article. theleekycauldron (talk • she/her) 06:55, 18 August 2024 (UTC)
Thank you theleekycauldron, I have updated the article. Aneirinn (talk) 19:59, 18 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Aneirinn: Launchballer is correct that the material needs to be either cited in the lead or mentioned and cited in the body. The paragraph of WP:V says only that there might exist a source that directly supports the material, which isn't relevant here. For DYK purpose, the material does need to be verifiable to its source in the article. theleekycauldron (talk • she/her) 06:55, 18 August 2024 (UTC)
- I am entirely at odds with the previous sentence. MOS:NAME says "The most complete name should appear at the beginning of the article to provide maximum information. Inclusion of middle names or initials... can be a useful form of disambiguation if there is more than one person known by that name." Which is the case here. MOS:LEAD supports the status quo. Would you please quote how WP:V supports that? It also mentions, "A source 'directly supports' a given piece of material if the information is present explicitly in the source, so that using this source to support the material is not a violation of WP:NOR. The location of any citation—including whether one is present in the article at all—is unrelated to whether a source directly supports the material." Aneirinn (talk) 23:45, 7 August 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Good to go with main or ALT - both verified. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:21, 24 July 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on July 7
Motibai Kapadia
- ... that Motibai Kapadia is credited as the first Indian female physician in Western medicine to have trained alongside men in India?
- ALT1: ... that the Indian female physician Motibai Kapadia was in charge of the Victoria Jubilee Hospital in Ahmedabad for 36 years from 1889? Source: "after returning from Britain, Kapadia was appointed in charge of the Victoria Jubilee Hospital for women, and remained there for 36 years."[3].
- Reviewed: ABC Cinema, Brighton
Whispyhistory (talk) 17:10, 11 July 2024 (UTC).
- @Whispyhistory:, "Scope-Journal.com" seems to be a hijacked journal. 48JCL 20:04, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- Thankyou... Whispyhistory (talk) 07:52, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
Article new enough (July 7), long enough (2300 B), sourced. ALT0 verified in source; can't access the source for ALT1, so assuming good faith. I think ALT0 is more interesting than ALT1. — Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧 (talk | contribs) 21:49, 12 August 2024 (UTC)
- I asked for insight on the DYK talk page because of the recent incorrect "first" hooks that have run. SL93 (talk) 21:40, 17 August 2024 (UTC)
- The problem with "the first Indian female physician in Western medicine to have trained alongside men in India" is that's an open-ended set. Nowhere do we have an authoritative list of every physician who ever trained in India. I'd be less concerned about something based on "Grant Medical College's first female graduate" because at least there, somebody could enumerate every person who has graduated from that school and look at each one. I assume that's what Kavitha Rao did, or at least she based her statement on somebody who did. RoySmith (talk) 13:02, 18 August 2024 (UTC)
- Whispyhistory
A new hook is needed. SL93 (talk) 00:24, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
- @BeanieFan11: thanks for the review! QPQ has been added. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 13:43, 26 July 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on July 8
1954 Busan Yongdusan fire
- ... that 30 royal portraits of Korean kings were completely lost in a 1954 fire in Busan, South Korea?
- Source: completely lost
- ALT1: ... that a 1954 fire in Busan, South Korea, caused the loss of more than 3,400 historic relics, including historic portraits of kings of the Joseon dynasty? Source: caused the loss of around 3,400 historic relics, including historic portraits of kings of the Joseon dynasty
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00101984hjw (talk) 04:23, 8 July 2024 (UTC).
- Please wikilink the target article in bold font in those hooks. Schwede66 05:46, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- I modified the original post to add wikilinks. 211.43.120.242 (talk) 14:00, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Helping out with a ref for both hooks [4] (also in the article). Quotes in orig. Korean with my translation: "위 기사에서도 볼 수 있듯, 4천여 점에 이르는 유물 가운데 자그마치 3천4백 점이 잿더미가 되는 대참사가 일어나죠... 이 가운데는 48점이나 되는 조선 역대 임금의 초상화도 들어 있었습니다. 그나마 불에 타고 남은 조각이라도 건진 것은 다 합쳐서 18점. 나머지 30점은 화마(火魔)에 흔적도 없이 사라지고 말았습니다." -> "As you can see in the article above, a disaster occurred in which 3,400 of 4,000 relics were reduced to ashes in an instant... Among these were 48 portraits of past kings of the Joseon Dynasty. 18 items among these were salvaged, with the remaining 30 being completely lost." 211.43.120.242 (talk) 13:58, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Nice work on a neglected topic. Just one thing... The old Kyung Hyang newspaper image shown in your source says "3400餘點이 釜山火災". '3400餘點' means 'more than 3400 and less than 3500' therefore 3400—3500. While 'around 3400' is not technically wrong, a more precise translation would be '3400—3500'. See this article: '여(餘)'는 수량을 나타내는 말(십·백·천·만 등) 뒤에 붙어 '그 수를 넘음'의 뜻을 더하는 접미사로 사용된다. '10만여'는 그 범위가 10만을 넘지만 11만 미만임을 나타낸다. 10만 1부터 10만 9999까지의 어느 수를 이른다. BorgQueen (talk) 23:21, 13 August 2024 (UTC)
- @211.43.120.242 and 00101984hjw: pinging. BorgQueen (talk) 23:29, 13 August 2024 (UTC)
- Much thanks for the review! I think it'll be fine to leave the hook for now as some of the sources ([5]) also cite "around 3400" (3400여 점) relics. -- 00101984hjw (talk) 00:38, 14 August 2024 (UTC)
- @00101984hjw: The very source you just cited translates "...1981년에 9만여 점으로 확대되어" (국문요약, page 165) to "...became more than 90,000 in 1981" (See the English abstract, page 203), not "around" 90,000. BorgQueen (talk) 01:27, 14 August 2024 (UTC)
- 한국어로 말씀드릴께요. 3400여점이란 말은 3400점이 넘는다는, 그러나 3500점이 안된다는 말입니다. 이걸 around 3400로 번역할 경우 3400에 약간 못미치는 수도 포함하기 때문에 정확한 번역이 아니라는거죠. BorgQueen (talk) 01:32, 14 August 2024 (UTC)
- @BorgQueen: Fair enough. Should we change the hook then? -- 00101984hjw (talk) 01:39, 14 August 2024 (UTC)
- I've reworded the hook. I'll fix the wording in the article too, when I have more time. Thanks for your understanding. BorgQueen (talk) 01:45, 14 August 2024 (UTC)
- @BorgQueen: Fair enough. Should we change the hook then? -- 00101984hjw (talk) 01:39, 14 August 2024 (UTC)
- 한국어로 말씀드릴께요. 3400여점이란 말은 3400점이 넘는다는, 그러나 3500점이 안된다는 말입니다. 이걸 around 3400로 번역할 경우 3400에 약간 못미치는 수도 포함하기 때문에 정확한 번역이 아니라는거죠. BorgQueen (talk) 01:32, 14 August 2024 (UTC)
- @00101984hjw: The very source you just cited translates "...1981년에 9만여 점으로 확대되어" (국문요약, page 165) to "...became more than 90,000 in 1981" (See the English abstract, page 203), not "around" 90,000. BorgQueen (talk) 01:27, 14 August 2024 (UTC)
Current nominations
Articles created/expanded on July 9
Articles created/expanded on July 10
Samsung and unions
- ... that the first employee strike action ever at Samsung Electronics by the Samsung trade union is now an indefinite strike? Source: https://www.nytimes.com/2024/06/06/business/samsung-first-strike-chips.html
- ALT1: ... that the first strike action ever at Samsung Electronics by the Samsung trade union lasted over three weeks in 2024? Source: http://world.kbs.co.kr/service/news_view.htm?lang=e&Seq_Code=187069
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Samoan branch of the Nazi Party
~ 🦝 Shushugah (he/him • talk) 16:01, 11 July 2024 (UTC).
Date, size, refs, hook, copyvio spotcheck, all GTG. I do have minor concern over the wording "is now", which might become not true at any moment. Ping User:AirshipJungleman29 for his 2c here. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 13:44, 26 July 2024 (UTC)
- Yeah, might be a month or more before this appears on the Main Page, and who knows what might have happened by then. Might be best to change to "became" or "became on [date]" or similar. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 13:46, 26 July 2024 (UTC)
- ALSO, "Samsung was sued by Samsung Electronics Service Workers trade union for stealing the corpse of a dead worker." why isn't the hook about that?????? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 13:48, 26 July 2024 (UTC)
- I removed this claim that Samsung was sued, because the lawsuit was over union-busting and not directly related to body snatching. I expanded from two different sources, about the context of suicide and body snatching by police. I will see if there are more sources, and a potential hook from that. ~ 🦝 Shushugah (he/him • talk) 12:14, 28 July 2024 (UTC)
- AirshipJungleman29 Piotrus I've proposed an alt hook to reflect end of strike, and also argue why focusing on corpse is problematic as a hook. ~ 🦝 Shushugah (he/him • talk) 23:14, 4 August 2024 (UTC)
- I see. ALT1>ALT0, then. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:49, 5 August 2024 (UTC)
- Shushugah the relevant paragraphs of the article need to be copyedited. Also, the article says that a one-day strike took place a month earlier, meaning ALT1 is surely incorrect? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 11:33, 12 August 2024 (UTC)
Shushugah has not responded after more than ten days, so I'm marking this for rejection as neither hook is viable. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 12:05, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
- Shushugah the relevant paragraphs of the article need to be copyedited. Also, the article says that a one-day strike took place a month earlier, meaning ALT1 is surely incorrect? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 11:33, 12 August 2024 (UTC)
- I see. ALT1>ALT0, then. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:49, 5 August 2024 (UTC)
- AirshipJungleman29 Piotrus I've proposed an alt hook to reflect end of strike, and also argue why focusing on corpse is problematic as a hook. ~ 🦝 Shushugah (he/him • talk) 23:14, 4 August 2024 (UTC)
- I removed this claim that Samsung was sued, because the lawsuit was over union-busting and not directly related to body snatching. I expanded from two different sources, about the context of suicide and body snatching by police. I will see if there are more sources, and a potential hook from that. ~ 🦝 Shushugah (he/him • talk) 12:14, 28 July 2024 (UTC)
Thank you both for the kind reviews and improving the article. The indefinite strike is over and there have been subsequent strikes. Some articles described this as "one" multi-part strike and others as separate strikes. In any case, I'm sorry didn't reply earlier and respect your decision to close. Wish you all a lovely day! ~ 🦝 Shushugah (he/him • talk) 18:09, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on July 11
Articles created/expanded on July 12
- @CSJJ104: Thanks for the review. I have tweaked both points per your recommendations so they should be suitable now. Anything else though, just let me know. Stevie fae Scotland (talk) 11:40, 27 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Stevie fae Scotland: The issue with Alt1 is that the sources do not state that the BUP still only have one elected representative. I would be happy if the article and hook both stated they won their first elected representative here. CSJJ104 (talk) 15:29, 27 July 2024 (UTC)
- @CSJJ104: No worries. I don't mind which way we do it so if that is the best option, I'm happy to go with that. Updated article to reflect that. Stevie fae Scotland (talk) 15:42, 27 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Stevie fae Scotland: The issue with Alt1 is that the sources do not state that the BUP still only have one elected representative. I would be happy if the article and hook both stated they won their first elected representative here. CSJJ104 (talk) 15:29, 27 July 2024 (UTC)
- @CSJJ104: Thanks for the review. I have tweaked both points per your recommendations so they should be suitable now. Anything else though, just let me know. Stevie fae Scotland (talk) 11:40, 27 July 2024 (UTC)
Updated Alt1 to replace the word "only" with the word "first" as discussed above. No further issues found and I am approving this nomination. CSJJ104 (talk) 20:49, 27 July 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on July 13
Margaret Coe
- ... that seven paintings by impressionist painter Margaret Coe belong to the Oregon Legislative Assembly, including Crater Lake #2 (pictured) on display at the Oregon State Capitol?
- Source: Oregon Legislature, Public Art Archive
- ALT1: ... that Crater Lake #2 (pictured), on display at the Oregon State Capitol, was painted by Margaret Coe, the 8th great granddaughter of colonist Robert Coe? Source: Oregon Legislature, Robert Coe, Puritan, Olmstead, Henry King (2021). Olmsted genealogy, third-fourth supplement, 1923-28. Hassell Street Press. ISBN 1013458974., "Curtis Claire Coe". Statesman Journal. October 29, 1996.
- Reviewed: NA
- Comment: I'm partial to Alt1. I'm a historian, so I imagine Alt0 is more interesting to a general audience.
AnotherColonialHistorian (talk) 21:26, 13 July 2024 (UTC).
- Not a review, but are we sure that the impressionist painting by Coe is released under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 International license? The source is offline, so it's difficult to check. I'm not sure if the Oregon Legislature and Coe would need to agree to jointly release the work in order for the license to be valid. Bremps... 19:04, 23 July 2024 (UTC)
- Updating with what I could find online. Ownership was transferred to the State of Oregon, per [6]. AnotherColonialHistorian (talk) 14:50, 27 July 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: As an art student, I concur with the nominator that ALT1 is more interesting to that field, though agree that ALT0 is a hook more interesting to a general audience. I would suggest deciding to retain only 2 of the images in this article given its short length, and would propose between the 3 currently in use to forgo the Our Lives in Paint image as it does not seem particularly helpful for the reader's understanding of her work in a way that the paintings already cover. Trailblazer101 (talk) 23:22, 19 August 2024 (UTC)
Nathaniel Coe
- ... that the founder of Hood River, Oregon, Nathaniel Coe (pictured),
a great-grandfather of Tony Goldwyn and descendant of Robert Coe,wrote the first women's rights law in the New York State Assembly?
- ALT1: ... that the founder of Hood River, Oregon, Nathaniel Coe (pictured),
a great-grandfather of Tony Goldwyn and descendant of Robert Coe,served four terms in the New York State Assembly? Source: History of Allegany county, History of Livingston County, New York - ALT2: ...
that the founder of Hood River, Oregon, Nathaniel Coe (pictured),Source: Columbia Gorge Newsa great-grandfather of Tony Goldwyn and descendant of Robert Coe,declined a nomination to serve on the United States Senate? - ALT3: ...
that the founder of Hood River, Oregon, Nathaniel Coe (pictured),Source: Oregon Historical Society Research Librarya great-grandfather of Tony Goldwyn and descendant of Robert Coe,was appointed by Millard Fillmore as a Special Postal Agent? - ALT4: ... that the founder of Hood River, Oregon, Nathaniel Coe (pictured),
a great-grandfather of Tony Goldwyn and descendant of Robert Coe,served in all three branches of state government? Source: Oregon Historical Society Research Library - Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Fred Thomas (British politician)
- Comment: Open to other hooks. He was a very interesting person to learn about!
AnotherColonialHistorian (talk) 15:16, 13 July 2024 (UTC).
Reviewing... will post my comments this afternoon! Flibirigit (talk) 15:52, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
- @AnotherColonialHistorian: With respect to the birth date footnote, does it mean that both sources state his birth date could be September 6 or September 12, or does it mean that one source says September 6 and the other September 12? Please clarify, thanks. Flibirigit (talk) 16:02, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Article was moved to the mainspace on July 13 and nominated the same day. Length is adequate. Sourcing is mostly complete, but I have two questions: Please clarify the question above on the footnote for the birthdate, and the source for the quotebox titled "For Susan Amelia Coe". I'm also curious on the purpose of the quotebox, as I am not sure how it is relevant. The article appears neutral in tone, and no plagiarism was detected. All images used in the article have a public domain license on the Commons. The nominated image is clear at a resolution and enhances the hook. QPQ has been completed although it was not required. All of the proposed hooks are verbose, and depend on the reader's knowledge of Tony Goldwyn and Robert Coe (colonist). I feel like these are not globally known persons and detract from the interest in clicking on Nathaniel Coe. I think shorter hooks would work better here, without the family members mentioned. Will wait for the nominator to reply before further analysis on the hooks. Overall the article looks to be in good shape and is a welcome contribution to Wikipedia! Flibirigit (talk) 20:24, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Flibirigit: How do these sound?
- ALT4a ... that the founder of Hood River, Oregon, Nathaniel Coe (pictured), served in all three branches of the state's government?
- ALT5 ... that Nathaniel Coe (pictured) and his wife led an initiative to change the name of Dog River, Oregon due to its vulgar origin?
- ALT5 is not exactly directly stated in the article but rather is suggested, so I get if it can't be used. In addition, would a hook based on
During the 71st session of the Assembly, Coe introduced the first-of-its-kind anti-rape bill "An act to punish seduction." It was passed into law on March 22, 1848.
work? I also noticed that there's a mention of "democrat" instead of "Democrat". Finally, per WP:DYKCOMPLETE, if information could be found about his later life and death, that would we welcome as it's not currently in the article. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 09:32, 21 August 2024 (UTC)- The nominator has not edited since July 28.[7] Searching on Newspapers.com via the Wikipedia Library is hindered by a service issue.[8] There's no rush here. Best to wait a few days on this. Flibirigit (talk) 03:23, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
Given the nominator hasn't edited in almost a month and no other editor has adopted the nominator, it is now marked for closure as abandoned. No prejudice against it continuing if another editor, perhaps Flibirigit, adopts it. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:02, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
Patience is a virtue. This nomination is not yet two months old, nor has anyone posted it at WT:DYK for adoption. Flibirigit (talk) 12:15, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Flibirigit: I don't want to act like a crystal ball, but the nominator hasn't edited in almost a month, which isn't a good sign regardless of the fact it was only reviewed a few days ago. Given that you have already edited the article and the issues don't seem to be insurmountable, are you willing to adopt this nomination in the nom's stead? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 13:02, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
- Please stop pinging me here, and please stop being in a rush. Flibirigit (talk) 13:06, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Flibirigit: I don't want to act like a crystal ball, but the nominator hasn't edited in almost a month, which isn't a good sign regardless of the fact it was only reviewed a few days ago. Given that you have already edited the article and the issues don't seem to be insurmountable, are you willing to adopt this nomination in the nom's stead? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 13:02, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Flibirigit: How do these sound?
- Flibirigit, I've deleted the footnote for the birthdate, as I confirmed both sources cited in the footnote were in parity with Sept. 6 as the birthdate. No idea why the footnote was created or where the Sept. 12 comes from. Viriditas (talk) 20:37, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
- Flibirigit, I've deleted the quote box. It doesn't really belong here and isn't relevant. It was presumably added by the editor because it's an example of poetry by his wife, but that's very tangential to the bio. Viriditas (talk) 20:43, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Viriditas: I've already proposed two new hooks above (ALT4a and ALT5), please let me know if either works. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 22:43, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: Apologies, I thought we could start fresh and adhere to some semblance of the original intent of the nom. I think a new, original hook combining the elements of ALT2 and ALT3 in shortened form would be super interesting! In other words, did you know that Nathaniel Coe declined a nomination to the United States Senate, choosing instead to serve as an inspector for the United States Postal Service? That's so weird that someone would choose to do that, which is why I think it makes an unusual and interesting hook. Could you come up with something based on that factoid? Perhaps something even better? Viriditas (talk) 23:03, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
- That might work. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 07:48, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: Apologies, I thought we could start fresh and adhere to some semblance of the original intent of the nom. I think a new, original hook combining the elements of ALT2 and ALT3 in shortened form would be super interesting! In other words, did you know that Nathaniel Coe declined a nomination to the United States Senate, choosing instead to serve as an inspector for the United States Postal Service? That's so weird that someone would choose to do that, which is why I think it makes an unusual and interesting hook. Could you come up with something based on that factoid? Perhaps something even better? Viriditas (talk) 23:03, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
- Viriditas, thanks for adopting the nomination. I will review the changes by the end of tomorrow. Flibirigit (talk) 01:50, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Viriditas: I've already proposed two new hooks above (ALT4a and ALT5), please let me know if either works. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 22:43, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
Concerns regarding birth date and sourcing have been resolved. I have struck the names of the family members from the hooks as per my original review. I have declined ALT2 and ALT3 as neither are interesting to a broad audience. Will continue my review shortly with the remaining hooks. Flibirigit (talk) 22:06, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
The birth date was changed to be September 6, 1788, but now there is no citation anywhere for the date. The death date is listed as October 17, 1868, but there is no citation anywhere for the date. As for the hooks, which source explicity verifies that "Nathaniel Coe was the founder of Hood River, Oregon"? This source says that the Coe family were the original owners of a land grant. This source states "first white settlers". Neither of them explicity state founding the town. I'm unsure if the offline sources are better. Verifying ALT0, ALT1, ALT4, ALT4a are difficult without clear sourcing. ALT5 is not explicitly stated in the article, so I'm unsure how to verify it. Best wishes. Flibirigit (talk) 14:18, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on July 14
Articles created/expanded on July 15
Tukdam
- ... that the Dalai Lama persuaded scientists to study a Buddhist tradition?
- Source: * Lott, Dylan T.; Yeshi, Tenzin; Norchung, N.; Dolma, Sonam; et al. (2021-01-28). "No Detectable Electroencephalographic Activity After Clinical Declaration of Death Among Tibetan Buddhist Meditators in Apparent Tukdam, a Putative Postmortem Meditation State". Frontiers in Psychology. 11. doi:10.3389/fpsyg.2020.599190. ISSN 1664-1078. PMC 7876463. PMID 33584435.
Tukdam Project, developed in conversations between Dr. Richard J. Davidson and His Holiness Tenzin Gyatso, the XIV Dalai Lama ... Dalai Lama regularly speaks of the importance of scientific research on tukdam in his public talks to the Tibetan community
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- Comment: This looks like my last free QpQ ticket
Викидим (talk) 01:05, 16 July 2024 (UTC).
i'm sorry to say you've wasted your ticket.
General eligibility:
- New enough:
- Long enough:
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- "other studies" empty section tag
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- article often promotes the idea of tukdam. the "reports of attainment" section is especially egregious. you can't verify after-death consciousness, but the article lists 8 people who have attained tukdam, including someone who died in 1865.
- Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
- Other problems:
- the article presents the topic as if it wasn't a fringe topic. also, the "cultural and religious significance", "scientific research", and "documentary film" sections read like an large language model wrote it. also, why is there an entire section on a documentary film?
Hook eligibility:
- Cited:
- the quote you provided doesn't support the hook. in addition, it says that
This Tukdam Project, developed in conversations between Dr. Richard J. Davidson and His Holiness Tenzin Gyatso, the XIV Dalai Lama, is a collaborative long-term empirical research effort of the Center for Healthy Minds in partnership with Men-Tsee-Khang (Sowa-Rigpa, Dharamsala, India), Delek Hospital (Dharamsala, India), and the Office of His Holiness the Dalai Lama.
he didn't just "persuade" them. - Interesting:
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Overall: this isn't exactly relevant, but frontiers media is noted in User:JzG/Predatory for promoting fringe theories. ltbdl☃ (talk) 15:15, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
Replacing a rejection notice with a maybe notice. The nomination is still eligible and should not be immediately rejected. Flibirigit (talk) 15:59, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
- it really isn't. ltbdl☃ (talk) 16:04, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: WP:RS characterize this as a religious concept within Tibetan Buddhist. The original version of the article included a lot of content about scientists proving life after death, which has since been removed. There are still some lines that are taking life after death as a settled thing like, "
The practice of tukdam involves the practitioner's consciousness remaining in a meditative state known as the "Clear Light Stage" after death
" The National Geographic source cited does not present it as settled, "“If I had just casually walked into the room, I would have thought he was sitting in deep meditation,” Davidson says, his voice on the phone still a little awestruck. “His skin looked totally fresh and viable, no decomposition whatsoever.” The sense of the dead man’s presence, even at close range, helped inspire Davidson to study thukdam scientifically. He has assembled some basic medical equipment, such as EEGs and stethoscopes, at two field stations in India and has trained an on-site team of 12 Tibetan physicians to test these monks—preferably beginning while they’re still alive—to see whether any brain activity continues after their death.
"[9] Good luck, Rjjiii (talk) 23:31, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: WP:RS characterize this as a religious concept within Tibetan Buddhist. The original version of the article included a lot of content about scientists proving life after death, which has since been removed. There are still some lines that are taking life after death as a settled thing like, "
- it really isn't. ltbdl☃ (talk) 16:04, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
while i wasn't looking, a huge chunk of the article was removed. this also means the hook is no longer mentioned in the article. any alts?
also, the "cultural and religious significance" is still written horribly, and there's a citation needed tag. ltbdl☃ (talk) 07:45, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on July 16
Special occasion holding area
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- Do not nominate articles in this section—nominate all articles in the nominations section above, under the date on which the article was created or moved to mainspace, or the expansion began; indicate in the nomination any request for a specially timed appearance on the main page.
- Note: Articles intended to be held for special occasion dates should be nominated within seven days of creation, start of expansion, or promotion to Good Article status. The nomination should be made at least one week prior to the occasion date, to allow time for reviews and promotions through the prep and queue sets, but not more than six weeks in advance. The proposed occasion must be deemed sufficiently special by reviewers. The timeline limitations, including the six week maximum, may be waived by consensus, if a request is made at WT:DYK, but requests are not always successful. Discussion clarifying the hold criteria can be found here: Hold criteria; discussion setting the six week limit can be found here: Six week limit.
- April Fools' Day hooks are exempted from the timeline limit; see Wikipedia:April Fool's Main Page/Did You Know.