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12 November 2023
- 17:1917:19, 12 November 2023 diff hist +29 Arthur C. Brooks →Personal life: Again noting the need for sources. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:1717:17, 12 November 2023 diff hist +744 Arthur C. Brooks →Recent work: Created a new, but standard Awards and recognition section. Added a tag indicating need for non-self-published, non-self-authored sources. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:1317:13, 12 November 2023 diff hist −649 Arthur C. Brooks →Early life and education: Moving honorary degree information to another section--such information is not about the section topic (early life, education), but rather about recognition. Tags: references removed Mobile edit Mobile web edit
5 January 2020
- 17:1517:15, 5 January 2020 diff hist +40 Frederick Buechner →Early life: Noted unreliable source, completely indefensible for this very notable and widely discussed figure. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
22 December 2019
- 17:0617:06, 22 December 2019 diff hist +646 Francis Chan →Cornerstone and ministry: Added sentence earlier appearing in lede, to this more appropriate section. Note, a citation appearing in the sentence says “this website for sale”, and so this sentence needs further attention. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:0117:01, 22 December 2019 diff hist −504 Francis Chan Copy edits, updating (no longer chancellor), and removed closing sentence, which is a detail rather than a high level summary of the article. The lede can be expanded, but it should summarize sourced (reliable), important content *in* the article. Tags: references removed Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:2016:20, 22 December 2019 diff hist +5,753 Francis Chan →Biography: Moved biographical section up, to its usual place. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:1916:19, 22 December 2019 diff hist −5,753 Francis Chan Moving section. Mobile editing lacks so many features, including, apparently, ability to access entire article, so doing this the awkward, hard way. Please be patient for 5 mins. Tags: section blanking Mobile edit Mobile web edit
13 November 2019
- 02:3802:38, 13 November 2019 diff hist +28 Luke Rhinehart →Bibliography: Added columns to this currently narrow list section.
- 02:2902:29, 13 November 2019 diff hist +198 Luke Rhinehart →Bibliography: Noting the non-standard nature of his book list.
- 02:2802:28, 13 November 2019 diff hist +6,074 Luke Rhinehart →External links: Adding a source list to further reading, before introducing some into the text.
- 02:1602:16, 13 November 2019 diff hist +978 Talk:The Dice Man →Plagiarism find leads to source checking
- 02:0502:05, 13 November 2019 diff hist +19 Luke Rhinehart Like the The Dice Man article, the verifiability of this article leads a lot to be desired.
- 01:5401:54, 13 November 2019 diff hist +628 User talk:SummerPhDv2.0 →Split (2017 Movie)
- 01:4901:49, 13 November 2019 diff hist +2,112 The Dice Man Once over edit for readabiity, after today's changes.
6 October 2019
- 16:1416:14, 6 October 2019 diff hist −1 Evan O'Neill Kane →Innovations and inventions: Corrected typo in markup. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:1316:13, 6 October 2019 diff hist 0 Evan O'Neill Kane →Innovations and inventions: Corrected typo in markup. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:1216:12, 6 October 2019 diff hist +88 Evan O'Neill Kane →Innovations and inventions: Edited first two paragraphs, indicating sourced and unsourced content, and content needing third party support. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:4915:49, 6 October 2019 diff hist +28 Evan O'Neill Kane →Innovations and inventions: Noting over-reliance in the invention section on WP:OR and primary sources (e.g., JAMA descriptions of inventions), short-shrifting the section on expert perspective on the importance of the inventions, both in their time and for posterity. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
22 September 2019
- 15:5815:58, 22 September 2019 diff hist +35 August Rohling →References: Noting that purported sources are not functional sources at all, using the “passim” academic language to disguise WP:OR—manifest in lack of any narrowing information in references to books (no chapter, no page numbers) and in incomplete reference description to non-digital, obscure foreign language sources. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:5015:50, 22 September 2019 diff hist +18 August Rohling Article is fully a tome of unsourced, untraceable, purported factual content that cannot be fully verified, and for sake of READERS needs to be labeled as such. Note, I am an educator who has no opinion whatsoever on the title subject, having come here simply to find sources of information on it. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
11 November 2018
- 17:0217:02, 11 November 2018 diff hist +36 Thou shalt not steal →Ancient usage: Drawn in to repair punctuation issues, but soon became clear that this is an editor essay — the ideas cite few other sources, instead only citing the primary religious texts. Hence it violates WP:OR, by presenting WP editor interpretations rather that the published interpretations of scholars. Hence, tags appended. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17 June 2015
- 14:5914:59, 17 June 2015 diff hist −11 Kermit Roosevelt Jr. →Early career: Further touchups aimed at making uses of names clear.
- 14:5614:56, 17 June 2015 diff hist +4 Kermit Roosevelt Jr. →Early career: Because all three Kermit Roosevelts mentioned in same paragraph, "Kim" is substituted to make clear the sentence is about Jr. (the title subject)