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28 January 2024

• 17:5417:54, 28 January 2024 diff hist −9‎ Al-Tanf ‎ →‎Attacks: Removed redundant 'multiple' Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

21 January 2024

• 13:2313:23, 21 January 2024 diff hist +5‎ Sapphire & Steel ‎ →‎Premise: Replaced 'multiple' with 'a number of' - multiple in this instance seems a little unclear - more than one, or a combination of them? Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

30 December 2023

• 12:3112:31, 30 December 2023 diff hist −8‎ Divertor ‎ →‎History: Multiple is redundant in this case, as 'problems' is a plural. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 12:1812:18, 30 December 2023 diff hist +7‎ Filament propagation ‎ →‎Potential applications: Replaced 'lightnings' with 'lightning strikes'. Lightning us its own plural, but adding 'strikes' emphasises that it was more than one occurrence. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

26 December 2023

• 19:4519:45, 26 December 2023 diff hist +59‎ Polar Owl ‎ Requested clarification of 'turnout Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

19 December 2023

• 16:0316:03, 19 December 2023 diff hist 0‎ Caustic (optics) ‎ →‎Caustic engineering: I believe 'in' is better than 'to' here. Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit

28 November 2023

• 23:0623:06, 28 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ European Robotic Arm ‎ →‎End effectors: 'Transmission' is better grammar - a noun, not a verb. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

26 November 2023

• 08:4508:45, 26 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Joolz Denby ‎ Replace 'WAGs' with 'partners'. 'WAGs' in not a phrase without some nuanced meaning (See Wikipedia article for details), so replaced with a general term. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

25 November 2023

• 21:4321:43, 25 November 2023 diff hist −15‎ Floodland (album) ‎ Replaced 'came up multiple times' with 'repeatedly' Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

24 November 2023

• 08:0908:09, 24 November 2023 diff hist +12‎ Transformer ‎ Added 'Canada' to description of image. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14 November 2023

• 15:2315:23, 14 November 2023 diff hist +1‎ Cephalic index ‎ →‎Early anthropology: Changed 'less' to 'least' - improved grammar. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

4 November 2023

• 23:5923:59, 4 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Space warfare ‎ →‎Practical considerations: 'Larger' is more accurate than 'bigger'. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

1 November 2023

• 01:1801:18, 1 November 2023 diff hist −9‎ The Fog ‎ →‎Development: 'Multiple' is redundant before a plural. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

30 October 2023

• 23:0623:06, 30 October 2023 diff hist 0‎ Fumarole mineral ‎ →‎Origin and appearance: 'Repeated' is more descriptive here. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

27 October 2023

• 10:1510:15, 27 October 2023 diff hist +2‎ Altay railway station ‎ →‎Timetable: Changed 'former' to 'formerly' - improved grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

5 October 2023

• 12:0712:07, 5 October 2023 diff hist +16‎ Watership Down ‎ →‎Part 2: On Watership Down: Expanded definition of beech hanger and the linked dictionary definition doesn't distinguish which definition is being referred to. Tag: Visual edit

4 September 2023

• 22:2122:21, 4 September 2023 diff hist −1‎ TEC-9 ‎ Replaced 'iconic' with 'close'. More objective use of language. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

26 August 2023

• 09:5309:53, 26 August 2023 diff hist −6‎ Shanghai Noon ‎ Over-use of 'iconic', which means little. Replaced one instance with 'notable', which is more descriptive. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14 August 2023

• 20:0820:08, 14 August 2023 diff hist −1‎ Neil Marshall ‎ →‎Career: Several is more descriptive than multiple. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 19:3319:33, 14 August 2023 diff hist −1‎ Tiangong space station ‎ →‎Food and personal hygiene: Fruit is a mass noun in this context so isn't a plural. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14 July 2023

• 19:4819:48, 14 July 2023 diff hist −9‎ Aspartame ‎ →‎Cancer: 'Multiple' is redundant here as 'agencies' is plural. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

7 July 2023

• 09:4209:42, 7 July 2023 diff hist −5‎ Midway Atoll ‎ Replaced 'Visitation to the' with 'Visiting the' - more straightforward use of language. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

24 June 2023

• 00:3100:31, 24 June 2023 diff hist −8‎ Reverberatory furnace ‎ 'Spatial' is not needed - separation is enough, given the context

20 June 2023

• 16:3816:38, 20 June 2023 diff hist −9‎ Watershed (broadcasting) ‎ Removed redundant use of 'multiple'. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

16 June 2023

• 11:3611:36, 16 June 2023 diff hist +4‎ Cary Grant ‎ →‎1955–1966: Film resurgence and final roles: Replaced 'iconic' with 'well-known'. Iconic is slight hyperbole - it may be one of Grant's most famous suits, but it is not a quintessentially recognisable element of either the film nor Grant himself. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 11:0611:06, 16 June 2023 diff hist +4‎ Clark Gable ‎ Replaced 'multiple' with 'a wide variety'. Multiple adds no information to the sentence other than echoing the plural 'genres'. Rephrasing adds depth to meaning. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

6 June 2023

• 09:2109:21, 6 June 2023 diff hist −9‎ Saab 35 Draken ‎ →‎Instability: Redundant 'multiple' removed. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

5 June 2023

• 21:2621:26, 5 June 2023 diff hist 0‎ Tetrode ‎ →‎Bi-grid valve: 'Combined' is more descriptive. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

1 June 2023

• 10:3710:37, 1 June 2023 diff hist +1‎ Apollo Lunar Surface Experiments Package ‎ →‎Deployment: Slight change in grammar. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

29 May 2023

• 08:3608:36, 29 May 2023 diff hist −20‎ Paint Drying ‎ →‎Classification: Reworded section about funding - sole and only were repetitious, slight passive voice. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 08:3208:32, 29 May 2023 diff hist −3‎ Paint Drying ‎ →‎Classification: Slight change to grammar - 'viewing' rather than 'watch time'. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17 May 2023

• 18:1518:15, 17 May 2023 diff hist −6‎ USS Stark incident ‎ →‎Incident: Removed passive voice from section on later information. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

16 May 2023

• 16:4816:48, 16 May 2023 diff hist −3‎ The A-Team (film) ‎ →‎Plot: Replaced 'against' with 'from' - improved grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 09:5709:57, 16 May 2023 diff hist −9‎ HMS Thunder Child ‎ →‎Adaptations: 'Multiple' is redundant before a plural in this context. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

7 May 2023

• 18:1518:15, 7 May 2023 diff hist 0‎ John Dies at the End (film) ‎ →‎Plot: 'Prior' is a little forced in this context. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

3 May 2023

• 12:0212:02, 3 May 2023 diff hist −24‎ Vitruvian Man ‎ →‎Creation: Replaced 'due to his utilizing from' with 'due to his use of' - more natural language. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

1 May 2023

• 10:1310:13, 1 May 2023 diff hist −5‎ Garfield: The Movie ‎ →‎Plot: 'Of' makes more sense here than 'toward'. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

30 April 2023

• 21:1521:15, 30 April 2023 diff hist −1‎ Mercenary ‎ The singular 'protection' is more natural here. One is offered protection from something by law - the plural seems unnecessary. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

28 April 2023

• 16:3216:32, 28 April 2023 diff hist −7‎ The Lonely Island ‎ →‎The Wack Album: Removed 'culled from' - replaced with 'came from'. Culled is an odd choice of word for something that was provided willingly. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

27 April 2023

• 21:4121:41, 27 April 2023 diff hist −12‎ Thunderball (novel) ‎ →‎Plot: Simplified text to remove 'retaliate against' as retaliation is usually against an attacker. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 08:1308:13, 27 April 2023 diff hist −9‎ Star Trek: First Contact ‎ →‎Design: Removed 'multiple' from "The crew had multiple difficulties...". 'Difficulties' is already a plural so 'multiple' is completely redundant. Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit

25 April 2023

• 23:0523:05, 25 April 2023 diff hist +26‎ Star Trek VI: The Undiscovered Country ‎ Added link to 'dissolve' article to clarify what 'lap dissolve' means. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

24 April 2023

• 21:2521:25, 24 April 2023 diff hist 0‎ Nova ‎ →‎Recurrent nova: 'Repeated' is more descriptive than 'multiple' Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 19:4419:44, 24 April 2023 diff hist −1‎ 1995 Airstan Ilyushin Il-76 hijacking ‎ Repossessed isn't hyphenated Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 15:3415:34, 24 April 2023 diff hist 0‎ Ghostbusters (2016 film) ‎ →‎Controversy: One is critical 'of' something, not 'to' something. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17 April 2023

• 10:3310:33, 17 April 2023 diff hist −9‎ Daddy, What Did You Do in the Great War? ‎ →‎Publication history: 'Multiple' is redundant before 'interations'. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

1 April 2023

• 09:1709:17, 1 April 2023 diff hist +2‎ Spiders Georg ‎ Replaced 'uptick' with 'increase' - less ambiguous use of language Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

24 March 2023

• 10:4810:48, 24 March 2023 diff hist −2‎ Lucy Dacus ‎ →‎Early life: One is generally employed 'by' your employer, not 'with' your employer. Edited for more straightforward use of language. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

23 March 2023

• 11:1711:17, 23 March 2023 diff hist −1‎ The Moody Blues ‎ →‎Strange Times: Poems are usually 'recited' not 'narrated'. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 11:1211:12, 23 March 2023 diff hist −1‎ The Moody Blues ‎ →‎Strange Times: Replaced first use of 'hiatus' with 'break' - just to avoid repeating the same word. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit