User contributions for Paardeberg
A user with 42 edits. Account created on 11 August 2012.
3 March 2020
- 15:2315:23, 3 March 2020 diff hist +177 m Archibald Montgomery-Massingberd →Further reading: Another volume added.
12 November 2019
- 14:2114:21, 12 November 2019 diff hist −4 Henry Rawlinson, 1st Baron Rawlinson →Death
- 14:2014:20, 12 November 2019 diff hist +34 Henry Rawlinson, 1st Baron Rawlinson →Death
8 October 2019
- 10:2910:29, 8 October 2019 diff hist −7 Henry Rawlinson, 1st Baron Rawlinson Insert footnote for birth. Oxford Dictionary of National Biography.
- 10:2610:26, 8 October 2019 diff hist −11 m Henry Rawlinson, 1st Baron Rawlinson Corrected place of birth.
2 February 2019
- 20:2220:22, 2 February 2019 diff hist −1 m Henry Rawlinson, 1st Baron Rawlinson →Later life and Indian Command: Very minor changes of a few words.
- 20:1920:19, 2 February 2019 diff hist 0 m Henry Rawlinson, 1st Baron Rawlinson →Battles of 1918: A full stop and capital letter.
- 20:1720:17, 2 February 2019 diff hist +5 m Henry Rawlinson, 1st Baron Rawlinson →Battle of the Somme: A few very small corrections.
- 20:1320:13, 2 February 2019 diff hist +36 m Henry Rawlinson, 1st Baron Rawlinson →Military career: A few words added to create a sentence.
1 February 2019
- 11:0211:02, 1 February 2019 diff hist +771 m Henry Rawlinson, 1st Baron Rawlinson →Military career: I have added two sentences with appropriate references.
29 January 2019
- 12:4312:43, 29 January 2019 diff hist +402 m User talk:Paardeberg The text tells what Ihave done to the article on Henry Seymour Rawlinson. current
- 12:3612:36, 29 January 2019 diff hist −18 m Henry Rawlinson, 1st Baron Rawlinson →Later life and Indian Command: One punctuation correction and four words removed.
- 12:3212:32, 29 January 2019 diff hist −114 m Henry Rawlinson, 1st Baron Rawlinson →Later life and Indian Command: Endeavoured to correct a previous error.
- 12:3112:31, 29 January 2019 diff hist +1 m Henry Rawlinson, 1st Baron Rawlinson →Later life and Indian Command: Endeavoured to correct a previous error.
- 12:2512:25, 29 January 2019 diff hist +3,355 Henry Rawlinson, 1st Baron Rawlinson →Later life: I have made several changes and added considerable detail on his Indian command, an important part of his career in any assessment of his life. I have used Atwood's biography, Jacobsen's book and others.Heading of section changed. One referernce is to a document in the National Archives, but footnote 5 already references an archives..
28 January 2019
- 12:5712:57, 28 January 2019 diff hist +377 m Henry Rawlinson, 1st Baron Rawlinson →Personal life: I have added one sentence.
- 12:5312:53, 28 January 2019 diff hist +413 m Henry Rawlinson, 1st Baron Rawlinson →Battles of 1918: I have corrected some details of 1918 leaving the outline intact. The Canadians were in Horne's First Army when they stormed the Canal du Nord: S. Robbins The First World War Letterrs of General Lord Horne, p. 161.
- 12:2312:23, 28 January 2019 diff hist +221 m Henry Rawlinson, 1st Baron Rawlinson →Battle of the Somme: I have added one sentence with reference.
27 January 2019
- 10:1310:13, 27 January 2019 diff hist +1,325 Henry Rawlinson, 1st Baron Rawlinson →Battle of the Somme: I have added some clarification in the first paragraph and further assessment of the battle's results and Rawlinson's contribution in a separate paragraph. I also removed in a previous edit referencer to two generals being sacked at Rawlinson's behest, perhaps to save his and Haig's skin. Middlebrook is incorrect. One of the generals Montagu-Stuart-Wortlewas in Allenby's Third Army, not under Rawlinson, the other removed at request of Horne commanding XV Corps.
- 09:4409:44, 27 January 2019 diff hist −1 m Henry Rawlinson, 1st Baron Rawlinson →Military career: I have replaced italics with ordinary letters at the end of this section.
25 January 2019
- 15:0115:01, 25 January 2019 diff hist +38 m Henry Rawlinson, 1st Baron Rawlinson →Battle of the Somme: I have added three words to one sentence for clarity.
- 12:2412:24, 25 January 2019 diff hist +540 Henry Rawlinson, 1st Baron Rawlinson I have made important changes to the account of the Somme which was based almost exclusively on Middlebrook's First Day on the Somme'. Although still a moving account, it has been supplanted by the researches of Prior and Wilson, and of William Philpott. I still hope to add a little more.
- 11:3711:37, 25 January 2019 diff hist +548 m Henry Rawlinson, 1st Baron Rawlinson →Military career: I have added two sentences to this section describing Rawlinson's reservations before the Somme.
23 December 2018
- 11:5311:53, 23 December 2018 diff hist +1,135 m Henry Rawlinson, 1st Baron Rawlinson →Military career: I have added several sentences about the battle of Neuve Chapelle which had an important influence on Rawlinson's conduct of war on the Western Front.
12 December 2018
- 09:5109:51, 12 December 2018 diff hist +214 m Henry Rawlinson, 1st Baron Rawlinson →Personal life: I have corrected marriage details from recent biography.
28 November 2018
- 10:4310:43, 28 November 2018 diff hist +6 Henry Rawlinson, 1st Baron Rawlinson I have tried to correct my footnote error. Apologies if not successful. I tried to follow instructions.
- 10:4010:40, 28 November 2018 diff hist +6 m Henry Rawlinson, 1st Baron Rawlinson I have made additions to the section of Rawlinson's staff college commandantship and given two sources, both books.
- 10:3710:37, 28 November 2018 diff hist +794 Henry Rawlinson, 1st Baron Rawlinson I have made additions to the section of Rawlinson's staff college commandantship and given two sources, both books.
27 November 2018
- 10:4010:40, 27 November 2018 diff hist +666 Talk:Henry Rawlinson, 1st Baron Rawlinson →Poor article
- 10:2910:29, 27 November 2018 diff hist +598 m Henry Rawlinson, 1st Baron Rawlinson I have made a slight amendment to the last sentence of the introduction and added another sentence. I have added two sentences to the next section.
26 August 2018
- 08:5608:56, 26 August 2018 diff hist +766 N User talk:86.133.17.237 Six sentences commenting on the article and suggesting additions to do justice to Rawlinson. current
25 August 2018
- 20:0520:05, 25 August 2018 diff hist +121 m Henry Rawlinson, 1st Baron Rawlinson →Further reading: A second volume added.
- 19:5719:57, 25 August 2018 diff hist +129 m Henry Rawlinson, 1st Baron Rawlinson Adding one book to reading list.
30 January 2017
- 14:5214:52, 30 January 2017 diff hist +1,093 N User talk:Paardeberg I have put some suggestions under 'talk' for possible changes and additions and hope they will be read.
6 November 2015
- 12:3512:35, 6 November 2015 diff hist +6 m Talk:Frederick Roberts, 1st Earl Roberts →VC: I have inserted a different heading as my contribution did not seem tohave one. My fault entirely. I hope I have done the right thing.
- 12:2612:26, 6 November 2015 diff hist +1,873 Talk:Frederick Roberts, 1st Earl Roberts No edit summary
6 November 2012
- 10:0110:01, 6 November 2012 diff hist +255 Frederick Roberts, 1st Earl Roberts No edit summary
17 October 2012
- 13:2913:29, 17 October 2012 diff hist −1 m Frederick Roberts, 1st Earl Roberts Corrected one name.
- 13:2813:28, 17 October 2012 diff hist 0 m Frederick Roberts, 1st Earl Roberts Added one book to bibliography of references.
- 13:2413:24, 17 October 2012 diff hist +105 Frederick Roberts, 1st Earl Roberts No edit summary
- 13:1913:19, 17 October 2012 diff hist +1 Frederick Roberts, 1st Earl Roberts No edit summary
28 August 2012
- 11:4711:47, 28 August 2012 diff hist +264 Talk:Battle of Paardeberg I have asked a question.
