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A user with 53 edits. Account created on 8 October 2018.
4 May 2024
- 13:4313:43, 4 May 2024 diff hist −9 John Allen Muhammad I edited an awkward-sounding sentence. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
14 December 2023
- 07:2507:25, 14 December 2023 diff hist +10 World Cyber Games 2005 Accuracy and grammar current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
4 November 2023
- 23:0823:08, 4 November 2023 diff hist −10 Castlevania Legends →Gameplay: I corrected some information on this page regarding checkpoints. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
21 September 2023
- 07:2607:26, 21 September 2023 diff hist 0 Harut and Marut I corrected a misspelled word. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
3 August 2023
- 15:3915:39, 3 August 2023 diff hist +36 Burqa The original sentence was a run-on sentence. It was broken up into three sentences. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
26 July 2023
- 23:5623:56, 26 July 2023 diff hist +2 Cassie Bernall I cleaned up the grammar slightly. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
24 July 2023
- 23:5423:54, 24 July 2023 diff hist +6 Empire of Japan Some grammatical articles were missing. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
6 July 2023
- 21:4021:40, 6 July 2023 diff hist +18 Angus (film) →Plot: I specified some details from the plot. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
15 June 2023
- 23:1923:19, 15 June 2023 diff hist +5 Sexpionage →American use: Grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
3 June 2023
- 05:2005:20, 3 June 2023 diff hist −2 Cops (TV program) I kept the tense consistent throughout the sentence. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
31 May 2023
- 11:4011:40, 31 May 2023 diff hist +6 Hanja No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
21 May 2023
- 23:2923:29, 21 May 2023 diff hist +1 Metallurgy in pre-Columbian America →Old Copper Culture: I added a comma. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
20 May 2023
- 23:0023:00, 20 May 2023 diff hist −10 Amy Jo Johnson →Acting: I fixed some of the grammar in a sentence. Although Jason David Frank is mentioned in the sentence, the main subject of the sentence is Amy Jo Johnson (she). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
22 February 2023
- 12:4612:46, 22 February 2023 diff hist −2 Empress Myeongseong →Assassination: Changed “hide” to “hid”. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 12:3012:30, 22 February 2023 diff hist −7 Korea under Japanese rule →Japan–Korea annexation treaty (1910): I cleaned up the confusing grammar. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
16 January 2023
- 00:2700:27, 16 January 2023 diff hist 0 History of the petroleum industry →Early history: I simplified a grammatically dubious run-on sentence by turning it into three separate sentences. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
6 December 2022
- 09:1609:16, 6 December 2022 diff hist −1 Power Rangers in Space →Production: Removed an unnecessary period Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
25 September 2022
- 00:1800:18, 25 September 2022 diff hist −3 White monkey Changed a word. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
10 August 2022
- 10:4410:44, 10 August 2022 diff hist 0 Fighter's History grammar
1 August 2022
- 00:2400:24, 1 August 2022 diff hist +7 Digimon Survive →Development: Missing word Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
10 April 2022
- 10:3710:37, 10 April 2022 diff hist +383 Talk:Christianity and violence No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 02:4502:45, 10 April 2022 diff hist +3 The Journal (Hey Arnold!) I believe the ending to “The Journal” had the cliffhanger, rather than the “Parents Day” episode. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
30 March 2022
- 23:4823:48, 30 March 2022 diff hist +10 m Eugene Bullard Commas and grammar Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
27 March 2022
- 04:0004:00, 27 March 2022 diff hist +1 m Baldies Added a comma. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
26 March 2022
- 23:1423:14, 26 March 2022 diff hist +71 Gigantism I cleaned up a sentence. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
22 March 2022
- 11:1511:15, 22 March 2022 diff hist +1 m Marvin Mitchelson A comma was needed.
18 March 2022
- 02:0502:05, 18 March 2022 diff hist 0 Mitaka, Tokyo I corrected the spelling of the park name. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
13 March 2022
- 11:1911:19, 13 March 2022 diff hist −1 Buffer state →Asia: Grammar Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit
6 March 2022
- 12:5112:51, 6 March 2022 diff hist −3 The Adventures of Pete & Pete I restructured a sentence to be more grammatically correct. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
12 February 2022
- 07:3807:38, 12 February 2022 diff hist +64 Rosemary Horrox →Select bibliography: Added a book in which she was an editor.
3 January 2022
- 19:4919:49, 3 January 2022 diff hist +3 Bilibili →Cai Xukun: Added the article “an”. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
29 December 2021
- 13:3113:31, 29 December 2021 diff hist −9 Atakebune →History: The word "however" is not necessary, as the previous sentence already states that the meaning of the Japanese word was not necessarily meant to be taken literally.
3 December 2021
- 05:3205:32, 3 December 2021 diff hist +13 The Invitations →Reaction: I made the sentence fuller.
11 November 2021
- 00:4400:44, 11 November 2021 diff hist +7 Lori Loughlin →Plea and imprisonment: the changing of subjects between Loughlin and her husband made it confusing it follow.
27 October 2021
- 00:4800:48, 27 October 2021 diff hist −49 John Keel →The Mothman Prophecies: That last part of the sentence is confusing, given the context of the previous part of the sentence.
26 October 2021
- 23:4323:43, 26 October 2021 diff hist +15 Mothman →History: I needed to edit a messy run-on sentence.
- 06:1406:14, 26 October 2021 diff hist −32 Apple bobbing →History: The line "rather than in a bowl of water" needs more context, as earlier in the sentence it is stated, "...bite into an apple floating in water."
22 October 2021
- 11:1311:13, 22 October 2021 diff hist +1 Matsushiro Castle →Situation
9 October 2021
- 21:0421:04, 9 October 2021 diff hist +10 Domestication of the horse →Horses in historic warfare: I cleaned up the grammar slightly. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
1 September 2021
- 12:3812:38, 1 September 2021 diff hist −5 Jeffrey Hunter →Star Trek: The word “although” didn’t seem to fit. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
31 August 2021
- 06:2306:23, 31 August 2021 diff hist +4 Anti-Chinese sentiment →Depiction of China and Chinese in media: Grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 06:1906:19, 31 August 2021 diff hist −30 Anti-Chinese sentiment →Depiction of China and Chinese in media: It was a run-on sentence and there were some redundancies. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
29 August 2021
18 August 2021
- 14:0514:05, 18 August 2021 diff hist +19 Bugs Moran →Personal life: The sentences needed some work. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17 August 2021
- 14:5614:56, 17 August 2021 diff hist +11 Ewan McGregor →Film and television: I broke up the long sentence. That, and using the word “difficult” twice in that one sentence was a bit awkward. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
3 August 2021
- 11:1011:10, 3 August 2021 diff hist −10 The Young Turks The word “initially” felt out of place in that sentence. “Initially” implies that they might not offer it anymore. If that is true, there should be a follow-up sentence stating that. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
28 June 2021
- 09:5909:59, 28 June 2021 diff hist −50 Super Princess Peach Saying “until New Super Mario Bros. was released” implies this game was a limited released and it stopped being sold after the Mario game came out. I couldn’t find any evidence of that. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
20 June 2021
- 01:5901:59, 20 June 2021 diff hist −5 Knight →Radiance of knighthood into the 21st century: The word “soar” didn’t seem to make sense in this sentence. At least, it made the sentence grammatically incorrect. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
1 May 2021
- 05:3905:39, 1 May 2021 diff hist +1 Family Matters season 1 →Episodes: Grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
11 March 2021
- 11:0811:08, 11 March 2021 diff hist +1 Yasuke There was no end quote. Is this where the end quote belongs?