User talk:Asatru Gothar
The remarks you added are interesting, but they're more in the form of a talk-page comment than an addition to an article, and it's not clear that you added them in the most relevant place (maybe Kajira would be better). AnonMoos 13:45, 1 December 2006 (UTC)
- I disagree. The passage my comment followed suggested that third person speech was an onlinism which is incorrect. Elaboration was required as the subject was brought up and the description misleading. It seemed to me that the author was expressing his own pet peeve as there are many more legitimate examples he could have used.
- It's indisputable that kajirae do not always use 3rd-person speech in the Gor books (not even close), which was the only point being made there. The detailed discussion on this point belongs more on the Kajira page. Also, article pages do not have user signatures. AnonMoos 14:39, 1 December 2006 (UTC)