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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:2006 Bass Pro Shops MBNA 500/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: SSSB (talk · contribs) 11:45, 1 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]


This is my first review so I'm going to take my time to make sure I do it right, should be fun though.

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Comments

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Lead

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  • There were nine cautions and 24 lead changes by seven drivers., should this be in the lead? I feel like an unnecessary amount of detail for the lead, especially the number of cautions. SSSB (talk) 12:39, 1 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Background

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Practice and qualifying

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Race

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Post race

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  • the driver was fined $15,000, penalized 50 points in the Owners and Drivers' Championship, and was put on probation until December 31, 2006. His crew chief Greg Erwin was fined $10,000, and put on probation until the end of the year. the way this is written makes it sound like they were on probation for a different amount of time. Perhaps the driver was fined $15,000, penalized 50 points in the Owners and Drivers' Championship. Both Gordan and his crew chief Greg Erwin were put on probation until the end of the year with Erwin also receiving a $10,000 fine would be better? SSSB (talk) 11:12, 2 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • Chevrolet increased their unassailable lead with 255 points. shouldn't with be changed to by? SSSB (talk) 11:12, 2 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Conclusion

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There are several grammar errors and slighlty confusing statements that need to be sorted out but nothing major, I am therefore placing this review on hold so that the problems can be fixed. I also made a few suggestions which I think would improve the article but arent necessary changes to pass. SSSB (talk) 11:33, 2 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]