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GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 08:10, 6 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 08:10, 6 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

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GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

  • 1
    1.a checkY
    1.b checkY
  • 2
    2.a checkY
    2.b checkY
    2.c checkY
    2.d checkY (21.3% is highest, appears to be a mirror.)
  • 3
    3.a checkY
    3.b checkY
  • 4
    4.a checkY
  • 5
    5.a checkY
  • 6
    6.a checkY
    6.b checkY
  • No DAB links checkY
  • No Dead links checkY

Prose Suggestions

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  • FitzGeorge and Hamilton had two children together: George Edward Archibald Augustus FitzGeorge Hamilton is the George here supposed to be italicized?
  • Iazyges, I italicized George in this instance because it was the name that he went by out of all his many given names. This is done sometimes in articles where children have long names. Please let me know what you think about this. I am open to changing this if you see fit. — West Virginian (talk) 13:23, 7 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • father, and her son George on her knee entitled "Four Generations" suggest father, and her son George on her knee, which was entitled "Four Generations"
  • Iazyges, I wanted to take this opportunity to thank you for selecting and reviewing this article for Good Article status. Thank you also for providing these suggestions for the prose as well. I will address each of these momentarily. — West Virginian (talk) 13:19, 7 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]