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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Commonitorium (Orientius)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:42, 25 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:42, 25 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

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GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

  • 1
    1.a checkY
    1.b checkY
  • 2
    2.a checkY
    2.b checkY
    2.c checkY
    2.d checkY (Highest is 5.9%, due to incidental similiarity of line.)
  • 3
    3.a checkY
    3.b checkY
  • 4
    4.a checkY
  • 5
    5.a checkY
  • 6
    6.a checkY
    6.b checkY
  • No DAB links checkY
  • No Dead links checkY
  • Images appropriately licensed checkY

Prose Suggestions

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  • with warnings against its hindrances. To my reading, against is used here to mean about, so I'd suggest you change it to about its hindrances or on possible hindrances if this is true.
    Good catch. I have changed it.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 14:32, 26 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • Orientius used the Vulgate as suggest changing to Orientius used the Vulgate translation of the Bible as.
  • Martin Delrio, who dubbed it the Commonitorium is it known why he chose to dub it such?
  • two prayers attributed to Orientius suggest change to two prayers which have been attributed to Orientius and then add a comma.