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"for defeating the New York Yankees" would it not be more reasonable to suggest that he was "part of the side who defeated the New York Yankees"? He didn't do it single-handedly did he?
"an All-Star team" as it's a general usage, no need for capitals.
"in Hawaii…I could" -> "in Hawaii... I could" non-breaking space before the ellipsis, then ellipsis is just three periods, then a breaking space after.
Is the second external link reliable? Useful? If so, why not incorporate whatever there is of use there into the article?
I'm not sure that it's reliable, but I'm also not sure that it isn't. I decided not to cite it to be on the safe side, but I put it in the external link section because it may be informative. It contains some detail that's probably a little too in depth for the article - this falls into #3 on Wikipedia:External links. If you'd rather not have it though, feel free to take it out - I'm not strongly attached. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 03:19, 5 October 2021 (UTC)Reply