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[[User:Mohp7|Mohp7]] ([[User talk:Mohp7|talk]]) 03:53, 23 October 2015 (UTC)
== Peer Review ++
This article was well researched and contained lots of information yet it was consisely written - good job! I did make some minor changes. Like Roohi.byakod, I thought the organization could be slightly better and to the behavior section I added a mini-section called egg-laying. I also thought the overview was a little sparse. Besides adding that the Early bublebee can emerge as early as February, I also added the following two sentences in an effort to highlight some interesting information about the bee in the overview and to make it a bit longer so as to balance out the entire article:
"Like other bumblebees, Bombus pratorum lives in colonies with queen and worker castes. Interestingly, Bombus pratorum queens use aggressive behavior rather than pheremones to maintain dominance over the workers."
Again well done.
[[User:RNwumeh|RNwumeh]] ([[User talk:RNwumeh|talk]]) 16:30, 25 October 2015 (UTC)
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