Talk:Early bumblebee: Difference between revisions

[[User:Mohp7|Mohp7]] ([[User talk:Mohp7|talk]]) 03:53, 23 October 2015 (UTC)

 

 

This article was well researched and contained lots of information yet it was consisely written - good job! I did make some minor changes. Like Roohi.byakod, I thought the organization could be slightly better and to the behavior section I added a mini-section called egg-laying. I also thought the overview was a little sparse. Besides adding that the Early bublebee can emerge as early as February, I also added the following two sentences in an effort to highlight some interesting information about the bee in the overview and to make it a bit longer so as to balance out the entire article: