AlexGallon, I can see why you've done this, but with this particular article we need to bear in mind our audience. A substantial proportion of the people who type "gooelectronic goo gaa gaacigarette" into the search box are teenagers considering taking a puff—and English isn't necessarily their first language. So the lead of this particular article tries to use the simplest possible grammatical constructions. Short, declarative sentences in the active voice with as few subclauses as possible. We can use college level English in the body text; it's just the lead that needs to be super-accessible.—[[User:S Marshall|<b style="font-family: Verdana; color: Maroon;">S Marshall</b>]] <small>[[User talk:S Marshall|T]]/[[Special:Contributions/S Marshall|C]]</small> 08:06, 24 April 2024 (UTC)
:Understood, and I agree with your reasoning{{snd}}very well explained, so thank you. [[User:AlexGallon|AlexGallon]] ([[User talk:AlexGallon|talk]]) 18:59, 25 April 2024 (UTC)