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=== Lead ===
* Recommend putting the pronunciation notes into a single footnote, as seen on [[MOS:PRONPLACEMENT]].
** I frankly have no idea how to do this. I have tried but literally cannot figure it out (Please help, I am technologically illiterate sometimes) [[User:Pokelego999|Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999]] ([[User talk:Pokelego999|talk]]) 23:37, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
* [[Game Freak]] is linked twice.
** Fixed. [[User:Pokelego999|Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999]] ([[User talk:Pokelego999|talk]]) 23:37, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
* as a '''main''' character?
* then '''as''' a cameo
* subsequent sequels -> later sequels
** Changed. [[User:Pokelego999|Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999]] ([[User talk:Pokelego999|talk]]) 23:37, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
* {{xt|also appearing in various merchandise, spin-off titles and animated and printed adaptations of the franchise.}} -> Outside of electronic media, Lucario also appears in various merchandise, spin-off titles, and animated and printed adaptations of the franchise.
** Spin-offs include video games, which are electronic media. [[User:Pokelego999|Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999]] ([[User talk:Pokelego999|talk]]) 23:37, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
* The linked word "Aura" doesn't lead anywhere
** Bizarre. I've de-linked it, though do you believe a link to Aura (Paranormal) is warranted here due to being an adaptation of the concept? [[User:Pokelego999|Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999]] ([[User talk:Pokelego999|talk]]) 23:37, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
* {{xt|and has been featured in several forms of merchandise, including figurines, plush toys, and the Pokémon Trading Card Game.}} - This could be mentioned a paragraph earlier (the part where it says it appeared in "various merchandise")
** Merged it with the prior paragraph. [[User:Pokelego999|Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999]] ([[User talk:Pokelego999|talk]]) 23:37, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
* Reception could have a short summary. What was Lucario praised for, and has it been used outside of the Pokémon franchise?
** Let me know if the expansion is sufficient. 23:37, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
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