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Line 419: The lead could be longer, it is supposed to be a summary of the entire article. ''based on fossils from the Upper Siwaliks'' – as I understood, it is only one fossil, not "fossils"? If it is easy to get a map of Pakistan showing where the Sar-Dhok locality is, this would be a great addition. Do you have coordinates? ~~--[[User:Jens Lallensack\|Jens Lallensack]] ([[User talk:Jens Lallensack\|talk]]) 16:21, 9 October 2023 (UTC)~~ Or maybe even a labelled sketch of the fossil itself; that would make it much easier to understand the description section. But this is purely optional of course and depends on how much work you want to put into this. --[[User:Jens Lallensack\|Jens Lallensack]] ([[User talk:Jens Lallensack\|talk]]) 16:21, 9 October 2023 (UTC)

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