User contributions for HolyT
A user with 6,610 edits. Account created on 1 July 2006.
2 January 2007
- 18:1918:19, 2 January 2007 diff hist −24 Manning–Rivers trade →Draft day: removed parenthetical comment that makes no sense. "In spite of" means the same thing as "despite"
- 18:1418:14, 2 January 2007 diff hist 0 m Shawne Merriman →2006 steroid suspension: ft changed capitalization of section title for consistency with other sections
- 18:1318:13, 2 January 2007 diff hist −1 m Shawne Merriman →2006 Steroid suspension: ft deleted extra quotation mark; changed section title capitalization
22 December 2006
- 17:0017:00, 22 December 2006 diff hist 0 Gold (color) I don't think "richen" is a word. Replaced with "enrich."
- 16:4016:40, 22 December 2006 diff hist −1 Mucus →Mucin: ft Misspelled mucus as "mucous" in first word. There was no precedent for this in the article.
18 December 2006
- 17:1017:10, 18 December 2006 diff hist −1 m Paul Hornung →Honors and awards: Deleted unnec comma
- 17:0817:08, 18 December 2006 diff hist +56 Paul Hornung →Professional career: Misspelled LaDainian; spacing/punctuation; re-cast awkward sentence portion as a separate parenthetical sentence
- 17:0417:04, 18 December 2006 diff hist +3 m Paul Hornung →College career: Missing commas; one unnecessary and confusing/awkward word deleted; spacing
- 17:0217:02, 18 December 2006 diff hist +1 m Paul Hornung →College career: missing comma
4 December 2006
- 18:4918:49, 4 December 2006 diff hist −3 m 2006–07 NCAA football bowl games →[[Bowl Championship Series]]: ft changed "as per" to "per" [per means "according to"; an extra "as" makes no sense]
22 November 2006
- 19:2919:29, 22 November 2006 diff hist −1 m Classified information in the United States →Above top secret?: ft Word usage "none the less" replaced with "nevertheless" ("nonetheless" would also be acceptable)
31 October 2006
- 18:0718:07, 31 October 2006 diff hist +1 m Diamond →Symbolism in the Occult: Grammar: prepositional object was in subjective form; now corrected
- 17:2817:28, 31 October 2006 diff hist 0 m Nunavut Capitalized first word of independent clause after comma (style choice for consistency)
- 17:2717:27, 31 October 2006 diff hist +25 Nunavut awkwardness/inaccuracy re: Victoria Island
- 16:5216:52, 31 October 2006 diff hist 0 m Daylight saving time →Hour interchange: Capitalized first word of independent cause following colon (style choice for consistency)
- 16:4616:46, 31 October 2006 diff hist +2 m Daylight saving time →Mnemonic: Corrected comma usage with quotes and spacing
- 16:4016:40, 31 October 2006 diff hist −1 m Daylight saving time →Criticism of DST: Deleted inappropriate comma
- 16:3616:36, 31 October 2006 diff hist +5 m Daylight saving time Consistency: "daylight SAVING time" vs. "daylight SAVINGS time"
- 16:3416:34, 31 October 2006 diff hist −3 m Daylight saving time →Rationales for DST: consistency "daylight SAVING time"
- 16:3216:32, 31 October 2006 diff hist +1 Daylight saving time →Observation of DST: serial comma
14 August 2006
- 21:4921:49, 14 August 2006 diff hist −4 United States Declaration of Independence →Introduction: Rem link from "Nature's God" to Deism article; violates NPOV; presupposes Deistic view of God held by Decl & its writers;rest of Decl uses ref's to God not consistent w/Deism
10 August 2006
- 20:5420:54, 10 August 2006 diff hist +1 m Ottoman Empire →The reforms (1699–1827): ft Hyphenated "backward-minded"
- 20:2120:21, 10 August 2006 diff hist −2 m Ottoman Empire →Revolts and Revival (1566–1683): Recast awkward sentence and misuse of serial and connections.
- 18:4118:41, 10 August 2006 diff hist 0 m Treaty of Sèvres replaced comma with semicolon
9 August 2006
- 23:2423:24, 9 August 2006 diff hist +5 Terminator 2: Judgment Day →Alternative versions: Grammar, punctuation, sentence structure clean-up--minor
- 23:1823:18, 9 August 2006 diff hist +15 m Terminator 2: Judgment Day →Plot holes: Punctuation clean-up
- 19:4119:41, 9 August 2006 diff hist −1 m Inverse synthetic-aperture radar →Introduction: punctuation
- 19:4019:40, 9 August 2006 diff hist −5 Synthetic-aperture radar →Differential Interferometry: noun-verb agreement, spelling
3 August 2006
- 19:4519:45, 3 August 2006 diff hist +1 m VFA-31 Consistency: "air wing" vs. "airwing"
- 19:4319:43, 3 August 2006 diff hist −10 VFA-31 →1980s & 1990s: More cleanup
- 19:4219:42, 3 August 2006 diff hist −4 VFA-31 →1980s & 1990s: More cleanup
- 19:3919:39, 3 August 2006 diff hist +6 VFA-31 →1980s & 1990s: Minor spelling / usage errors: of/off and it's/its and apostrophe use; other cleanup. Replaced "a single go" with "a single bombing run." Is this what was intended?
- 16:2816:28, 3 August 2006 diff hist −1 m Western world →The Debate over Greek Origins of Medieval Culture: Corrected spelling of one instance of "Medieval" to be consistent with the rest of the article
- 16:1816:18, 3 August 2006 diff hist +1 m Western world →Further definitions: ft corrected misspelling "Westeners" to "Westerners"
- 16:1216:12, 3 August 2006 diff hist +40 N User:HolyT Created page.
- 16:0516:05, 3 August 2006 diff hist +15 m Western world Inserted missing words "were converted" (may have been intentionally left out, but the passage was very awkward and at least a little unclear with the omission)
1 August 2006
- 21:2721:27, 1 August 2006 diff hist +1 m Northrop Grumman MQ-4C Triton Added serial semi-colon to clarify list of 5 items with commas in them
13 July 2006
- 22:4322:43, 13 July 2006 diff hist 0 m The Rise and Fall of the Great Powers →Table of Contents: corrected misspelling "forth" to "forty"
- 22:4322:43, 13 July 2006 diff hist +10 m The Rise and Fall of the Great Powers →Summary: inserted missing word "important"
- 21:0021:00, 13 July 2006 diff hist −10 m Starship Troopers (film) failed to clean up extra word in my previous edit
- 20:5920:59, 13 July 2006 diff hist −4 Starship Troopers (film) Deleted incorrect and misspelled "comission"; recast awkward sentence
12 July 2006
- 05:1305:13, 12 July 2006 diff hist −1 m ARA General Belgrano grammar/noun-verb agreement: changed "neither...were" to "neither....was"
7 July 2006
- 17:3617:36, 7 July 2006 diff hist −1 m 2006 North Korean missile test ft Grammar error (noun-verb agreement) "...the target for the Taepodong 2 missile was... " (changed "were" to "was")
4 July 2006
- 17:4817:48, 4 July 2006 diff hist −1 m C. Wade McClusky Changed "judgement" to "judgment"
3 July 2006
- 04:1904:19, 3 July 2006 diff hist −5 Superman III Eliminated grammatical error ("lied" as past participle of "to lie" [recline]) and recast very awkward sentence.
2 July 2006
- 22:2122:21, 2 July 2006 diff hist +5 T-X Re-cast a sentence to eliminate a sentence fragment and reduce awkwardness.
- 22:1422:14, 2 July 2006 diff hist +6 T-X Grammar change for consistency (noun-verb agreement) and spelling correction of "judgement" for consistency
- 21:5821:58, 2 July 2006 diff hist +1 m Hunter-killer sight Changed "unmaned" to "unmanned"
- 21:4821:48, 2 July 2006 diff hist −2 Terminator 2: Judgment Day Changed "Judgement" to "Judgment" in two places to make the article self-consistent. Made some ending quote punct consistent.
- 21:3921:39, 2 July 2006 diff hist −5 m Terminator 2: Judgment Day deleted extra word "that"
