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*{{tq|<s>However,</s> the residents of northern Kossuth County sent a delegation to [[Des Moines, Iowa|Des Moines]] to express that they did not want Larrabee County to exist.}} |
*{{tq|<s>However,</s> the residents of northern Kossuth County sent a delegation to [[Des Moines, Iowa|Des Moines]] to express that they did not want Larrabee County to exist.}} |
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Nominator: 48JCL (talk · contribs) 22:04, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: CosXZ (talk · contribs) 23:40, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
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Cos (X + Z) 23:40, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
Image and source review
- File:Map of Iowa highlighting Kossuth County.svg: appropriate image
- File:Map of Iowa highlighting Bancroft County.svg: appropriate image
- File:Portrait of William Larrabee.jpg: related with the article
- Great copyright on all images
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Earwig shows a 2.9% which is amazing.Cos (X + Z) 23:40, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
- @CosXZ any other things I need to address? 48JCL (talk) 01:57, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
- I will review more of the criteria later today Cos (X + Z) 14:56, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
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Done 48JCL (talk) 23:20, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
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- Move coordinates to in between the citations and the categories.
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Larrabee County was a proposed county in the northern part of Kossuth County, Iowa
in February 1913.
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It was named after governor William Larrabee.
replace "It" with "The County".
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It was preceded by Crocker County until it was disestablished being illegal.
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A vote was held in Kossuth County in order to see if the county would be established or not. It failed and Kossuth County remained the largest county in Iowa.
capitalize "county" and replace "It" with "The Vote".
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@CosXZ done 48JCL (talk) 16:32, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
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However,the residents of northern Kossuth County sent a delegation to Des Moines to express that they did not want Larrabee County to exist.
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Grammar
Background
, making Iowa
officiallya state of 100 counties.
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, Bancroft County was eliminated because it was not suitable for settling due to its marshes and wetlands
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Bancroft County's land was merged with Kossuth County, making Kossuth the largest County in Iowa,
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, and therefore Iowa was now a state of 99 counties.
---> and made Iowa a state of 99 counties.
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It lasted from 1870 to 1871,
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, being deemed illegal and unconstitutional.
---> being deemed "illegal and unconstitutional."
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, which declares in Article 11 that no new county shall be created which contains less than 432 square miles.
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Proposal
On 22 February 1913,
the US doesn't use the day-month-year format.
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The name Larrabee would honor new governor William Larrabee.
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The proposal received
just920 votes compared to the opposition's 3599 votes;
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