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== Dominika's Peer Review == |
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There is a strong start to the article, shown when defining the key words that are being explained. |
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It could be useful to separate the article into sections, including headers such as history or reason behind paleoendenism or different countries which have example of paleoendenism. |
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I don't recommend starting a sentence with "Because" it stops the flow of the article. |
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Some good example of Paleoendemism but these could be sectioned off into separate sections. |
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The article is neutral and does not favour a specific side. |
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There is no concrete conclusion summarising paleoendenism, however, I presume this is because you have not finished yet. |
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Very well done on your article! |
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Dominika's Peer Review
There is a strong start to the article, shown when defining the key words that are being explained. It could be useful to separate the article into sections, including headers such as history or reason behind paleoendenism or different countries which have example of paleoendenism. I don't recommend starting a sentence with "Because" it stops the flow of the article. Some good example of Paleoendemism but these could be sectioned off into separate sections. The article is neutral and does not favour a specific side. There is no concrete conclusion summarising paleoendenism, however, I presume this is because you have not finished yet. Very well done on your article!