Talk:Thomas Niedermayer

Article lede issues

At present the lede of the article's first sentence merely says that Mr Niedermayer was only "kidnapped" by the IRA and only adds that he "died in their custody" in a subsequent sentence, this is clear obfuscation in order to minimise the IRA's culpability. The assault on Niedermayer with a blunt instrument was no mere accident, while it is not clear whether or not his death was specifically murder, the assault he suffered which caused his death was certainly intentional; to say otherwise is a denial of the known facts.

Wikipedia does not use such language to describe other cases where a person was unlawfully killed by a detaining organization, whether it be a state or a violent non-state actor and whether the death was ultimately determined to be murder or manslaughter; they frankly state they were killed by the forces holding them. 92.30.2.106 (talk) 18:35, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

You don't get to relitigate a criminal trial based on your own opinion of the events. You may also benefit in reading manslaughter. Kathleen's bike (talk) 13:28, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

Nice way of avoiding the issues I raised. 92.30.6.163 (talk) 21:00, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

That's because I couldn't care less what you say, only what reliable sources say. Kathleen's bike (talk) 21:06, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

You seem to be unable to actually understand what words mean. Reliable sources say Mr Niedermayer was killed, you appear not to understand the meaning of the word "killed" or the definitions of "murder", "manslaughter", or "homicide", in which case you probably should not be editing Wikipedia. 92.30.6.163 (talk) 00:32, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

Further reading: homicide

Homicide is an act in which a human causes the death of another human. A homicide requires only a volitional act or an omission that causes the death of another, and thus a homicide may result from accidental, reckless, or negligent acts even if there is no intent to cause harm.

The disambiguation page killing defines homicide as "one human killing another" and list of types of killing defines manslaughter as "murder with mitigating circumstances". 92.30.6.163 (talk) 00:50, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

I don't see how explaining in more detail can possibly be "obfuscating" when removing said detail does exactly that. FDW777 (talk) 17:11, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

The first sentence, the one which appears in web search engines, at present reads only that Niedermayer was "kidnapped"; this obfuscates the severity of his abduction; namely that it resulted in his death. When a person notable for being a kidnap victim was killed by their captors (whether the death was determined to be murder or manslaughter) Wikipedia typically states in the first sentence that they were "kidnapped and killed by [x]". Manslaughter is typically considered a graver crime than kidnapping alone.

Related pages use this format, such as Disappearance of Peter Wilson, which says Wilson was "was abducted and killed by the Provisional Irish Republican Army". 89.240.206.244 (talk) 19:08, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

We don't write articles in order to ensure they display "properly" in search engine results. The first sentence is not required to include all the information that summarises the article, that is the job of the lead as a whole. See guidance at WP:LEAD. Kathleen's bike (talk) 20:24, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

I do not believe you are acting in good faith, your claim that "manslaughter is not killing" is one of the strangest comments I have ever heard from anybody, and this is the matter at hand. The fact you seem to be unable to acknowledge the legal and popular definitions of common words indicates that your native biases appear to be steering your conduct. Taking a look at your edit history, you seem to be dedicated to watering-down and obfuscating potentially negative perceptions of the behaviour of the IRA, seemingly stripping them of any trace of human agency or personal responsibility and treating them as if they are not human beings but instinctual animals or acts of god. 89.240.206.244 (talk) 23:27, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

When/where did I say "manslaughter is not killing"? Kathleen's bike (talk) 20:27, 29 June 2024 (UTC)

You said ""killed" implies deliberate intent, which wasn't established during the court case".

As demonstrated with Wikipedia sources, "killed" is distinct from "murder"; "killed" is a neutral term to describe the ending of a life by a deliberate act of a third party, whether it be lawful or unlawful and whether the intention be death or otherwise. "Killed" refers to all homicide, "murder" is a specific category of homicide; you do not have the authority to invent your own definitions of words and to assert that "manslaughter" is not the same as "killing".

• When the article was created on 30 June 2010 the lede read "kidnapped and later murdered".
• The creator of the article amended this to read "kidnapped and killed" on 2 July 2010, this remained the wording used until May 2018.
• On 20 May 2018 this was changed to "kidnapped and died in the hands of the Provisional IRA". This wording lasted until 27 December 2023 when it was changed to "kidnapped [...] and died from a violent attack in their custody"
• The current wording, splitting the kidnapping and killing into separate sentences, was inserted as recently as 28 December 2023

In the 14 years since the article was created, Niedermayer's kidnapping and death were both included in the initial sentence until just 7 months ago. 92.21.248.228 (talk) 12:23, 1 July 2024 (UTC)

If the following reliable sources are not good enough, then I can only conclude Kathleen's Bike is acting in bad faith.

• BBC News: "The granddaughter of a German businessman killed by the IRA 50 years ago has planted a tree in Belfast close to where his body was found"
• Irish News: "IRA kidnapping and killing of German businessman Thomas Niedermayer told in new documentary"
• The Guardian: "The kidnapping and killing of Thomas Niedermayer by the Provisional IRA is given deeply moving family context and gripping historical background"
• RTE News: "he was killed by his captors when he tried to escape shortly after he was taken"

The historian Richard English initially stated in "Armed Struggle: The History of the IRA" (2008) that Niedermayer's death was "possibly a heart attack", however in his latest book "Does Counter-Terrorism Work?" he calls the incident a "kidnapping and callous murder", indicating he has changed his opinion based upon new evidence. 92.21.248.228 (talk) 20:31, 1 July 2024 (UTC)

You should read Lost Lives, which is the definitive work on deaths during the Troubles. It details the post mortem report stating he had two skull fractures, one of which could have caused his death. However the post mortem also suggested he could have died from asphyxiation or a heart attack. That would suggest to me the article needs amending in the exact opposite way you want to change it, in order to avoid an inappropriate cause/effect construction in the lead. Kathleen's bike (talk) 02:35, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

Given that the bulk of reliable sources do not agree, I rather suspect you are cherrypicking whatever is most convenient for your views. Demanding specific selected reading rather than taking the available sources as a whole is extremely suspicious. 92.21.248.228 (talk) 04:13, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

Lazy summarising by sources isn't really relevant. The facts aren't actually in dispute. Fact #1, the cause of Thomas Niedermayer's death isn't actually known. Fact #2, one person was convicted of manslaughter, not murder. Kathleen's bike (talk) 20:40, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

Once again you are directly equating the word "killing" with the word "murder", which is not accurate as I demonstrated earlier. 78.147.140.112 (talk) 08:39, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

I saw this mentioned at the Wikipedia:Neutral point of view/Noticeboard. Recent reliable sources on both sides of the Irish Sea have no difficulty saying that the IRA killed Niedermayer. There's a long article in the Dublin Review of Books discussing David Blake Knox's 2019 book. There's plenty of ambiguity about how exactly Niedermayer died, and the article discusses that. The article has no problem saying that Niedermayer was killed. That's certainly in line with the legal outcome, in which John Bradley was convicted of manslaughter. Mackensen (talk) 13:41, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

The article didn't discuss that at all, until I made sure it did. For some reason the IP editor objects to content such as this, for unclear reasons. Kathleen's bike (talk) 14:13, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

I did not object to those statements and never touched them, do not misrepresent me. 78.147.140.112 (talk) 14:44, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

RfC: Article Lede: opening sentence and nature of death - should the opening sentence be changed to "Thomas Niedermayer [...] was kidnapped and killed by the Provisional IRA"?

We need to settle once and for all what the opening sentence ought to say about Niedermayer's abduction and death. For many years the sentence read that Niedermayer was "kidnapped and killed by the Provisional IRA"; in 2018 this was changed to "kidnapped and died in the hands of the Provisional IRA". In December 2023 this was even further toned down to say only "kidnapped by the Provisional IRA", with his death only mentioned in a subsequent sentence. I do not believe this to fully capture the severity of the case; to merely say he was kidnapped could imply he was ultimately rescued by the authorities or released by his captors. I believe the original wording of "kidnapped and killed" ought to be restored.

The user "Kathleen's Bike" appears to contend that the word "killed" exclusively refers to cases in which there was a murder conviction, I believe this to be a dishonest statement; manslaughter and murder are both forms of homicide, which is a broad category referring to the death of a human at the hands of another human; nobody disputes that both Mr Niedermayer and his kidnappers were humans, therefore his death was by definition a homicide since the cause of death was determined to be physical violence inflicted by his captors due to the presence of injuries to his skull inflicted prior to death which showed no signs of healing. Whether or not his death was the intended outcome of the assault is immaterial. Even if the (doubtful) claim Niedermayer died from a coincidental unrelated heart attack is true, the failure of his captors to seek medical treatment would be considered criminal negligence since by abducting him they held all responsibility for his welfare.

Under British law the crime of manslaughter[1] comprises: 1) intent to murder with mitigating circumstances, 2) gross negligence manslaughter, and 3) unlawful and dangerous act manslaughter. The latter two do not include the intent to kill but in which death resulted from an act one could reasonable foresee could be dangerous to life; assault with a blunt instrument, particularly to the head, resulting in death certainly qualifies. 78.147.140.112 (talk) 14:26, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

"For many years" holds no weight at all. For many years this article was in fact wrong, until I recently fixed it. Kathleen's bike (talk) 14:30, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

The statement of "therefore his death was by definition a homicide since the cause of death was determined to be physical violence inflicted by his captors due to the presence of injuries to his skull inflicted prior to death which showed no signs of healing" is simply a false statement, as the source cited in my diff in the comment above makes clear. Kathleen's bike (talk) 14:33, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

Suffocation and failure to seek medical attention for a person suffering a cardiac arrest would also qualify as homicide; this is considered Gross Negligence Manslaughter under British law. I had addressed this in saying "Even if the (doubtful) claim Niedermayer died from a coincidental unrelated heart attack is true, the failure of his captors to seek medical treatment would be considered criminal negligence since by abducting him they held all responsibility for his welfare." 78.147.140.112 (talk) 14:39, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

What "British law" are you talking about? Kathleen's bike (talk) 14:45, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

The Northern Ireland Public Prosecution Service uses the same definitions for manslaughter as the Crown Prosecution Service in England and Wales, therefore you are clearly being deliberately ignorant (Scots Law uses "culpable homicide" to refer to the crime of manslaughter, but Northern Ireland does not use terminology from Scots Law). 78.147.140.112 (talk) 15:43, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

Since the Public Prosecution Service for Northern Ireland wasn't established until 2005, your reply is specious and not germane to this discussion. Kathleen's bike (talk) 16:35, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

And yours is equally specious. I cited the CPS' definition of manslaughter because the CPS definitions were the ones used by the police at the time in the 1970s. You are not being honest in your sniping. 78.147.140.112 (talk) 17:05, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

This is not a brief, neutral statement, or question about the issue. What exactly are your proposing? Isaidnoway (talk) 16:29, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

I did my best, I wanted to properly address the issues at hand to try to mitigate Kathleen's Bike's "sniping" behaviour.

My proposal is that the opening sentence ought to be changed back to "Thomas Niedermayer [...] was kidnapped and killed by the Provisional IRA". The source cherrypicked by KB rarely uses the construction "x person was killed by y group" to describe -any- death; the usual construction is to cite the exact cause of death; for example "x person was shot by y group"; therefore KB's claims are largely without foundation since they ignore the general nature of how entries are compiled in that text. 78.147.140.112 (talk) 17:18, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

Well if that is the question you want to ask, then just ask that question - should the opening sentence be changed to "Thomas Niedermayer [...] was kidnapped and killed by the Provisional IRA". And then move your commentary down below. Make it a simple question so people responding to the RfC can understand exactly what is being proposed. Isaidnoway (talk) 17:36, 4 July 2024 (UTC)