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... that the ritual of lighting Makaravilakku (pictured) atop the Indian summit of Ponnambalamedu is witnessed by nearly half a million people annually?

Comment: Couldn't review any article in queue as I am editing from a mobile and so checking for copyvios would be impossible. I'll review an article or two in a couple of days. Suraj T 12:41, 20 January 2013 (UTC)

5x expanded by Surajt88 (talk), Whitetararaj (talk). Nominated by Surajt88 (talk) at 12:08, 20 January 2013 (UTC)

Grammar tweak: Removed second "annually". Yoninah (talk) 13:06, 20 January 2013 (UTC)

I've moved the "annual" part to the end of the hook. Hope it reads better now. Suraj T 13:49, 20 January 2013 (UTC)

Reviewed Template:Did you know nominations/Jasuben Shilpi. Suraj T 14:29, 21 January 2013 (UTC)

New enough, long enough, well-referenced, no close paraphrasing seen in sources. Tweaked hook; hook ref is verified. QPQ done. Good to go. Yoninah (talk) 23:26, 23 January 2013 (UTC)

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-{{*mp}}... that the ritual of lighting [[Makaravilakku]] ''(pictured)'' atop '''[[Ponnambalamedu]]''' is witnessed from [[Sabarimala]] by nearly half a million people annually?
+{{*mp}}... that the ritual of lighting [[Makaravilakku]] ''(pictured)'' atop the Indian summit of '''[[Ponnambalamedu]]''' is witnessed by nearly half a million people annually?
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 :I've moved the "annual" part to the end of the hook. Hope it reads better now. <span style="text-shadow:gray 0.1em 0.1em 0.1em; class=texhtml">[[user:Surajt88|<font face="Vivaldi" color="red" size="4px">'''Suraj'''</font>]][[user talk:Surajt88|<font face="Edwardian Script ITC" color="blue" size="4px"> '''T'''</font>]]</span> 13:49, 20 January 2013 (UTC)
 ::'''Reviewed''' [[Template:Did you know nominations/Jasuben Shilpi]]. <span style="text-shadow:gray 0.1em 0.1em 0.1em; class=texhtml">[[user:Surajt88|<font face="Vivaldi" color="red" size="4px">'''Suraj'''</font>]][[user talk:Surajt88|<font face="Edwardian Script ITC" color="blue" size="4px"> '''T'''</font>]]</span> 14:29, 21 January 2013 (UTC)
+:::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, well-referenced, no close paraphrasing seen in sources. Tweaked hook; hook ref is verified. QPQ done. Good to go. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 23:26, 23 January 2013 (UTC)
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