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Hello, I edit the [[Digital marketing]] article. Here is the [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Digital_marketing&diff=1234240496&oldid=1233704370 diff link]. I read the history of digital marketing and found some journals to make the history more complete. I learned about the development and strategies of digital marketing. I also learned how to add citations and view historical changes. [[User:Zhilin0321|Zhilin0321]] ([[User talk:Zhilin0321|talk]]) 09:50, 13 July 2024 (UTC) |
Hello, I edit the [[Digital marketing]] article. Here is the [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Digital_marketing&diff=1234240496&oldid=1233704370 diff link]. I read the history of digital marketing and found some journals to make the history more complete. I learned about the development and strategies of digital marketing. I also learned how to add citations and view historical changes. [[User:Zhilin0321|Zhilin0321]] ([[User talk:Zhilin0321|talk]]) 09:50, 13 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:@[[User:Zhilin0321|Zhilin0321]] Nice edit. Current with Week 2. [[User:FULBERT|FULBERT]] ([[User talk:FULBERT#top|talk]]) 12:18, 13 July 2024 (UTC) |
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Week 2/ Ryan1232378
I edited the LVMH article on Wikipedia to include information about LVMH's acquisition of Swiza, owner of L’Epée 1839, in June 2024. You can see the changes in the diff link. Through this process, I learned about LVMH's strategic acquisitions to enhance its luxury watch division and the importance of preserving historic craftsmanship.
Ryan1232378 (talk) 13:39, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Ryan1232378 Please review the Wikipedia policies training materials again related to the first two pillars of Wikipedia. The edit you made included too many buzzwords and terms that appeared like marketing language and did not appear to be written from a Neutral point of view. Additionally, some of what you contributed appeared too close to the actual sources you used, which some could challenge as plagiarism (please review this part of the training on this). Please edit what you wrote and then ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 11:22, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for your feedback. I have revised the edit according to your suggestions, removing the excessive buzzwords and ensuring a neutral point of view. The revised content is in the following link: LVMH and the diff Ryan1232378 (talk) 06:10, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
- Ryan1232378 (talk) 06:11, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Ryan1232378 Nice edits. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 15:56, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
- Ryan1232378 (talk) 06:11, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for your feedback. I have revised the edit according to your suggestions, removing the excessive buzzwords and ensuring a neutral point of view. The revised content is in the following link: LVMH and the diff Ryan1232378 (talk) 06:10, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
Week 2/Yz9988
I edited the Pet adoption article on Wikipedia by adding the contents of the responsibilities of pet dog ownership after pet adoption. diff link is here. Yz9988 (talk) 22:13, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Yz9988 Your edit does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third-party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE. As discussed in the assignment and class, always use a reliable source, such as an academic journal article or another high-quality reference. Avoid blogs, corporate websites, reviews, press releases, sources where we cannot determine author expertise or bias, and opinion pieces as they generally do not count as reliable sources. Please add a source to support your claim and then ping me here when done, and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 11:28, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for your feedback. I have changed the edit of the Pet adoption article and here is the updated diff link. The source is here.
- Holland KE. Acquiring a Pet Dog: A Review of Factors Affecting the Decision-Making of Prospective Dog Owners. Animals. 2019; 9(4):124. https://doi.org/10.3390/ani9040124https://doi.org/10.3390/vetsci8120332
- Yz9988 (talk) 02:30, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
- Sorry, here's the diff link. Yz9988 (talk) 02:32, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Yz9988 Please review the training video you took here and insert that citation into the article. Listing it here does not help the readers of the article. In addition, do not mention the author nor the title of the article; make your claim and then support it with your citation. Ping me here when finished and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 16:51, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
- More significantly, Yz9988, carefully review the Wikipedia policy on copyright violation and your school's policy on plagiarism. I had to rev-del some of your edits. DMacks (talk) 12:30, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Yz9988 Please do not do any further edits until we discuss. FULBERT (talk) 14:54, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Sorry about mistakes I made, I will review the training video and Wikipedia policy first. Yz9988 (talk) 22:27, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Yz9988 Thank you; let's discuss after class if possible. FULBERT (talk) 12:32, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Yz9988 We discussed this in class, and given that discussion, please email me the next edit you plan to do for this assignment, along with its citation, so I can review before you do the actual edit itself. Please do this before the end of tomorrow. FULBERT (talk) 10:16, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Yz9988 Thank you; let's discuss after class if possible. FULBERT (talk) 12:32, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
- Sorry about mistakes I made, I will review the training video and Wikipedia policy first. Yz9988 (talk) 22:27, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- @DMacks Thank you for the helpful feedback, which is much appreciated. FULBERT (talk) 12:33, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Yz9988 Please do not do any further edits until we discuss. FULBERT (talk) 14:54, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Sorry, here's the diff link. Yz9988 (talk) 02:32, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
Week 1 / Garnix L
Hi everyone, my name is Jialu Li, and I'm happy to join this interesting project. This week, I created a new Wikipedia account, completed training on Wikipedia policies, sandboxes, talk pages, and watchlists, and learned about the most basic wiki editing knowledge and precautions. Finally, I turned on notifications in my preferences." ~~~~ " Garnix L (talk) 15:41, 4 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Garnix L Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find this assignment a helpful learning experience. Current with Week 1. FULBERT (talk) 16:52, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
Week 1 / Yl11406
Hi, all. This is Yl11406. I am new to Wikipedia, so I am trying to learn how to edit the posts on the website. Currently, I am a master’s student studying management and systems at NYU. Looking forward to participating in this project! ~~~~ Yl11406 (talk) 14:30, 6 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Yl11406 Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find this assignment a helpful learning experience. Current with Week 1. FULBERT (talk) 16:55, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
This week's article for improvement (week 28, 2024)
Hello, FULBERT. The article for improvement of the week is:
Please be bold and help improve it! Previous selections: Mechanism (engineering) • Breaking wave Get involved with the AFI project: Nominate an article • Review nominations Posted by: MusikBot talk 00:06, 8 July 2024 (UTC) using MediaWiki message delivery (talk) on behalf of WikiProject AFI • |
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Week 3/ Ryan1232378
I edited the Artificial intelligence on Wikipedia. You can see the changes in the diff link.
I learned how to effectively integrate academic research into a Wikipedia article to enhance its content and credibility. By citing the study by Dhaigude and Lawande (2022), I demonstrated the practical benefits of AI in the credit scoring process, highlighting its role in improving financial decision-making and operational efficiency.
This exercise improved my understanding of the impact of AI in finance and the importance of reliable sources in public knowledge repositories. Ryan1232378 (talk) 10:48, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Ryan1232378 Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 10:58, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Ryan1232378 Your edit was reverted; please do not do any more edits until we discuss. FULBERT (talk) 14:53, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- @FULBERT I have assigned myself the article on the Wiki Edu Dashboard. I am now waiting for your feedback and further instructions. Thank you for your guidance.Ryan1232378 (talk) 15:54, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- I've now assigned myself the article on the Wiki Edu Dashboard. Please let me know if there are any further steps or if you need any additional information from me. Thank you!Ryan1232378 (talk) 15:52, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Ryan1232378 Let's discuss and clarify this after the next class. FULBERT (talk) 12:37, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Ryan1232378 We discussed this in class, and given that discussion, please email me the next edit you plan to do for this assignment, along with its citation, so I can review before you do the actual edit itself. Please do this before the end of tomorrow. FULBERT (talk) 10:16, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- @FULBERT Thank you for the reminder!I will complete the content within the next 12 hours and email it to you, including the citation. Ryan1232378 (talk) 10:20, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Ryan1232378 We discussed this in class, and given that discussion, please email me the next edit you plan to do for this assignment, along with its citation, so I can review before you do the actual edit itself. Please do this before the end of tomorrow. FULBERT (talk) 10:16, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Ryan1232378 Let's discuss and clarify this after the next class. FULBERT (talk) 12:37, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Ryan1232378 Your edit was reverted; please do not do any more edits until we discuss. FULBERT (talk) 14:53, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
Week 1 / Zhilin0321
Hello everyone, I am Zhi Lin and you can call me Melody. I am glad to join this project and work with you! I created a new Wikipedia account and did all the training processes. I learned about how to edit articles and cite support resources. Also, I finished setting up my all preferences. " ~~~~ " Zhilin0321 (talk) 11:42, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Zhilin0321 Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find this assignment a helpful learning experience. Current with Week 1. FULBERT (talk) 18:10, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
Wikidata weekly summary #635
This is the Wikidata summary of the week before 2024-07-08. Please help Translate.
- Upcoming:
- The next Wikidata+Wikibase office hours will take place on Wednesday, 16:00 UTC on Wednesday, 10th July 2024 (18:00 Berlin time) in the Wikidata Telegram group. The Wikidata and Wikibase office hours are online events where the development team presents what they have been working on over the past quarter, and the community is welcome to ask questions and discuss important issues related to the development of Wikidata and Wikibase.
- Registration for Wikimania 2024 is open! In-person participants: please register until 26 July, 11:59 p.m., UTC. Virtual participants can register anytime. If you received a scholarship from the Wikimedia Foundation, you will receive an email with a registration code and instructions.
Tool of the week
- User:Teester/EntityShape.js - a userscript that adds an input box to a Wikidata page wherein you can enter an EntitySchema (such as E10). When you click "Check", checks whether each statement and property conforms to the schema. It then displays a summary at the top of the Item for each property indicating whether they conform or not. It also adds a badge to each statement and each property on the page indicating whether they conform or not.
Other Noteworthy Stuff
- Wikidata teams' development goals for the third quarter of 2024 have been updated: Wikidata:Development plan
Newest properties and property proposals to review
- Newest General datatypes:
- music mood (qualifier carrying an emotion (mood) relevant to a musical audio recording)
- coin edge (image or images that show the edge of a coin)
- ozone depletion potential (relative amount of degradation to the ozone layer relative to CFC-11)
- EntitySchema for class (schema that members of a class should conform to)
- Newest External identifiers: Naturalis Repository ID, English-Spanish Dictionary ID, Vikidia article ID, thisisbasketball.be player ID, poblesdecatalunya.cat ID, Oqaasersiorfik ID, MNAHA person ID, Greenlandic-English Dictionary ID, Te Aka Māori Dictionary ID, Tropicos person ID, He Pātaka Kupu ID, vehicle keeper marking (VKM), AllGame style ID, FC Metz player ID, MoFo ID, itch.io numeric ID, filmas.lv film ID, filmas.lv person ID, filmas.lv studio ID, Cockroach Species File taxon ID (new), Lygaeoidea Species File taxon ID (new), Phasmida Species File taxon ID (new), Psocodea Species File taxon ID (new), Spanish-English Dictionary ID, Norwegian National Museum producer ID, Burgenwelt ID, Irish-English Dictionary ID, Tesoro della Lingua Italiana delle Origini ID, Tommaseo-Bellini Online ID, danskfodbold.com player ID, DAKA Danish-Greenlandic Dictionary ID, DAKA Greenlandic-Danish Dictionary ID, Canadian Great War Project person ID, English-Irish Dictionary ID, PMC journal ID, Census ID, Douban personage ID, Avibase person ID, Brezhoneg21 ID, European Education Thesaurus ID, Cineuropa distributor ID, Cineuropa production company ID, OpenCitations Meta ID, IGN franchise ID, Federal Reserve Subject Taxonomy ID, Farhang-i forsī ba rusī ID, Devri ID, Cambridge University Press ID, Canadian Virtual War Memorial ID, Personnel Records of the First World War ID, Fowler’s Concise Dictionary ID, NooSFere publisher ID, Plex person key, BHMPI OBJ ID, Index Fungorum person ID, stiga.trefik.cz player ID, UNIBO professor ID, Cineuropa international sales agent ID, Mapes de Patrimoni Cultural ID, Il Nuovo DOP ID, RGALI person ID, RGALI organization ID, Archelec person ID, Lojas com História ID, milononline.net entry ID, Hebrew Academy term ID, LAGL author ID, KANAL ID, Google Play author ID, Overcast episode ID, ArchWiki article, Valencian Library ID, Star Wars.com ID
- New General datatypes property proposals to review:
- number of local branches (number of branches of this organization at the lowest (local) level)
- KANAL inventory ID (inventory number of a creative work assigned by KANAL)
- Tüik mahalle id (Identifier of neighborhoods <small>({{q|Q17051044}})</small> in Turkey in TÜİK <small>({{q|Q1375058}})</small> database)
- myfixguide.com (Photos about how to disassemble hardware)
- date de vote (vote date, date on which people decided or casted their ballot)
- Sandbox-EntitySchema (Sandbox property for value of type "EntitySchema")
- Imperial University of Dorpat student ID (matriculation number of a student of the Imperial University of Dorpat)
- indexer (entity responsible for compiling an index of a book, database, website or other forms of media publications in the form of a methodical arrangement of records designed to enable users to locate information quickly. Example: Hazel K. Bell (Q70226489))
- WorldCyclingStats ID (identifier on the website WorldCyclingStats (www.worldcyclingstats.com))
- New External identifier property proposals to review: Pocket Oxford-Hachette French Dictionary: English-French ID, Biodiversity Information System for Europe ID, Elonet company ID, Numista issuer ID, Metamath statement label, Pocket Oxford German Dictionary: English-German ID, Pocket Oxford Italian Dictionary: English-Italian ID, FEI horse ID, Standard Ebooks ID, Alle Burgen, FC Krasnodar player id, Pocket Oxford Italian Dictionary: Italian-English ID, Pocket Oxford German Dictionary: German-English ID, Pocket Oxford-Hachette French Dictionary: French-English ID, Manhom Arabic Profile ID, GOArt databas, identifikátor filmu ve Filmové databázi (FDb), identifikátor osoby ve Filmové databázi (FDb), ScienceDirect journal ID, Iraqnla Book ID, islamway authority ID, Hermitage Museum artist ID, Coptic Dictionary Online ID, autoritateak.eus, Museum of the Russian Academy of Arts artist ID, Thinkwiki article
You can comment on all open property proposals!
Did you know?
- Query examples:
- Newest database reports: User:Pasleim/commonsmerge - Merge candidates based on same commons category
- Showcase Items: Ferdinand Magellan (Q1496) - Portuguese explorer in the service of Spain
- Showcase Lexemes: bergkant (L1083157) - Nynorsk noun, translates to "the top edge of a mountain"
Development
- EntitySchemas: The new datatype to link to EntitySchemas in statements has been released.
- mul language code: We are preparing the release.
You can see all open tickets related to Wikidata here. If you want to help, you can also have a look at the tasks needing a volunteer.
Weekly Tasks
- Add labels, in your own language(s), for the new properties listed above.
- Contribute to the showcase Item and Lexeme above.
- Participate in this week's Lexeme challenge:
- Govdirectory weekly focus country: Armenia
- Summarize your WikiProject's ongoing activities in one or two sentences.
- Help translate or proofread the interface and documentation pages, in your own language!
- Help merge identical items across Wikimedia projects.
- Help write the next summary!
This Month in Education: June 2024
This Month in Education
Volume 13 • Issue 6 • June 2024
- From a Language Teacher to a Library Support Staff: The Wikimedia Effect
- 5th WikiEducation 2024 Conference in Mexico
- Lviv hosted a spring wikischool for Ukrainian high school students
- First class of teachers graduated from Reading Wikipedia in the Classroom 2024
- Empowering Digital Citizenship: Unlocking the Power of Open Knowledge with Participants of the LIFE Legacy
- Wiki Movimento Brazil supports online and in-person courses and launches material to guide educators in using Wikimedia projects
- Where to find images for free? Webinar for librarians answered many questions
- Wikimedia MKD and University of Goce Delchev start a mutual collaboration
week 2 / Joanna zhao
hi this is Joanna Zhao, I edited: Marketing and artificial intelligence in wikipedia. expand more details in the introduction part. this is the previous version I don't know whether you could see it: Marketing and artificial intelligence from this assignment I learned that we could use the resources online professionally. and I did more research on the topic which I interested in. looking forward to the next assignment. Yz10411 (talk) 23:55, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
- Addition was uncited. But it was also merely cut'n'pasted (at best some was close-paraphrase) content from various (uncited) sources. I undid the edit. DMacks (talk) 04:26, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
- @DMacks Thank you for the helpful feedback for my student. FULBERT (talk) 12:38, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
- Glad to help. I'm not sure why so many pages of your students' have accumulated on my watchlist over the years:) I'd be happy to back off a bit if you (yourself, or plural your class) are feeling like I'm overly focused on them. DMacks (talk) 03:31, 11 July 2024 (UTC)
- @DMacks I appreciate your help and suggestions. While I am trying to teach many people to use Wikipedia, having our community involved in this such as yourself demonstrates that this is not only a community effort but also that there are real people watching these articles, and as part of the ecosystem of free and open knowledge, this is as real as it can get. Thank you for your ongoing help, especially as you do not bite the newbies!! FULBERT (talk) 10:22, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- Glad to help. I'm not sure why so many pages of your students' have accumulated on my watchlist over the years:) I'd be happy to back off a bit if you (yourself, or plural your class) are feeling like I'm overly focused on them. DMacks (talk) 03:31, 11 July 2024 (UTC)
- @DMacks Thank you for the helpful feedback for my student. FULBERT (talk) 12:38, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Yz10411 Your edit was reverted; please see the feedback. Also, please do not do any more edits until we meet to discuss. FULBERT (talk) 12:38, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
- thank you for the feedback do I need to start a new section/ message to re edit this or just begin week 3? Yz10411 (talk) 20:22, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- hello professor I start a new topic for week 2 thank you ! Yz10411 (talk) 05:26, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Yz10411 Great; will look for it. FULBERT (talk) 11:59, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
Week 1 / zq2197
Hello, I just started my first assignment and this is my first time doing this. Zq2197 (talk) 10:14, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Zq2197 Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find this assignment a helpful learning experience. Current with Week 1. FULBERT (talk) 12:42, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
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Week 1/ Mt5332
Hello, I just started my first assignment and i am doing this for the first time. I never knew that we could edit articles on Wikipedia. Mt5332 (talk) 18:14, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Mt5332 Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find this assignment a helpful learning experience. Current with Week 1. FULBERT (talk) 10:27, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
Week 1 / ae2744
Hi All,
My name is Alejandro, I am excited to learn more about how to use Wikipedia, and learn more about editing and improving Wikipedia articles. Done with tasks from week 1 and looking forward to take on week 2.
~~~~ Ae2744 (talk) 00:57, 11 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Ae2744 Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find this assignment a helpful learning experience. Current with Week 1. FULBERT (talk) 10:28, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
Week 2 / age497
Hello,
In the assignment for this week I made changes in the "ESG" article in Wikipedia. I made changes on the section of Firms where is talks about the implications of ESG in companies. I added information highlighting the financial challenges that small and medium-sized enterprises (SMEs) face when adopting ESG practices. Specifically, I noted that while large corporations have the resources to invest in sustainable technologies and practices, SMEs often struggle with the upfront costs associated with these initiatives. By doing this I learned the process on how to change/add information in articles in Wikipedia and the correct way to do it. Looking forward to Week 3.
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Ae2744 (talk) 01:52, 11 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Ae2744 Did you see the follow-up edit that another editor did to your edit here, along with their edit summary? FULBERT (talk) 10:32, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Ae2744 Please give me your thoughts about what they wrote as a reply to me here, and then you will be complete with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 10:32, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- @FULBERT Thanks for your reply, I had not seen that follow-up edit. I believe that my edit does not explicitly say that the impact of ESG regulations on SMEs is a fact or something 100% certain, what I got from the source was that it can be more difficult for business with those characteristics to successfully cope with them, that is why I used words like "can" or "may". 200.89.87.150 (talk) 16:25, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Ae2744 Please ensure you are logged on when you reply, as your signature before was not your user name. OK, current with Week 2. Move on to Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 12:01, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
- @FULBERT Thanks for your reply, I had not seen that follow-up edit. I believe that my edit does not explicitly say that the impact of ESG regulations on SMEs is a fact or something 100% certain, what I got from the source was that it can be more difficult for business with those characteristics to successfully cope with them, that is why I used words like "can" or "may". 200.89.87.150 (talk) 16:25, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Ae2744 Please give me your thoughts about what they wrote as a reply to me here, and then you will be complete with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 10:32, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
Week 1 / Xuhang1204
Hello,
My name is Xuhang Zheng. I am excited to be a part of this course and look forward to learning more about Wikipedia editing and contributing to the community. This week, I have created my account, completed all the required training courses for Week 1, and adjusted my Wikipedia preferences as instructed. I hope it's not too late to catch up with the assignments from Week 1 Xuhang1204 (talk) 12:35, 11 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Xuhang1204 Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find this assignment a helpful learning experience. Current with Week 1. FULBERT (talk) 10:33, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
This Month in GLAM: June 2024
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Week 2 / Yl11406
I edited the Head-up display article on Wikipedia addressing the development history of in-car HUD in 1999 and 2010. Here is the diff that I have made. Through this exercise, I learned how to combine the high-quality journal article I found with the related Wikipedia article. Yl11406 (talk) 14:57, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Yl11406 Nice edit. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 12:04, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
Week 2 / Garnix L
I edited the Volleyball on Wikipedia by adding the reference to the part of volleyball game rules change. Here is link diff . Garnix L (talk) 15:30, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Garnix L Please finish all parts of this assignment for this week and then ping me here. Your edit should to include a sentence or two to express your contribution in context and demonstrate how it adds to the knowledge in the article before the citation. Also, write a sentence or two about what you learned in the process. Ping me here when done and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 12:08, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
week1/ joannazhao
hello this is Joanna zhao, I misunderstood the requirements last time, so I will try again for the assignments! I completed all the training sections and I'm happy to start the journey in wikipedia Yz10411 (talk) 19:53, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Yz10411 Please edit the title of this week's assignment with your username and not your actual name. This should match how you sign your posts. Ping me here when you are finished and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 12:09, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
Week 2/ mt5332
I edited the Market capitalization - Wikipedia article, to include the relation between large caps and small caps based on growth rate and risk. Through this link you can see the difference. Market capitalization: Difference between revisions - Wikipedia. Through this process i learnt the inverse relationship between large caps and small caps for growth and risk. Mt5332 (talk) 20:01, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Mt5332 This is fine for now, and next time please add a new citation rather than reusing one that is already present in the article. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 12:12, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
week 2/ Joanna zhao
hello I edited French fashion , and this is the difference https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?diff=1234214438 from this work I learned the history of French fashion and today's improvement. which will give me some ideas in future works Yz10411 (talk) 05:24, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Yz10411 Please finish all parts of this assignment for this week and then ping me here. You did not include a new citation to the article, along with 1-2 sentences that came from it. What you did was further refine what was already present. Add to this article or assign yourself a new one for the edit and then ping me here and I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 12:14, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
week 2/ Xuhang1204
I edited the Applications of Artificial Intelligence article. Here is the diff link showing the difference between the previous version and the current one. In the process of editing this article, I learned how to effectively integrate concise, well-cited content into an existing Wikipedia entry. I also gained experience in using Wikipedia's editing and citation tools. Xuhang1204 (talk) 06:49, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Xuhang1204 What does this have to do with the section you edited -- Online and telephone customer service? Please make a clearer connection with this or move it to a better spot in the article before somebody comes and reverts it. Make this change and then ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 12:17, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
Week 2/ Zhilin0321
Hello, I edit the Digital marketing article. Here is the diff link. I read the history of digital marketing and found some journals to make the history more complete. I learned about the development and strategies of digital marketing. I also learned how to add citations and view historical changes. Zhilin0321 (talk) 09:50, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Zhilin0321 Nice edit. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 12:18, 13 July 2024 (UTC)