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Biased labels, particularly when the label is negative—such as calling an organization a ''cult'', an individual a ''racist'', or a sexual practice a ''perversion''—are best avoided unless widely used by reliable sources to describe the subject, in which case use in-text attribution. ''Terrorist'' and ''freedom fighter'' can be especially contentious. If they are not in wide use by authoritative sources, use a more specific term such as ''bomber'', ''gunman'', ''hijacker'', ''hostage taker'', or ''kidnapper''. If none of these apply, use a more neutral, general word such as ''insurgent'', ''paramilitary'', ''partisan'', or ''militant''.
Biased labels, particularly when the label is negative—such as calling an organization a ''cult'', an individual a ''racist'', or a sexual practice a ''perversion''—are best avoided unless widely used by reliable sources to describe the subject, in which case use in-text attribution. ''Terrorist'' and ''freedom fighter'' can be especially contentious. If they are not in wide use by authoritative sources, use a more specific term such as ''bomber'', ''gunman'', ''hijacker'', ''hostage taker'', or ''kidnapper''. If none of these apply, use a more neutral, general word such as ''insurgent'', ''paramilitary'', ''partisan'', or ''militant''.


The prefix ''pseudo-'' indicates that something is false or spurious. The suffix ''[[List of scandals with "-gate" suffix|-gate]]'' suggests the existence of a scandal. ''Controversial'' describes a heated, public, and usually prolonged dispute. Use these in articles only when they are widely used by reliable sources, and provide in-text attribution following [[Wikipedia:Verifiability]]. Ensure the article establishes that ''pseudo-'', ''-gate'', and ''controversial'' are appropriate. Make sure that their use does not give [[Wikipedia:Neutral point of view#Undue weight|undue weight]] to any viewpoint and that they are not used to promote [[Wikipedia:Fringe theories|fringe viewpoints]].
The prefix ''pseudo-'' indicates that something is false or spurious, which may be debatable. The suffix ''[[List of scandals with "-gate" suffix|-gate]]'' suggests the existence of a scandal. Use these in articles only when they are in wide use externally, with in-text attribution if in doubt. When using ''controversial'', give readers enough information to know what the controversy is about. Make sure, as well, that reliable sources establish the existence of a controversy, and that the term is not used to grant a [[Wikipedia:Fringe theories|fringe viewpoint]] undue weight.


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There are no forbidden words or expressions on Wikipedia, but certain expressions should be used with care, because they may introduce bias. Strive to eliminate expressions that are flattering, disparaging, vague, or clichéd, or that endorse a particular point of view.

The advice in this guideline is not limited to the examples provided and should not be applied rigidly. What matters is that articles should be well-written and consistent with the core content policies—Neutral point of view, No original research, and Verifiability. The guideline does not apply to quotations, which should be faithfully reproduced from the original sources; see the section on quotations in the main Manual of Style.

Words that may introduce bias

Puffery

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Words such as these are often used without attribution to promote the subject of an article, while neither imparting nor plainly summarizing verifiable information. They are known as "peacock terms" by Wikipedia contributors. Instead of making unprovable proclamations about a subject's importance, use facts and attribution to demonstrate that importance.

  • Peacock example:
  • Bob Dylan is the defining figure of the 1960s counterculture and the greatest songwriter of all time.
  • Just the facts:
  • Dylan was included in Time's 100: The Most Important People of the Century, where he was called "master poet, caustic social critic and intrepid, guiding spirit of the counterculture generation".[1] By the mid-1970s, his songs had already been covered by hundreds of other artists.[2]

Contentious labels

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Biased labels, particularly when the label is negative—such as calling an organization a cult, an individual a racist, or a sexual practice a perversion—are best avoided unless widely used by reliable sources to describe the subject, in which case use in-text attribution. Terrorist and freedom fighter can be especially contentious. If they are not in wide use by authoritative sources, use a more specific term such as bomber, gunman, hijacker, hostage taker, or kidnapper. If none of these apply, use a more neutral, general word such as insurgent, paramilitary, partisan, or militant.

The prefix pseudo- indicates that something is false or spurious, which may be debatable. The suffix -gate suggests the existence of a scandal. Use these in articles only when they are in wide use externally, with in-text attribution if in doubt. When using controversial, give readers enough information to know what the controversy is about. Make sure, as well, that reliable sources establish the existence of a controversy, and that the term is not used to grant a fringe viewpoint undue weight.

Unsupported attributions

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Phrases such as these present the appearance of support for statements but can deny the reader the opportunity to assess the source of the viewpoint. They are referred to as "weasel words" by Wikipedia contributors. They can pad out sentences without adding any useful information, and may disguise a biased view. Claims about what people say, think, feel, or believe, and what has been shown, demonstrated, or proven should be clearly attributed.[3]

Expressions of doubt

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Words such as supposed and purported can imply that a given point is inaccurate. Alleged and accused are appropriate when wrongdoing is asserted but undetermined, such as with people on trial for crimes. When alleged or accused are used, ensure that the source of the accusation is clear. So-called can mean commonly named, falsely named, or contentiously named, and it can be difficult to tell these apart. Simply called is preferable for the first meaning; detailed and attributed explanations are preferable for the others.

Editorializing

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The use of adverbs such as notably and interestingly, and phrases such as it should be noted, to highlight something as particularly significant without attributing that opinion should usually be avoided. Words such as fundamentally, essentially, and basically can indicate particular interpretative viewpoints, and thus should also be attributed in controversial cases. Clearly, obviously, naturally, and of course not only presume too much about the reader's knowledge and perspective, they are often excess verbiage. Wikipedia should not take a view as to whether an event was fortunate or not.

Synonyms for said

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Ensure that the way Wikipedia characterizes people's statements is neutral and accurate. Said, stated, wrote, and according to can be used neutrally in almost all contexts. Extra care is needed with more loaded terms. For example, to write that a person revealed, pointed out, exposed, or found something can imply that it is true, where a neutral account might preclude such an endorsement. To write that someone noted, observed, insisted, or surmised can suggest the degree of the speaker's carefulness, resoluteness, or access to evidence when that is unverifiable.

To write that someone claimed something can raise a question of the credibility of the claim, as the word emphasizes any potential contradiction. Similarly, be judicious in the use of admit, confess and deny, particularly of living people, because these verbs can convey guilt when that is not a settled matter.

Expressions that lack precision

Euphemisms

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The word died is neutral and accurate. Avoid euphemisms such as resting place. Likewise, have sex is neutral; the euphemism make love is presumptuous. Expressions such as collateral damage and ethnic cleansing mask violence in clinical terms.

Norms vary for expressions concerning disabilities and disabled persons. If a person has an affliction, or is afflicted, say just that; living with is a verbose softener. The goal is clear and direct expression without causing unnecessary offense. Do not assume that plain language is inappropriate.[4]

Clichés

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Clichés are generally to be avoided in favor of more directly informative expression. Lion's share is often misunderstood; instead use a term such as all, most, or two-thirds. The tip of the iceberg should be reserved for descriptions of icebergs; the small portion evident conveys the substance without gilding the lily. People in Wikipedia articles do not take the plunge, they simply do things.

Relative time references

Template:Quote box4 Prefer specific statements of time to general ones. Don't say, "Recently, public opinion has turned against Senator Smith." Instead say, "An April 2010 Gallup poll showed that Senator Smith's approval rating had dropped 7 percent since the start of the year." When material in an article may become out of date, follow the Wikipedia:As of guideline. Because seasons occur at various times around the world, consider instead using months or globally applicable terms as such mid-year unless the season itself is pertinent (spring blossoms, autumn harvest).

Neologisms and new compounds

Neologisms are expressions that have been coined recently. In most cases, they do not appear in general-interest dictionaries, though they may be used routinely within certain communities or professions. They should generally be avoided because their definitions tend to be unstable and many do not last. Where the use of a neologism is necessary to describe recent developments in a certain field, its meaning must be supported by reliable sources.

Adding common prefixes or suffixes such as pre-, post-, non–, anti-, or –like to existing words to create new compounds can aid brevity, but make sure the resulting terms are not misleading or offensive, and that they do not lend undue weight to a point of view. Adding –ism to a word, for instance, may suggest that a tenuous belief system is well established.

Vulgarities, obscenities, and profanities

Wikipedia is not censored and its encyclopedic mission encompasses the inclusion of material that may offend. Quoted words should appear as in the original source. But language that is vulgar, obscene, or profane should be used only if its omission would make the article less accurate or relevant, and there is no suitable alternative. Such words should not be used outside quotations except where they are themselves the topic.

See also

References

  1. ^ Cocks, Jay (June 14, 1999). "The Time 100: Bob Dylan". Time. Retrieved October 5, 2008. {{cite web}}: Italic or bold markup not allowed in: |publisher= (help)
  2. ^ Grossman, Lyod. A Social History of Rock Music: From the Greasers to Glitter Rock (McKay: 1976), p. 66.
  3. ^ The templates {{Who}}, {{Which}}, or {{By whom?}} are available if editors resist the removal of weasel words.
  4. ^ The National Federation of the Blind, for instance, opposes terms such as sightless in favor of the straightforward blind. Similarly, the group argues that there is no need to substitute awkward circumlocutions such as people with blindness for the plain phrase blind people; see Resolution 93-01, National Federation of the Blind, July 9, 1993, accessed April 26, 2010.